Okay guys here it is chapter 3 of the re-write, I would like to take this opportunity to say…PLEASE REVIEW I don't know whether what I am doing is good or not, I'm not psychic you know.
Disclaimers: I do not own Mass effect it is the property of Bioware and EA, some of the characters and Blacklight are from will hill's book series department 19, also certain characters are from the Hellsing franchise
Rise of the commonwealth re-write
Chapter 3
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Citadel Space
Star date: 7th July 2157
ARS: Destiny ascension
Matriarch Lithinia looked out the window at the swirling nebula surrounding the citadel and wondered not for the first time what secrets the galaxy still held, she had seen most things in career as a commando from pirate attacks, to Batarian slaver attacks, to even the odd Justicar funnily enough, she even had the opportunity to work with one a while back, what was her name… of yeah Samara that was it. She looked back to that mission and to the friend she had made, coming back to the present she turned her attention to the Citadel, she had heard the Batarians were asking the council for aid with something, fat chance for that she thought they've been a thorn in our side long enough her train of thought was brought to a screeching halt as alarms blared through the bridge, she looked through the window as a flash of blue light flooded an area of the nebula and when it faded sitting there was a 5 kilometer ship.
Stunned into silence the crew was left staring at the behemoth that had just appeared right next to the citadel without the aid of the mass relays, they were speechless suddenly a voice blared through the speakers of the ship.
"This is Operator Alexander Anderson of the Terran commonwealth, we are here escorting ambassadors to see the citadel council, please respond." There was silence as what was said came through in perfect Thessian, How do these people know our languages?
"MA'M the Turian dreadnought Ancestors pride is powering weapons" her blood ran cold, she had to diffuse the situation or they could have another war on their hands, with a species that can make 5 kilometer ships.
"Hail them, this is Matriarch Lithinia to the captain of Ancestors pride power down weapons, if you fail to comply we will blast your ship to pieces" there was a tense second then the Turian dreadnoughts weapons went cold, thank the goddess.
"Get me a line to that…ship" a few seconds passed and then she was looking at the alien that had spoke and she and the rest of the crew gasped in shock, they look just like Asari finally composing herself she spoke. "This is Matriarch Lithinia of the Destiny ascension to… whatever ship you are, we read you" the Asari like being made a grunting sound that sounded like a laugh.
"We read you Destiny ascension, my name is operator Anderson of the Terran Commonwealth, we are on a diplomatic mission to open relations between our nation and the citadel council, and for future reference this ship is called the CWS Earths last resort." The Matriarch felt a shiver run up her spine, Last resort, why did they call a ship that?" that was a thought for another time though.
"Get me a line to the council they need to hear this."
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Council Space
Star date: 7th July 2157
Council chambers
Tevos had a growing head ache, they had been listening to this pompous fool of a Batarian rant about the need for their aid in a military dispute with someone who they would name for the past hour, in all honesty Tevos suspected that it was a new Terminus warlord that had grown powerful enough to challenge the Batarians influence in the Terminus systems.
"… this organization has killed citizens of the Hegemony and by extension citizens of the citadel council, we demand action be taken."
"I'm sorry we cannot interfere in an internal affair, unless you tell us who they are then we may deliberate It." replied Sparatus
"I cannot divulge this information for security reasons…" his protests were cut off as a young Asari ran into the room
"Councilors… we have…a… situation" she said in between ragged breaths
"Please take a breath and explain the situation" said Tevos calmly.
"Yes councilor" the Asari breathed deeply then looked at the councilor, concern in her eyes. "An unidentified species has come to the citadel in a 5 kilometer ship and is asking to open diplomatic talks with you." The councilors looked at each other, they were all concerned by these changes, the Batarian ambassador bristled as he suspected who was on board the ship.
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Council space
Star Date: 7th July 2157
Dropship en-route to citadel
Operator Alexander Anderson inspected his bayonets and checked the power cell in the handle, when it was activated it would power up a plasma projector which would coat the blade in searing hot plasma, helping it cut through almost anything. He holstered the weapon and turned his attention back to the other occupants, there were 3 other Blacklight operators as well as the ambassador, the Blacklight were easily identifiable by their trench coats over their reinforced grey battle BDUs and the sleek black helmet with its crimson visor covering their faces completely. They were deeply menacing and had sent many men scurrying away when they saw the crimson visors and grey trench coats.
A resounding thud sounded throughout the drop ship as it touched down on their designated landing zone. They stood up as the ambassador gathered herself, Anderson had to hand it to her Hannah Shepard was looking remarkably calm. He had heard about Hannah Shepard and the Shepard twins multiple times, there was Hannah Shepard who was a brilliant politician who people actually liked because of the fact that she actually did listen and pay attention to what the public thought, Marcus Shepard was a Blacklight operator himself and was extremely proficient at his Job, and Captain Jessica Shepard, Captain of the CWS Earths last resort they were both extremely capable and well respected in their respective branches of the military.
As they exited the Dropship they were greeted by a host of c-sec and specters waiting for them they observed the collection of beings exiting the shuttle with interest, and more than a little fear when it came to the Blacklight operators, one of them stepped forward, an Asari, and spoke to them.
"Welcome to the citadel, my name is IlyanaT'lotis me and my comrades have been tasked with bringing you to the council" Anderson nodded in understanding then looked at her.
"My name is operator Alexander Anderson, head of the Blacklight division, with me are my three Blacklight subordinates, you don't need to know their names, and our ambassador Hannah Shepard." Ilyana nodded and then motioned them to follow her and the group of specters, after a five minute walk and ten minutes in an agonizingly slow elevator, the group came to the citadel council chambers. Standing before them were the councilors representing each of the 'big three' races, Tevos of the Asari, Irelith of the Salarians and Sparatus of the Turians. Anderson joined Hannah on the podium while the rest of the entourage waited at the bottom of the short flight of stairs leading up to the podium.
"Greetings representatives of humanity, we are the citadel council my name is…" Hannah held her hand up
"With all due respect councilors we know who you are and who he is" indicating the fuming Batarian Ambassador near her.
"You filthy creatures dare to come to the citadel and try to…to…to"
"Please stop your rambling, it is most undignified" spluttering in fury the Batarian ambassador went to argue but Tevos intervened "Please be quiet Jaratoh, this does not help your case" Jaratoh mumbled but kept queit, Turing back to Hannah she continued "sorry ambassador continue please" Hannah thanked her the continued.
"Councilors we stand before you to introduce ourselves peacefully to you and to ask something of you" The councilors exchanged quizzical looks.
"What would you like to ask" inquired Sparatus
"We would like the citadel council to remain a neutral party in the upcoming war between the Terran commonwealth and the Batarian Hegemony." The councilors looked at each other and something unspoken passed between them.
The humans were about to declare war with an associate species, while they could not interfere in such events they could attempt to bring both sides to the negotiating table, and help mediate a peace between them. But before that they needed details, people generally don't declare war against another people without reason.
"Yes… we would consider it, depending on your reasons for such a request." Hannah smiled and looked at the councilors I'll have those Batarian bastards hovering over a barrel now "we have reason to believe and evidence in ships logs to prove it, that Batarians funded by the Hegemony opened a dormant relay to try to find new races to enslave" The council went deathly silent, then turned very slowly in unison to Jaratoh, looks of indignant fury on their faces.
The Batarian ambassador squirmed under their combined stares and looked at the Human ambassador, glaring deadly daggers at her and then, like a switch had been thrown, the shouting started.
"THEY DID WHAT?" cried the councilors their voices quaking with fear and rage
"As I said councilors, the Batarians activated a mass relay to find new slave labor" Sparatus whirled on the Jaratoh.
"Explain yourself NOW!" he demanded, the Batarian gave Hannah one last glare before addressing the councilors.
"We have received reports of pirates activating…"
"Bullshit" cried Anderson his face red with anger "We have detailed documents detailing their orders and who they were given by, your government sent through the relay to by all means enslave our races!" Jaratoh looked ready to reply but was silenced by an icy voice
"Please that is enough" suddenly a hologram materialized on the pedestal, it was of a young woman wearing a dark olive suit with long blonde hair and an icy stare fixed on the man Batarian in front of her.
"Sir Integra, I'm so sorry ma'm we had no idea you would make an appearance"
"I believed it best for the Batarians to realize who they are dealing with in the coming war" Tevos interrupted her.
"Please there is no reason for war, yes the Batarians will be punished but war is…"
"Tevos have you been asleep…THEY OPENED A RELAY!" cried Sparatus "as far as I'm concerned we should join this war on the Human's side."
"I concur" announced Irelith "The Batarians have gone too far this time, they need to be taught a lesson" Jaratoh was growing paler and paler.
"We can discuss this later, first let us discuss something with the Humans, please could everyone but the Human entourage leave the council chambers" everyone picked up the subtle command and left.
"We thank you Humans for bringing this to our attention, but war is…"
"A necessary step Tevos"
"Sparatus we cannot just rush into war hot headedly"
"How else are they going to learn?"
"With monetary fines and…"
"No" the voice silenced the room instantly.
"We demand that either the council remain neutral in the coming war with the Batarians, or they aid us" Sir Integra looked calmly between the councilors.
"I'm afraid that…"
"No Tevos, the Batarians must be taught a lesson, I propose a vote for immediate military action against the Batarian Hegemony" Sparatus said in a commanding tone, the votes were cast, 2 for war 1 against.
"It is settled then, a state of war now exists between the council races and the Batarian Hegemony"
"Then the Asari republics will not take part in this, we do not wish to see our forces wasted in a needless war."
"Very well Tevos, now… Sir Integra is it? Would your race like to join the council races" Integra smiled slightly
"We would like documents detailing everything this would entail, and we will have a response hopefully by the end of the war"
"But the war could last year's" said Irelith, laughter burst from each of the Blacklight operators
"The war will most certainly not last that long, with the aid you have promised us, we should have it wrapped up in a few months time" said Anderson still chuckling slightly
"Why is that?" questioned Sparatus
"Wait and see councilor, wait and see."
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Council space
Star date: 7th July 2157
Councilor Tevos's private room
Tevos felt like her head was pounding, she couldn't those hot headed fools, rushing blindly into a war that wasn't needed; she looked longingly at the empty bottle of Thessian brandy, wishing it was full again.
After the council meeting she had informed the Matriarchs of the events of the meeting, and her decision to not involve the Asari republics, the Matriarchs were divided but most agreed she had made the right choice. What worried her most was the Humans they were an unknown, not even the Salarian STG had got anything on them and that scared her, but she was also angry with them, they had come in and disturbed the status quo that the Asari had become used to, but they would deal with them when they became a council race for now she would let them break their primitive military against the Batarians, they may be able to build 5 kilometer ships, but size isn't everything.
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Commonwealth space
Star date: 7th July 2157
High Parliament chambers
4 of the 5 members of the high parliament had come together to discuss the events of the council meeting.
"Well that went better than expected" said a man in an Admirals uniform
"Agreed but we must be cautious because today's ally could be tomorrows enemy" said another man in a generals uniform
"Surely you can't be that pessimistic" said a woman in formal suit
"He has every right to be, they want to make us a council race, and from what I've read that is not going to happen" said a digital man
"No Brigadier General Williams is right they will turn on us at the slightest sign of trouble"
"So what do you suggest Admiral Hackett"
"Well Miss Chung what I suggest is that we only expose a fraction of our forces, let the council do the majority of the fighting, then when if they were do declare war on us we would most likely have a technological and numerical advantage, allowing us to easily deal with the Turians, and with them defeated that's the bulk of their military might gone."
"You are a devious man Hackett"
"Why thank you Ulysses" the doors opened behind them and in walked one of the people from the council meeting
"Good evening I trust you are up to speed" inquired Sir Integra Fairbrooks Wingates Hellsing
"Yes ma'm, we even have a plan that, should the council races declare war on us, give us an advantage over them"
"very good, I leave the planning and deployment up to you" and with that the Prime minister of the Terran commonwealth left the room.
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Codex entry: Human army Infantry
The human army is a highly trained and dedicated armed force which serves the commonwealth it has a total of 12,753,927 service men and women of which all of these have undergone basic training including mandatory rifle training, these soldiers are divided amongst the following:
Task force=1,000,000 (at the most)
Sub sections= 100,000 (at most)
Divisions= 10,000 (at most)
Regiment= 5,000 (at most)
Battalions= 1,000 (at most)
Platoons= 100 (at most)
Fire team= 10 (at most)
Squad= 5 (at most)
The average rifle in use by the Human military is the LA2150A8 or A8 for short it has the same basic design as the 21st century SA-80 except the barrel is lined with magnetic coils which accelerate a solid slug to speeds exceeding 1,750m/s, the average magazine can hold 36 rounds before needing to be reloaded, the barrel is cooled by a cry coolant system built into the body of the weapon.
For fire support they use the LA2150S9 which is a LMG version of the A8, it has a larger barrel and stock with a grip on the front of the weapon, the average magazine can hold 350 rounds.
For anti-armor purposes they use the LA2153AT6 which is a light weight disposable rocket launcher that can be compacted, to reduce space, this fires a plasma headed rocket at its target, it poses an inbuilt guidance and IFF (identify friend/foe) system. This weapon has been the bane of armor used by all anti commonwealth rebellions since its inception in 2153.
The average armor used by the Human infantry is a BDU made of a combination reinforced carbon nano fibers, metal plating and special plastics, they have been known to protect a user from multiple gunshot wounds, on the same spot, without the wearer suffering so much as a bruise, they also have built in shield emitters that project a plasma shield around the wearer, as well as the BDU they have their webbing which contains all their ammo and a rechargeable power pack for their shield emitters which plugs into the BDU in the chest area where the armor and shielding is thickest.
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So yeah guys that chapter 3 next codex will be about the vehicles and again PLEASE REVIEW