[A/N: Okay, I'm just gonna say this straight forward, because there's no other way to say this, but...STOP SENDING MEAN COMMENTS! I hate those, I hate being judged, and FYI, I'm not a novelist or a writer, I'm just a 'what if' fanfic writer here who loves cartoons and reading my favorite books all the time! How do you think I feel when people say 'Do your own plot' 'Do something original' or 'I'm not reading something that's the same plot'? Well, have any of you seen most of the stories? Because most of them aren't that original either. If you don't like this story, DON'T READ IT and DON'T REVIEW RUDELY TO ME! Is that too much to ask for, because I understand not everyone's going to like this, but seriously? Say publicly that you don't like it? How do you think other authors would feel when you post reviews negatively? It hurts them, it discourages them, and you get the point! If I hear another comment like those, I'm gonna ignore them and keep going for the people who already favored and followed this, so there; good luck trying to stop me to those who hate my stories, but it won't work as easy as you think.]
[PS: Sorry about that note to the people who love this, here's Chapter 4! Enjoy!]
Chapter 4
My Mother Teaches Me Bullfighting
We tore through the night along dark country roads. Wind slammed against the Camaro. Rain lashed the windshield. I didn't know how my mom could see anything, but she kept her foot on the gas.
Every time there was a flash of lightning, I looked at Gretel sitting next to me in the backseat and I wondered if I'd gone insane, or if she was bombarded by a pressurized green spray paint can, even her amber hair had several green streaks as thick as my own. But, no, the smell was one I remembered from kindergarten field trips to the parks and the freshness of spring trees.
All I could think to say was, "So, you and my mom...know each other?"
Gretel's eyes fitted to the rearview mirror, though there were no cars behind us. "Not exactly," she said. "I mean, we've never met in person. But she knew I was watching you."
"Watching me?"
"Keeping tabs on you. Making sure you were okay. But I wasn't faking being your friend," she added hastily. "I am your friend."
"Um...what are you, exactly?"
"That doesn't matter right now."
"It doesn't matter? From look of your skin and your clothes, you look like you've been living in a junk—"
"Don't say that!"
"What?"
"There are other nymphs who would give you a rough time by trashing your house for saying such an insult!"
"Whoa. Wait. Nymphs? You mean like...Mr. Brunner's myths?"
"Were those old ladies at the fruit stand a myth, Perci? Was Mrs. Dodds a myth?"
"So you admit there was a Mrs. Dodds!"
"Of course."
"Then why—"
"The less you knew, the fewer monsters you'd attract," Gretel said, like that should be perfectly obvious. "We put Mist over the humans' eyes. We hoped you'd think the Kindly One was a hallucination. But it was no good. You started to realize who you are."
"Who I—wait a minute, what do you mean?"
The weird bellowing noise rose up again somewhere behind us, closer than before. Whatever was chasing us was still on our tail.
"Perci," my mom said. "There's too much to explain and not enough time. We have to get you to safety."
"Safety from what? Who's after me?"
"Oh, nobody much," Gretel said, obviously still miffed about the dressed-like-junk comment. "Just the Lord of the Dead and a few of his blood-thirstiest minions."
"Gretel!"
"Sorry, Ms. Jackson. Could you drive faster, please?"
I tried to wrap my mind around what was happening, but I couldn't do it. I knew this wasn't a dream. I had no imagination. I could never dream up something this weird.
My mom made a hard left. We swerved onto a narrower road, racing past darkened farmhouses and wooded hills and PICK YOUR OWN STRAWBERRIES signs on white picket fences.
"Where are we going?" I asked.
"The summer camp I told you about." My mother's voice was tight; she was trying for my sake not to be scared. "The place your father wanted to send you."
"The place you didn't want me to go?"
"Please, dear," my mother begged. "This is hard enough. Try to understand. You're in danger."
"Because some old ladies cut yarn?"
"Those weren't old ladies," Gretel said. "Those were the Fates. Do you know what it means—the fact they appeared in front of you? They only do that when you're about to...when someone's about to die."
"Whoa. You said 'you.'"
"No I didn't. I said 'someone.'"
"You meant 'you.' As in me."
"I meant you, like 'someone.' Not you, you."
"Girls!" My mom said.
She pulled the wheel hard to the right, and I got a glimpse of a figure she'd swerved to avoid—a dark fluttering shape now lost behind us in the storm.
"What was that?" I asked.
"We're almost there," my mother said, ignoring my question. "Another mile. Please. Please. Please."
I didn't know where there was, but I found myself leaning forward in the car, anticipating, wanting us to arrive.
Outside, nothing but rain and darkness—the kind of empty countryside you get way out on the tip of Long Island. I thought about Mrs. Dodds and the moment when she'd changed into the thing with pointed teeth and leathery wings. My limbs went numb from delayed shock. She really hadn't been human. She'd meant to kill me.
Then I thought about Mr. Brunner...and the sword he had thrown me. Before I could ask Gretel about that, the hair rose on the back of my neck. There was a blinding flash, a jaw-rattling boom!, and our car exploded.
I remember feeling weightless, like I was being crushed, fired, and hosed down all at the same time.
I peeled my forehead off the back of the driver's seat and said, "Ow."
"Perci!" My mom shouted.
"I'm okay…"
I tried to shake off the daze. I wasn't dead. The car hadn't really exploded. We'd swerved into a ditch. Our driver's-side doors were wedged in the mud. The roof had cracked open like an eggshell and rain was pouring in.
Lightning. That was the only explanation. We'd been blasted right off the road. Next to me in the backseat was a big motionless green lump. "Gretel!"
She was slumped over, green blood trickled from the side of her lip. I shook her by her shoulders, thinking, No! Even if you look like someone from the wilderness, you're my best friend and I don't want you to die!
Then she groaned and I knew there was hope.
"Perci," my mother said. "We have to…" Her voice faltered.
I looked back. In a flash of lightning, through the mud-spattered rear windshield, I saw a figure lumping toward us on the shoulder road. The sight of it make my skin crawl. It was a dark silhouette of a huge guy, like a football player. He seemed to be holding a blanket over his head. His top half as bulky and fuzzy. His upraised hands made it look like he had horns.
I swallowed hard. "Who is—"
"Perci," my mother said, deadly serious. "Get out of the car."
My mother threw herself against the driver's-side door. It was jammed shut in the mud. I tried mine. Stuck too. I looked up desperately at the hole in the roof. It might've been an exit, but the edges were sizzling and smoking.
"Climb out the passenger's side!" My mother told me. "Perci—you have to run. Do you see that big tree?"
"What?"
Another flash of lightning, and through the smoking hole in the roof I saw the tree she meant: a huge, White House Christmas tree-sized pine at the crest of the nearest hill.
"That's the property line," my mom said. "Get over that hill and you'll see a big farmhouse down in the valley. Run and don't look back. Yell for help. Don't stop until you reach the door."
"Mom, you're coming too."
Her face was pale, her eyes as sad as when she looked at the ocean.
"No!" I shouted. "You are coming with me. Help me carry Gretel."
Gretel moaned a little louder.
The man with the blanket on his head kept coming toward us, making his grunting, snorting noises. As he got closer, I realized he couldn't be holding a blanket over his head, because his hands—huge meaty hands—were swinging at his sides. There was no blanket. Meaning the bulky, fuzzy mass that was too big to be his head...was his head. And the points that looked like horns…
"He doesn't want us," my mother told me. "He wants you. Besides, I can't cross the property line."
"But…"
"We don't have time, Perci. Go. Please."
I got mad, then—mad at my mother, at Gretel the nature girl, at the thing with horns that was lumbering towards us slowly and deliberately like, like a bull.
I climbed across Gretel and pushed the door open into the rain. "We're going together. Come on, Mom."
"I told you—"
"Mom! I'm not leaving you. Help me with Gretel."
I didn't wait for an answer. I scrambled outside, dragging Gretel out of the car. She was surprisingly light, but I couldn't have carried her very far if my mom hadn't come to my aid.
Together, we dragged Gretel's arms over our shoulders and started stumbling uphill through the wet waist-high grass.
Glancing back, I got my first clear look at the monster. He was seven feet tall, easy, his arms and legs like something from the cover of Muscle Man magazine—bulging biceps and triceps and a bunch of other 'ceps, all stuffed like baseballs under vein-webbed skin. He wore no clothes except underwear—I mean a loin cloth the size of a bear's pelt. The top half of his body was more scary than his bottom. Coarse brown hair started at about his belly-button and got thicker as it reached his shoulders.
His neck was a mass of muscles and fur leading up to his enormous head, which had a snout as long as my arm, snotty nostrils with a gleaming brass ring, cruel black eyes, and horns—enormous black-and-white horns with points you couldn't get from an electric sharpener.
I recognized the monster, alright. He had been in one of the first stories Mr. Brunner told us. But he couldn't be real.
I blinked the rain out of my eyes. "That's—"
"Pasiphae's son," my mother said. "I wish I'd known how badly they want to kill you."
"But he's the Min—"
"Don't say his name," she warned. "Names have power."
The pine tree was still way too far—a hundred yards uphill at least.
I glanced behind me again.
The bull-man hunched over our car, looking in the windows—or not looking, exactly. More like snuffling, nuzzling. I wasn't sure why he bothered, since we were only about fifty feet away.
Gretel moaned again.
"Shhh," I told her. "Mom, what's he doing? Doesn't he see us?"
"His sight and hearing are terrible," she said. "He goes by smell. But he'll figure out where we are soon enough."
As if on cue, the bull-man bellowed in rage. He picked up Gabe's Camaro by the torn roof, the chassis creaking and groaning. He raised the car over his head and threw it down the road. It slammed into the wet asphalt and skidded in a shower of sparks for about half a mile before coming to a stop. The gas tank exploded.
Not a scratch, I remembered Gabe saying.
Oops.
"Perci," my mom said. "When he see us, he'll charge. Wait until the last second, then jump out of the way—directly sideways. He can't change directions very well once he's charging. Do you understand?"
"How do you know all this?"
"I've been worried about an attack for a long time. I should have expected this. I was selfish, keeping you near me."
"Keeping me near you? But—"
Another bellow of rage, and the bull-man started tromping uphill.
He'd smelled us.
The pine tree was only a few more yards, but the hill was getting steeper and slicker, and Gretel wasn't getting any lighter.
The bull-man closed in. Another few seconds and he'd be on top of us.
My mother must've been exhausted, but she shouldered Gretel. "Go, Perci! Separate! Remember what I said."
I didn't want to split up, but I had a feeling she was right—it was our only chance. I sprinted to the left, turned, and saw the creature bearing down on me. His black eyes glowed with hate. He reeked like rotten meat.
He lowered his head and charged, those razor-sharp horns aimed straight at my chest.
The fear in my stomach made me want to bolt, but that wouldn't work. I could never outrun this thing. So I held my ground, and at the last moment, I jumped to the side.
The bull-man stormed past like a freight train, then bellowed with frustration and turned, but not toward me this time, toward my mother, who was setting Gretel down in the grass.
We'd reach the crest of the hill. Down the other side I could see a valley, just as my mother has said, and the lights of a farmhouse glowing yellow through the rain. But that was half a mile away. We'd never make it.
The bull-man grunted, pawing the ground. He kept eyeing my mother, who was now retreating slowly downhill, back toward the road, trying to lead the monster away from Gretel.
"Run, Perci!" She told me. "I can't go any farther. Run!"
But I just stood there, frozen in fear, as the monster charged her. She tried to sidestep, as she'd told me to do, but the monster had learned his lesson. His hand shot out and grabbed her by the neck as she tried to get away. He lifted her as she struggled, kicking and pummeling the air.
"Mom!"
She caught my eyes, managed to choke out one last word: "Go!"
Then, with an angry roar, the monster closed his fists around my mother's neck, and she dissolved before my eyes, melting into light, a shimmering golden form, as if she were a holographic projection. A blinding flash, and she was simply...gone.
"No!"
Anger replaced my fear. Newfound strength burned in my limbs—the same rush of energy I'd gotten when Mrs. Dodds grew talons.
The bull-man bore down on Gretel, who lay helpless in the grass. The monster hunched over, snuffling my best friend, as if he were about to lift Gretel up and make her dissolve too.
I couldn't allow that.
I stripped off my red rain jacket.
"Hey!" I screamed, waving the jacket, running to one side of the monster. "Hey, stupid! Ground beef!"
"Raaaarrrrr!" The monster turned toward me, shaking his meaty fists.
I had an idea—a stupid idea, but better than no idea at all. I put my back to the pine tree and waved my red jacket in front of the bull-man, thinking I'd jump out of the way at the last moment.
But it didn't happen like that.
The bull-man charged too fast, his arms out to grab me whichever way I tried to dodge.
Time slowed down.
My legs tensed. I couldn't jump sideways, so I leaped straight up, kicking off the creature's head, using it as a springboard, turning in midair, and landing on his neck.
How did I do that? I didn't have time to figure it out. A millisecond later, the monster's head slammed into the tree and the impact nearly knocked my teeth out.
The bull-man staggered around, trying to shake me. I locked my arms around his horns to keep from being thrown. Thunder and lightning were still going strong. The rain was in my eyes. The smell of rotten meat burned my nostrils.
The monster shook himself around and bucked like a rodeo bull. He should have just backed up into the tree and smashed me flat, but I started to realize that this thing had only one gear: forward.
Meanwhile, Gretel started groaning in the grass. I wanted to yell at her to shut up, but the way I was getting tossed around, if I opened my mouth I'd bite my own tongue off.
The bull-man wheeled toward her, pawed the ground again, and got ready to charge. I thought about how he had squeezed the life out of my mother, made her disappear in a flash of light, and rage filled me like high-octane fuel. I got both hands around one horn and I pulled backward with all my might. The monster tensed, gave a surprised grunt, then—snap!
The bull-man screamed and flung me through the air. I landed flat on my back in the grass. My head smacked against a rock. When I sat up, my vision was blurry, but I had a horn in my hands, a ragged bone weapon the size of a knife.
The monster charged.
Without thinking, I rolled to one side and came up kneeling. As the monster barreled past, I drove the broken horn straight into his side, right up under his furry rib cage.
The bull-man roared in agony. He failed, clawing at his chest, then began to disintegrate—not like my mother, in a flash of golden light, but like crumbling sand, blown away in chunks by the wind, the same way Mrs. Dodds had burst apart.
The monster was gone.
The rain had stopped. The storm still rumbled, but only in the distance. I smelled like livestock and my knees were shaking and my wet hair was stuck on my face. My head felt like it was spitting open. I was weak and scared and trembling with grief. I'd just seen my mother vanish. I wanted to lie down and cry, but there was Gretel, needing my help, so I managed to haul her up and staggered down into the valley, toward the lights of the farmhouse. I was crying, calling for my mother, but I held onto Gretel—I wasn't going to let her go.
The last thing I remember is collapsing on a wooden porch, looking up at a ceiling fan circling above me, moths flying around a yellow light, and the stern faces of a familiar-looking bearded man and a handsome boy, his blonde hair on the side of his head like bangs. They both looked down at me, and the boy said, "She's the one. She must be."
"Silence, Anthony," the man said. "She's still conscious. Bring her inside."
