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KAMEN RIDER GAIM:THE ORANGE HUNTER S2
MISSION 2: THE DESTRUCTION ON STAGE OF YAMI!
Nao was in a garden as he was watering a certain flower. He looked at the flower with a smile and touched it. "Myosotis aka the Forget-me-not huh? These flowers are really interesting..." As a flashback of someone's words was heard by him.
"They maybe gone but as long as you hold on to their memories they will never be truly gone." A girl with purple hair said to Nao in his flashback.
Nao was then back to reality as he turned around. A person was standing there in a lab coat. This person appeared to be Jin the person which Ruby met before.
"You sure have Grown.. Son.." Jin said with a smile as Nao turned to him with a chuckle.
"Didn't expect to see you here so early in the battle old man." As Jin smiled at the young boys reply.
Jin walked towards Nao as they were both facing each other. "Noa.. iie Nao right? You go by your nickname now don't you?" Jin asked.
Nao replied with an agitated look. "Kimaji Noayama died when Sachiko and Kiriha was murdered." Jin despite the look only smiled at the young man.
"I'm sure you have many questions... But time will tell besides.. Your bound to remember eventually." Jin advised as he took out a Genesis Core as well as a Lemon Lockseed and gave it to Nao.
"You might need this for your next battle son." Jin said as Nao reluctantly took them. Jin then walked his opposite way but stopped at the last minute.
"I'm sorry for getting you involve into this Nao. I never wanted this for you... Any of it." Was the words that Jin said.
"I have every right to try and beat you up right now... But I know there's a reason this is happening to me and my friends. Because of that we shall look for that secret together." Nao said confidently at Jin as he kept the two items aside.
"Well good luck son, may you find the answers you seek." Jin said as a crack appeared in front of him as he entered it.
Nao then went back to his dorm room as a figure was looking him go from behind.
It was class time today but thanks to the special privileges Team NYAX had they were preparing for their recon mission. Nao thought it be a good idea for him to upgrade his friends weapons.
"Man can't believe were skipping Prof Poop's class I would've died listing to his childhood stories." Alcor commented as Nao was busy at his work station and tricking out his Intercepter.
Nao then walked out to Alcor as he handed him his weapon. "I fixed the recoil of the bow now you should be able to use dust based arrow attacks." As he pressed a button one of his blades as it turned into a bow he then turned it back into a sword as the sword tip launch and stuck itself to the wall. "I also added a grappling hook to them." Alcor looked at his weapon as he stared at it.
"Me likey..." He said awed as he swung it around for a little bit.
"So what about my old Retractable Spear? Did you just ad another tip to it? He he I'm joking" Yuto said as he looked to Nao. Nao then took out a Staff the Size of the Musou saber.
"Yes I did but instead of Damascus Steel for the blade part I replaced them with plasma." Nao said as both ends of the staff made it longer as a plasma sword appeared on both ends. Nao then threw it in the sky as they spilt into two parts making them two separate weapons.
"You can also split it into two." Nao then retracted the weapon and gave it to Yuto.
"Sweet Christmas..." As he looked at how powerful his weapon had become. "From this day I dub you Plasma Baron."
"Ohhh do I get something cool?!" Xalte looked excited as Nao smiled, he then took out what to be a modified 50 caliber sniper rifle.
"This boy here is a sniper rifle capable of using thermal scope, night vision mode an automatic targeting system Ultra Violet rays and etc all at the same time. Xalte gaped at this. "This baby also loads any kind of dust based ammunition and can pierced to any kind of solid surface. Rocks, Walls, steel you name it and it nails it." Nao then pulled the back side of the sniper rifle as the extended Barrel was pulled back and it appeared as a machine gun.
"I know you prefer to fight face to face with them so I made a Rapid Fire mode as well as a shotgun mode for it." Nao then shot at a Grimm dummy as multiple bullets destroyed it completely leaving only the head. Nao then pulled back then scope as a click could be heard. He then shot it as the head was completely destroyed along with the wall behind it covered in bullets.
"I name it the X Caliber." Nao then gave weapon to Xalte.
"Were gonna blow up some heads X Caliber... Hehehe" as he smiled with excitement.
Nao then walked towards his Grimm Arc as it was still charging. He sighed at this. Axel was there the whole time looking at all the weapons he made.
"Nao sorry to ask but how and when did you learn to make all this?" As the tree members of NYAX heard what he said and listened in.
"I payed attention in class, I also look it up online." As he showed his notebook filled with so many complicated note's. The four looked very surprised by this.
Yuto then walked up to him. "Nao what are you the Ultimate Genius?!" Yuto asked.
Nao simply shook his head. "I'm the Ultimate Singer." As he walked past him.
"How can a singer make all this?" Alcor said as he looked at his and everyones weapons.
Axel then looked like he remembered something. "Oh that reminds me did you do your make up homework from last time?" As all three members of NYAX froze at this. "You didn't right?" Axel sighed at this as he straighten his collar "WELL WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR? IM NOT LETTING YOU OUT ON THE MISSION UNTIL YOU FINISH YOUR HOMEWORK!" As all three members ran away to complete their homework. Raiden and Frederick the only ones with no weapon upgrades sweat dropped at this.
Later that night..
The Armored Riders were getting ready for their recon mission aboard their VTOL as they were getting ready in the sky's. As Frederick wore a White Fang Uniform that they acquired along with a camera implanted Grimm mask Alcor wore his normal clothes with A camera implanted Grimm mask and Cat ears.
"Alright These cat ears should let me to hear whatever you hearing." Nao explained as Alcor nodded.
"So we just check and see if Roman is Really involve with the white fang?" Alcor asked as Nao nodded.
"If possible we would like to know why, so stay incognito for as much as time that you can." Nao then turned to Raiden and Frederick.
"I really appreciate for your help in finding the White Fang meeting here tonight." Raiden and Frederick smiled at this.
"Don't mention it at least were not being treated like cannon fodder." Frederick grinned as Raiden nodded.
"Fredrick You will be providing Support for Alcor if anything comes up you need to get outta there." Frederick nodded.
"Raiden I need you to pilot the ship since Alcor will be busy with the infiltration." Raiden nodded as he headed towards the pilot seat.
Nao then hold his ear piece. "Yuto Xalte is the perimeter clear?" As we then see Xalte an Alcor right above a rooftop staring down at the warehouse right next to them.
"So far the enemy hasn't seen us yet. Xalte how many hostiles are there?" Yuto asked as Xalte looked at his scope with his thermal sights.
"Its a small army along with the new recruits." Was Xalte reply as the scene shifted back to Nao. The Doors opened as Frederick Jumped out with a parachute and landed directly on the rooftop of the Factory as he infiltrated it from above. Alcor looked down and saw the new recruits entering the factory.
"Remind me again why I have to wear a Grimm mask?" Alcor asked as Raiden answered him.
"Humanity wanted to make monster outta my kin so the white fang choose to down the faces of monsters."
"Woah that's dark raiden."
"And I'm guessing so does the guys that made it. Your clear to jump Alcor." As Alcor jumped down with a dive. He pulled out his Intercepter and activated his grapple mode and grappled his way down safely. Alcor took cover behind a wall as he casual entered the warehouse and was greeted by the bouncer.
He then entered the room as it was filled with white fang members with a giant curtain with the white fang mark hiding something behind it. "Seeing what I'm seeing Nao?" He whispered as on a terminal in the VTOL Nao responded.
"This isn't just some terrorist group anymore their building an army." Nao commented as Frederick who was already disguised as a guard looked from above.
"Seems like it's a full house tonight." Frederick commented as he looked around from his position. Alcor was busy looking at all the members present from far behind to avoid attention.
"Thank you all for coming, for those of you who are joining us for the first time tonight. Allow me to introduce a very special comrade of ours." A White Fang Captain appeared as he said. Both Frederick and Alcor turned to look and it was Torchwick.
"Target confirmed, Torchwick is here." Frederick whispered. From the rooftop across the building with the white fang members Xalte had already locked on to the man.
"I got him in my sights." Was Xalte's reply as Yuto nodded at this.
"Affirmative let's see what Torchwick has to say for us." Nao said as he was looking through the views of Alcor and Frederick.
"Thank you, thank you! Please, hold your applause." Torchwick greeted everyone as cheers or shouts could be heard. A girl then appeared out of the curtain she had a very strange hair with the color of the Neapolitan ice cream. But because the distance they couldn't tell what more features she had.
"What's a human doing here!" One of the white fang members shouted.
"I'm glad you asked dearie." Torchwick replied with a smile. "Now I'll be the first to admit, humans are the WORST." He explained "Case in point. So I understand why you would love to see us all locked away or, better yet: killed!" He continued.
"Man this guy is good at conversation's." Alcor whispered to Nao. Nao noted from his place as he ate a muffin.
"... Would like to mention that you and I ALL have a common enemy." Torchwick continued when the team wasn't listening. "The ones in control, the people pulling the string's. The dirty rotten humans that run our kingdom." Torchwick explained.
"What do you think his playing at?" Xalte asked as Nao answered.
"I dunno but I want to know."
Torchwick then continued his rather long speech. "Government, Military. Even the schools. They're all to blame for your lot in life." As cheers could be heard as Alcor and Frederick grunted at this.
"And their all pests that need to be dealt with." Torchwick then smiled. "Fortunately, I'm the best exterminator around." As cheers could be heard. Alcor narrowed his eyes.
"I don't like where this is going Nao." Alcor whispered to his earpiece.
"Just keep quiet and try not to blow your cover." Urged Nao as Alcor responded with a grunt.
"No offense to any rodents in the room." Torchwick then snapped his fingers as the curtain went down and revealed it a giant robot suit behind it. The White Fang Mark could be seen on the side of the mech.
"No way, its.. Its the Atlesian Paladin - 290 Protoype that I designed..." Alcor said with shock. Frederick was surprised but he didn't wanna avert any attention as he asked.
"You design this?"
"Well kind of, I only designed the management of the weapons for the Atlas military to use. How the hell did Torchwick get his hands on this! This is bad." Alcor said panicked, thanks to the cheers of shock Alcor was not heard.
"Keep your head in the game. This isn't the worst thing we've seen today boys." Nao said as he was sipping coffee much like Ozpin would which caused Raiden to sweat drop even though he was at the pilot seat.
Torchwick then continued his speech. "As some of you may have heard. This right here-" as he knocked on the mech. "-is Atlas' newest line of defense against all the scary things in the world. " and thanks to my employer, we've managed to snag a few before they, uh, hit the shelves." Nao was shocked by this but nobody could tell.
"Now, many of your brother's have already moved down to our new operation in the south east. If you rather to stay in the city, thats fine. But if you're truly ready to fight for what you believe in, This is the arsenal I can provide you." Torchwick said as he smiled. "Any questions?" But only cheers could be heard.
"Confirmed it seems our speculation's about their operation being in the south east was right. Alcor, Frederick get out of there." Nao ordered as the two nodded. Frederick was able to escape unnoticed by the guard on the top stands but Alcor..
"-Will all new recruits please come forward." The Captain Said as Alcor was in a slight problem here.
"Uh Nao?" Alcor pleaded for help as the answer came from his earpiece. "Stay in cover, look for a fuse box." As Alcor step forward and looked around for a fuse box as he found it. "Yeah but Faunus can see in the dark remember?"
"When did I ever say we were going to let you escape in the dark?" Nao grinned as On the side of the rooftop Xalte could be seen aiming at the fuse box thanks to the automatic targeting system and since the camera on Alcor's Grimm mask was actually connected with the scope. The VTOL was then right above the Factory as The weapons were online.
Fredrick was then see on the ground with his disguise undone as he took out his scroll to view what Nao was seeing. "Whatever crazy plan you got there Gaim please don't disappoint."
"Wait... Is that Blake?! Wait is that Sun!" Alcor said as he saw the two faunus in the crowd with shock. Nao saw this as he quickly turned of the weapons and the VTOL took higher altitude again.
"The mission has been comprised! Alcor, Xalte you guys need to escape along with the two civilians." Nao ordered as the words civilians could be heard repeating in everyone head.
"Nao please tell me you didn't play any RTS games before the mission." Yuto said at his earpiece while you could see Xalte who was next to him sweat dropping.
"Maybe... But thats not the point Xalte shoot the fuse now!" Nao ordered as Xalte replied.
"I can't My Targeting Systems gone haywire some what?!" Was what he said as he was trying to find the correct position of the fuse box thought the wall.
"Wait what do you mean? Didn't Alcor... No Alcor!" Nao then panicked as he saw that Alcor had destroyed his camera.
"He sees us." Sun said to Blake as they were seen by Torchwick. Just as Torchwick was about to move. A familiar young man walked past the two and whispered.
"I'll by you some time, find a way out now."
MELON ENERGY!
Alcor unlocked his Melon Energy Lockseed as the White Fang members saw this along with Torchwick. He then placed it in the drive bay.
LOCK ON!
He then Pushed the Seaboll compressor as his Grimm mask came of.
SODA!
As the vascular duck filled the concentrate pod with orange juice.
MELON ENERGY ARMS!
As Techno music played and the arms dropped Zangetsu-Shin took Alcor's place as he began shooting at the guards then at the fuse box. Giving time for Sun and Blake to escape with the window. But Torchwick inside the Paladin gave chase towards them.
Zangetsu-Shin was able to Navigate to the crowd as he slashed at the grunts with close combat weapons and was able to escape them. From up above a motorcycle came crashing down to the ground right next Zangetsu-Shin as he swiftly jumped onto it.
"That was totally reckless Zangetsu-Shin." Said the person who was riding the motorcycle as it was revealed that the motorcycle was the Sakura Hurricane and its rider was Gaim.
"Sorry but hey I was under pressure." As the Sakura Hurricane began chasing after Torchwick who was chasing after the two faunus.
"Any ideas on why Alcor was there?" Sun asked as he and Blake were trying to escape Torchwick.
"Either his stalking me or... His my Knight in shining armor." Blake replied as She blushed at this which almost caused Sun to slip.
Meanwhile with Xalte and Yuto.
Xalte and Yuto were on their respective bikes as they were heading to catch up with Gaim and Zangetsu-Shin only for them to be shit down by Shin-Tyrant who appeared before them. The two then stop their bikes as they saw the dark rider before them.
"Tyrant!? Damn get out ta the way we have no time for you." Yuto shouted as Shin-Tyrant rushed towards them with her Schyte with Yuto barely able to dodge.
"Ah no talk but fight eh? Xalte let's go!" Yuto said as Xalte nodded as they took their respective lockseeds out.
BANANA!
BUDOU!
"Henshin!"
They both shouted as they lock their Lockseed on their Sengoku Drivers drive bays and hit the cutting lever.
COME ON! BANANA ARMS! ~KNIGHT OF SPEAR~!
HAI~! BUDOU ARMS! RYU~HOU! HA-HA-HA!
As both Baron and Ryugen had done their armors as they started to fight against Shin-Tyrant who merely laughed.
Back to Gaim and Zangetsu-Shin
As Gaim and Zangetsu-Shin on the Sakura Hurricane gave haste towards the mech, a portal to Helheim opened in front of them suddenly as they rode right into it. Gaim then hit the breaks as they had entered Helheim.
"Helheim? But how I didn't even hit top speed yet?" Gaim uttered as Zangetsu-Shin was shocked by this.
"DUDE WHY DIDNT YOU HIT TTOpSPEED THEN! WE COULD'VE CATH UP TO THEM!" Shouted Zangetsu-Shin with a worried tone. Gaim just bonked his head as he feel from his bike.
"Shut up. If we reach top speed we won't end up saving your girl but in Helheim instead. Although we are already here."
"Hai! So desu! Welcome Darling~! This is a quite beautiful forest isn't it?" A voice said as someone appeared from a Helheim Tree. Gaim gritted his teeth as he saw the person who had revealed themselves.
"Muzuki..." Gaim said as Zangetsu-Shin steadily took out his Sonic Arrow.
"Ehehehe it seems you didn't forget about me? Thats wonderful?!" Muzuki cheered as Gaim clenched his Daidaimaru.
"What is your game demon?" Zangetsu-Shin asked as he kept his stance.
"Ara? Me? I'm not a demon! And I'll tell you. I just want to play around with my sweet Noa-kun!" Muzuki then took out her Ringo Lockseed.
RINGO!
"Henshin~!"
She then placed the Lockseed in her Sengoku Driver drive bay as she she locked it on and hit the cutting lever.
COME ON! RINGO ARMS! DESIRE FORBIDDEN ~FRUITS~!
As the arms dropped on Muzuki her pre arms formed as Idunn had took her place.
"Hmm I remember you and your friends made your own role class so here is mine. Kamen Rider Idunn taste the power of my desire..." As she took out her Sword Bringer.
"Gaim permission to fight Idunn?" Zangetsu-Shin asked Gaim as Gaim took out a Genesis Core and Lemon Lockseed.
"Why do you even need to ask." Gaim said as he removed his ride indicator and placed the Genesis Core. Gaim's Orange Lockseed closed as the lock was off but it was still on the driver.
LEMON ENERGY!
Zangetsu-Shin looked surprised by this as he asked. "Were the hell did cha get that Lockseed and Genesis Core from?" Gaim turned too Zangetsu-Shin.
"To many questions you ask, no do that anymore." He replied with a yoda like accent. He then placed the lemon energy Lockseed at the Genesis Core Drive Bay and then locked on both Lockseeds.
LOCK ON!
Gaim then hit his cutting lever as a crack appeared with the Lemon Energy arms, Gaim's Orange arms ascended and combined with the lemon energy arms and turned into a jinboari. The arms then dropped and formed the same arms from before but instead of a Melon background it was a lemon one.
SOIYA! MIX! ORANGE ARMS! HANAMICHI ON STAGE! JIMBER LEMON! HA-HA!
Gaim had now donned his Jimber Lemon Arms as he pointed his Sonic Arrow at Idunn.
"Let's see if you can handle two arrows Muzuki..."
Elsewhere
Team RWBY had just defeated the Atlesian Paladin Torchwick was on as he was now unprotected in front of Team RWBY.
"Just got this thing cleaned." Torchwick complained as he dusted the dust of his suit. Yang then unleashed a blast of fire towards Torchwick only for a figure with an Umbrella? To block the attack. Torchwick smiled at this as he looked at the members of RWBY. "Ladies, Ice Queen..."
"Hey!" Weiss uttered.
"-Always a pleasure." Torchwick saluted. "Neo if you would?" As the now known Neo bowed in front of the members of Team RWBY for some reason. With anger Yang then punched towards them only for it to break into glass and for Yang to be punched right in the face as she was sent flying towards her teammates.
Torchwick and Neo could be seen escaping on the VTOL Bulldog. "Be careful around the Yellow one Kage! She's feisty!" Torchwick shouted at the man that had taken their place and punched Yang before Torchwick left the seen.
"Daijobu Torchwick-San I'm prepared for this." As the man was revealed to be Kage with his white smiling mask.
"Who are you? And what with that weird mask?" Weiss asked as the Ruby and Blake helped Yang up.
Kage laughed as he showed a taunting gesture. "Why don't you find out Yukihime-sama." Provoked by this Weiss dashed toward Kage as her Glyphs appeared below her and she rushes towards Kage for a Thrust only for Kage to side step and grab her arm as he threw her right towards her team mates as Yang was able catch her.
"I got you Weiss." As the two stared at Kage who was clapping like some sort of a fool.
"UWAH! SUGEI! So bold! I was surprised to see you charge just like that." Kage said playfully as he suddenly disappeared as he tacked Blake down whilst flicking her cat ears. As he jumped in the air and floated?
"Man I hate those cat ears." Kage commented as he stared at Ruby. At this Time Yang, Weiss and Blake were already up with their weapons ready but something seemed of.
"My aura? I can't feel it." Yang said as she examined herself and found that she had a bit of blood on her lips.
"Wait... I can't feel mine too!" Weiss said in shock as she tried to summon her Glyphs but to no avail.
"Mine neither." As Blake could feel it. Kage then laughed hysterically at this.
"Oh oh oh Gomen Gomen I forgot to mention that I suppressed your Aura's so yeah... You can't use them!" Kage responded as he dropped down as everyone in Team RWBY still had their stance.
"How did you do that?" Ruby asked as she pointed her Crescent Rose at the man.
"iie not telling!" As Kage dashed towards Ruby and touched her face. "You really are truly beautiful.. Wow I feel so much regret right now." Kage said while caressing her checks. Angered Yang ran towards Kage as she tried to punch him away only for him to reappear behind the team.
"Tsk Tsk Tsk Mataku Yang-chan don't punch people when their talking." Kage said with a no no pose. He then pulled out a Lockseed which appeared to be the an orange lockseed but black in colour and its code had changed to D.L.S.-07. Kage then unlocked it.
SHADOW ORANGE!
A Sengoku Driver then appeared on his waist but a appeared to be the evil version which Cardin had before.
"Let's Henshin...!" As Kage threw his lockseed in mid air and cached it as he placed it in his Drive bay.
LOCK ON!
A portal filled with darkness appeared from Helheim as A black coloured version of the orange arms could be seen. Kage then hit the cutting skull sword lever.
KIERO! SHADOW ORANGE ARMS!
The arms then dropped on Kage's head as a similar pre- arms to Gaim appeared on his body as the arms folded down on his body to complete his armor. His armor was all to similar to Gaim but his Kabuto was silver and all his golden parts turned silver while all his orange ones turned black. His armors visor was yellow instead of orange.
"Kamen Rider Gaim Yami Destroying On Stage." As the his henshin jingle activated.
YAMI NO CHIKARA! ON THE STAGE DA!
As Dark energy started to surround team RWBY as they prepared for a fight.
"Saa Ore no Dark Stage Da.." Gain Yami announced as he took out his only weapon he had which was his Musou Saber.
KRTC: Too short for you? No worries I made to many words so it possibly going to be a three parter so Next page for continuation friend!