Thanks for your advice every one! If you are wondering about the names for Daisy's kits, Daisy heard a twoleg talking about something involving the four seasons. She doesn't know what they mean, but she thought they sounded cool and she wanted to bring a part of her old life with her to her life in the clans. Also, I woke up one morning with this idea in my head, and I'm just writing down what I dreamed. P.S. sometimes i dream in 2nd or 3rd person, so I'm changing it a little. Anyway, I'm not going to change the names, because I'm afraid it might mess me up, sry. I will check out Starkit's prophecy. P.S.S. you have a good point Keeper, but, as an example, Skywatcher was named after Sky Clan and the first leader of Star Clan was named Starstar, so, for the sake of the story, let's say she was named after her.
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Chapter 1
"Come on Dovewing! You can do it." Jayfeather calmly told the birthing queen. "Just a little more!" He pressed his ear to her heaving belly, listening. "Wow Dovewing! You are going to have at least 5 kits!" He told her with enthusiasm, trying to keep her distracted for a little longer. "You're doing fine." He offered her a stick to bite down on. She took it in her jaws and it shattered almost immediately. Daisy was lying out of the way, nursing her 4 kits and Cinderheart had left the nursery to give Dovewing room, and (he suspected) to keep Bumblestripe out. Dovewing shivered. A small yellow tabby tom slithered out onto the moss. He quickly nipped open its casing and licked its fur the wrong way to warm it and get it breathing. The kit mewed and started squirming towards its mother's warm belly to nurse. The next kit was a dark silvery she kit and after that a silvery white she kit. Jayfeather nipped open their casings and placed them gently at their mother's belly next to their brother. Next was a black tom, then a white tom, then 2 she kits, a grey and a yellow. They found their way towards their mother's soft belly. "I think that's all. I'll get some borage to help your milk come." He swiftly padded out of the room. When he passed Bumblestripe, he said, "Give her a few minutes to rest. She deserves it." before padding towards the medicine cat's den to find borage. When he returned, he noticed all the kits were glowing slightly on the inside, as if they were proud to have been born. Three of the kits really caught his attention. They were the first three kits born. They were glowing with an aura of power,unlike anything he had ever felt. They (the tabby tom and the silvery shes) were glowing with a soft and gentle light, inside and probably outside too. He shot Dovewing a sightless blue glance. She purred slightly, but he could feel weariness rolling off her in waves. "There glowing.!?." She confirmed, slightly bewildered. "They are as bright as the sun, yet as gentle as the moon." She said, trying to show him what they looked like without actually showing him. He gave Dovewing the borage the yowled, "Bumblestripe! You can come in now!" to Bumblestripe, who was pacing outside. Bumblestripe rushed in to make sure that Dovewing was okay, because he knew what could happen to birthing queens. His father, Greystripe's previous mate,Silverstream, had died giving birth to her two kits, Feathertail and Stormfur. Jayfeather turned his attention to the 3 kits. He could tell their aura of power was still there, even if no one could see it anymore. He moved out of the way so Bumblestripe could see his kits. "They are adorable!" He mewed prowdly."They will make fine warriors one day!" Jayfeather silently agreed, but he suspected they would be much more. He was jerked out of his thoughts as Bumblestripe said "We should name this one after you," pointing to the silvery white she kit. "She looks just like you!" Dovewing replied wearily."I was thinking we would name her Starkit, because she shines like a star." Bumblestripe purred softly, "You can name them what ever you want." They went on to name all the kits, peacefully whispering to each other as the crescent moon rose higher into the sky. As Jayfeather lay down in his nest, he thought of Firestar's prophecy about the sun, moon, and shining star being the clan's saviors for a few minutes before falling asleep to the crickets chirping somewhere in the woods and the faint suckling noises coming from the nursery.
Hey everybody! I hope you liked this chapter! Don't forget to leave reviews about what you think! BTW these are the kits names and what they look like in order of birth:
Sunkit: tough yellow tabby tom with a golden tinge to his fur, will have blue eyes
Moonkit: silvery gray she kit, will have green eyes
Starkit: gentle white she kit with a strong silvery sheen to her pelt, will have blue eyes
Darkkit: black tom, will have yellow eyes
Lightkit: white tom, will have green eyes
Nightkit: dark grey she kit, will have bright green eyes
Daykit: pale yellow she kit, will also have bright green eyes
Also, here are Daisy's kits too:
Springkit: pale yellow, almost tan pelt, dark green eyes
Summerkit: yellow she kit, amber eyes
Autumnkit: dark brown tabby tom, green eyes
Winterkit: pale grey tom with white flecks all over his pelt, white tail tip, amber eyes
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