I have been busy, but now I have time to write, also fan fiction has this nifty new thing that shows you how many times my story has been viewed, and I got 1000+ BUT ONLY 2 DAMN REVEIWS! But lack of reviews won't stop me writing this story. Enjoy!

8/11/2013

The familiar sound of the bar music relaxed Axton as he neared it. Two days ago Dr Zed declared him healed and he was able to continue his duties as a Vault Hunter. He currently was at home after a long mission; It was a pointless fetch quest, but hey gotta win the hearts and minds of the people and he was used to bullshit house calls since his time in the DAHL military. Taking in the smell of the sweet night air he slowly made his way to the bar, with the comforting smell of booze and perfume permeating the air. He opened the doors and the sound of music escaped into the quiet night. Weaving his way through the occupants he made his way over to his favorite bar stool; The one that has the view of both entrances to the bar and its back to a wall. It was a old military habit he found hard to break, but it's the old military habits that let him survive this long, so he usually lets them take over.

His stool was empty and he sat, his body molded into every crease and crevice as if the stool was made just for him. Worked in and made comfortable by all the hours over the past months since the Vault Hunters arrived. He lightly rapped on the bar and said "One Rakk Ale please" and he patiently waited for Moxxi, who happened to have her back turned towards him giving the Commando a nice view of her ass. She acknowledged his request and turned around to give it to him.

"Oh, well if it isn't my favorite commando" She flirted. Axton chuckled and left some money on the bar, with a sizeable tip, he took the beer from her hand and she leaned over towards him and whispered "we need to talk after closing"

Her lips lightly brushed Axton's ear as she spoke and she breathed out hot air onto his skin. He nodded and tried to focus on something else, other than the curvy woman in front of him and turned to talk to the patron next to him, but all he got was a grunt. He was rescued when Maya and zero walked in and got up to sit with them, but he stopped himself. Maya would probably phase lock him if he tried anything and Zer0, well Zer0 never really talks. He was frustrated, usually he would go talk to Gaige, but she's in the work shop and its already close to closing time and he doesn't want to miss out on what ever Moxxi has got planned. He lightly drummed on the bar top while staring at the clock in the corner of the room.

"what's the matter sugar? Getting a little restless? Don't worry I'll make it worth your while" she winked and added a growl near the end, Axton adjusted his collar, was it getting a little hot in here? He excused himself to dip into the restroom and freshen himself up. There was no shower, but he washed his face and did a quick smell test to make sure he didn't smell revolting. Running his hands through his hair and flashing his trade mark smile in the mirror he returned to his stool to wait.

It seemed like forever, but finally he heard the short man start ushering everybody out, they left grumbling, but none would want to fight him. It was going smoothly up until Salvador got to Axton.

"Ay amigo, its time to leave" the burly Pandoran said, Axton scanned the empty room and replied to him "Sorry Sal, but Moxxi said she needed to talk to me after closing"

Salvador was about to say something before Moxxi cut him off "Its okay big guy, the Commando is with me"

She waved her hand beckoning him over and pulled a wad of cash from her corset.

"Your weekly payment" and handed it to Salvador who thanked her and left, leaving the two of them alone…

..together.

"So you said you wanted to see me about something" Axton said, glancing around and tapping his feet on the bar stool.

"Yes" she continued "But its more like I have something I need you to do"

Axton looked relieved.

"A job?' he said and quickly felt more confident, a job is something he can do. Moxxi began to inch closer to him.

"Yeah, it's a super secret job" she said playfully.

Axton took his last sip from his Rakk Ale, downing his last bit of liquid courage he flirted back.

"I'm real good at keeping secrets, ma'am"

She grinned.

"Oh I know you are"

Axton just noticed that she was getting uncomfortably close to him, invading his personal space. He attempted to scoot back a bit, but she just moved closer, close enough that he could feel her breath against his skin again. She leaned in close and whispered " I know what happened between you a Patricia"

The look of shock on Axton's face gave Moxxi a triumphant feeling, but he quickly regained his composure.

"Oh really? tell me, what did happened between me and Patricia, then?" he retorted, not trying to betray his surprise.

"Hey I ask the questions here" she barked. Straddling him. She hung her arms lazily around his neck and made sure that her legs pinned his arms to his sides.

"The real question is, how are you going to keep me quiet?"

He nervously shifted and shrugged " I don't know, what ever will i do? Especially since nothing happened" he sarcastically replied rolling his eyes to avoid eye contact.

"I'll give you a hint" she said "its has something to do with what you and Patricia did a few nights back"

The color drained from Axton's face, the sudden realization hit him, she wanted to have sex, with him, the Commando. He growled "Oh yes, I definitely know what you mean now"

But before he could react Moxxi was down on her knees unfastening his belt, he began to protest but she shushed him, and finished. Before he knew it his pants were around his ankles.

"My my Axton, is you soldier happy to see me?"

he groaned at Moxxi's bad innuendo " Ha. Ha. Real funny" he deadpanned and looked down at his raging erecting straining underneath his briefs.

"Aw he looks so uncomfortable " Moxxi said "we'll have to fix that"

She slowly peeled his briefs off causing his erect member to spring up from its confinement. Moxxi kissed the tip of his member sending shivers up his spine.

"Don't pop just yet, we're not even at the fun part"she teased as she began to kiss and lick his member lightly, toying with him mercilessly. Every now and then she would slide his cock slowly into her mouth and then eventually deep in her throat and just let it sit there, leaving him gasping a clawing at her hair begging her to do it again, but she wouldn't. She liked helpless Axton, begging for more, it made her hot all over just thinking about it and she slipped her fingers in her panties and began to rub her clit while bobbing up and down on his shaft taking its full length. Occasionally she would stop and tease him with kisses and licks to edge him until he cried out her name.

"Oh my Axton, Do you eat a lot of fruits? because your precum is just absolutely scrumptious"

He just moaned, Moxxi took it as a sign of a job well done. Looking at his cock she let out a slight Umf and bit her lip "It looks so good"

She started to jerk him off with both hands, her left hand squeezing tight on the base of his cock while her right twisted up the shaft and stimulates his cock head. "Now don't you bust until I say so" she scolded "Otherwise I'll stop and you wont get to the good part"

He looked at her with Big eyes and nodded violently "y-Yes ma'am i wont, please don't stop" he begged. A mischievous grin formed on her "I do like this side of the Handsome Commando, who would of that that a little teasing would turn him into putty"

Moxxi continued to massage the length of his member using varying strengths and motions. Axton started to pant and tried to think of something to distract him, hefelt the familiar knot in the pit of his abdomen start to form, But Moxxi wasn't slowing down.

"Not yet, Mr Commando" She cooed, increasing her speed.

Axton tried, he really did, to stop himself, but the pleasureful assault on him broke his enduarance.

"M-Moxxii" he stuttered "I-i can't hold it anymore.."

"Oh no you don't, Axton! I didn't say so! Stop!" she commanded and started to twist both hand around his shaft as well as massage it up and down. She could fell his cock swell and then twitch, sensing his coming orgasm she pondered ruining his orgasm, but instead removed both hands from his cock and buried it deep within her throat.

"Oh fuuck, Moxxi" He moaned when he felt the first rope of his cum fire out and then the muscles of Moxxi's throat move as she swallowed him down. Using his hands he pushed her head down farther on his cock until she took it all. After firing several more ropes of cum down her throat he released her and she sprung up off his member. Her make up muddled and eyeliner running.

"Aren't you quite virile" she said in a low husky voice. she exhaled sharply and smirked "Its too bad you went off script, such a bad boy. Someone is not getting dessert" she threatened, taking back control.

"Its a shame really, I wanted to feel your cock inside me, oh well. Maybe next time" she teased and slowly got up. Axton had recovered from his orgasm, but his erection showed no signs of stopping. Moxxi leaned on the counter top presenting to him her shapely ass and wet sex. Axton stood up and was attempting to get re-dressed and leave before he could embarrass himself anymore.

"I'm in no shape to defend myself, if a certain Commando would force himself onto me, I'd be helpless" she said in mock terror. Tempting him, she gyrated her hips and spread herself open, beckoning him in.

Axton growled and in an instant he bent her over the bar and gave her ass a nice loud smack, she yelped a bit

"So you like it rough?" she prodded, but was silenced by another slap. He then ripped off her blue panties.

"Hey! Those cost money!" she protested.

Axton bit her hard and she shut up. He slipped a finger in her moist hole feeling her walls to test if she was wet enough. After his finger glided in and out smoothy he began to rub his throbbing cock around her entrance

"Oh you tease" Moxxi responded and attempted to wiggle onto his cock. After a few moments she succeeded and was rewarded by his plentiful girth "oomph fuck, Axton you feel so good" she said while biting her lip and looking over her shoulder at him.

He began to pump into her slowly, taking in her warmth and the novelty of the situation. Never in a million years would he of expected to be fucking Moxxi right now.

"You're going to have to do better than that" she roused and he responded by grabbing all of her hail into a pony tail and pulled back roughly. He started again going faster than before, but keeping a sustainable tempo, she let out a moan.

"harder" she spurred, and Axton complied by pounding into her faster causing the bar top to shudder. Axton then began to pull harder on her hair and she let out another moan, using his free hand to reach around and pull a breast out from her corset he began to fondle her. while all this was going on she reached under the bar and positioned her echo in a way that she was in most of the frame and Axton was partially obscured and hit record.

"OH YES HARDER!" she yelled loud enough that the echo would hear her, the speed he was going at was about to send her over the edge, gripping the bar she began to grind against him to get more friction, she let out a gasp and a porn star loud moan signifying her climax while putting on a show for the recording echo in front of her. Pushing against him and riding her climax to the end, she began to pant and Axton used his free hand to grab her jaw and pull her in for a surprise kiss.

"Oh Moxxi, im close" he panted. She turned to look at the device.

"Cum in me. Fill me up. I need it!" She demanded. For a split second Axton thought rationally about the consequences of her request. Only for a split second though. using both hands to grab her by the hips he went as fast as he could, eagerly chasing his orgasm and to fulfill the desire's of the older woman.

"I'm, I'm cumming" he barked and pulled her in for a final kiss, which she eagerly accepted. He let his cock linger inside of her while it twitched leaking the final bit of cum inside her. They both embraced quietly and caught their breath. The gravity of the situation weighing in on them. Axton was the first to break the silence.

"Well, i oughta go, the rest of the Vault Hunters might get worried" and hurriedly excused himself from the building.

Moxxi cooed into the camera lens and planted a kiss on it.

"Love ya" she quipped and winked.

She stopped the recording and selected the recipient, Ex-Man.

"Sorry Jacky" she said smugly and hit send.

Wow the original formatting was atrocious for this chapter, double spaced and zero punctuation. I added about 700 words and definitely improved the banter between the two. I always pictured Moxxi as a Dom so i wanted a little power struggle. Originally Moxxi just uploaded it to the entire echo net, but i feel that a woman whose business relies on her untouchable, teasing nature, wouldn't want everyone to see her assets. Kinda like a magician and their tricks. Besides now Handsome Jack has a personal reason to despise Axton.