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bcoz it reminds me that I NEED BETTERMENT IN WRITINIG.. GUYS, mujhe na aap sab ki reviews
site pe nehi mila, main ne jab mail check kiya tab dekha aapki reviews.. I don't know what's the
matter.. job hi ho thanks 4 reviews ones agian..
THE STORY:
ABHIJEET: (Cosciously) kaun? Kaun hai?
Voice: main .. mai hoon.
Abhijeet: kaun mai?
Voice: sir main DAYA..
Abhijeet: kaun DAYA?
Daya: (surprisingly)sir mai Daya, aapka junior..
Abhijeet: haa haa pata hai tum mere junior ho ,per tumhe iss bat ki khayal hai kya?
Daya: (surprisngly) ji!
Abhijeet: (imitating him)ji! (rudly)Koi junior aise aapne senior ki ghar me ghuse chale aate hai kya?
Daya: sir main ne spoha ki aap sayed so gaye honge, to mai duplicate chabi use karke ghar mai ghus
Geya.. waise aap abhi tak soye nehi?
Abhijeet: meri baat choro..tum kyu aaye ho yeah batao?
Daya: mai to bas aapko dekhne aaya tha?
Abhijeet: mai joker hoo keya?
Daya : nehi, mera woh matlab nehi tha.. mai to yeh dekhne aya tha ki aap .. aap, mmm.. thik thak
dinner kiye hai yeah nehi, medicieces liye hai ki nehi..
Abhijeet: get out..
Daya: (suprisingly) sir?!
Abhijeet: I said get out.. chale jao, abhi ke abhi nikal jao mere ghar se.. just go..
Daya became so much surprised & so much hurt.. but in front of Abhijee he said,
Daya: chala jata hoo sir .. pehele aap kuch khake aapki medicines le lijiye..
Abhijeet: hey, tum hote kon ho mujhe order dene wala? Main ne kaha na jao yaha se..mujh per
ehesaan karne wale tum jaise logo ko nafarat karta hoo main samjhe, nafrat..
this was enough for Daya.. He could not believe his own ear.. was it Abhijeet sir to tell him these
words? Oh, why not? What was he? Mere a junior like others.. but how much abhijeet got angry on
anyone, he never spoke something like this to anyone? Then why with him only..taers dropped
from his eyes..
Daya: (trying hard to hide the taers & his cracked voice) mai ch..chala jata hoon sir, nehi aaunga fir
kabhi bhi.. aap bas aapna dh.. dhyan rakhiyega..
Abhijeet: haan rakhunga.. aab jao..
Daya started to move out.. but somehow he was expecting Abhijeet to call him back & say not to
go.. but in vain.. he moved out form the house completely.. as soon as Daya went out. Abhijeet shut
the doorwith bang & attached his back with the door.. unknowingly two drops of water made their
way from Abhijeet's eye.. outside the door Daya ones looked back at the closed door and moved
further..
He was walking along the road side.. some words were spinning in his mind. .. he was asking the
question to himself .. kya.. kya kasoor tha mera .. kya kiya
hai mai ne.. what I did.. what.. what. What..
it was night..but still the lights of street lamps were there.. but he could not see anything in front of
him except the darkness,only darkness, nothing more..
NEXT DAY MORNING
Door bell rang in the house.. some one opened the door..
The visitor: sahab doodh(milk)..
The man: haa ruko.. he went to his kichen to bring a bowl to take the milk.. he came back with it..
The milk man: sahab mai ne socha tha ki aap ghar pe nehi honge.. fir bhi chala aya .. socha ekber
dekh lu..
The man: kyu ? ghar per nehi rahu to kaha jau mai?( with low tone) hai hi kaun mera jis ke pas jau..
MM: nehi sahab mai socha tha aap sayed haspatal (hospital) mein honge..
The man: haspatal mie! Kyu?
(feeling the seriousness in his question)MM: aare sab lagta hai aapko nehi pata.. aare aap ke
sath jo sahab kabhi kabhi milne aate hai na..mai ne dekha hai unhe kai ber aapke sath.. woh raaste
per behosh mile.. sab log unhe haspatal leke gaye .. to mai socha.. but he could not finish his
sentence as the bowl was dropped from the man's hand and he could manage to utter one word
The man: DAYA.. and immidietly Abhijeet (now it's clear na?)rushed out from the house while
running he just asked one question .. kaun sa hospital?..
MM: ji city haspatal..
no he had no time to ask any question more.. he was just think abut his junior.. is it ? or something
more..
BAS itnne se hi kam chala lo pls.. I promise mai jaldi update karungi.. per pls review karna.. I am
waiting for that pls pls pls.. bura vala job hi ho, bas review karo.. it gives me the strength to write
somthing good..