It was hard to edit because my writing has changed so much and I don't want to change the story. It's not my best, but better than before.
Ana's POV:
I understand that Christian's sexual past is because he needs control, but I really hope he can move on and have a real relationship. He's the first person I've been able to open up with and I care for him. The ball is in his court now and I will have to wait until Friday to hear his answer. Maybe I should text him now and spare me the possible heartache, but there is still a chance and I have to hold on to that. I spend the rest of the day catching up on my shows with Kate. Around eight, I decide to take a nice long bath and get to bed. I'm dreading work in the morning.
I see Christian in my dreams again but this is more of a nightmare. I am chained up in a dark room and Christian is there laughing at me, saying I could never compare to his lifestyle and I will never be good enough for him. I wake up crying and sweating. Let's just say that the dream did not reassure me that he is going to be able to have a relationship with me. My night was restless and I am exhausted. I am trudging through my day, eager to get home.
Jack calls me into his office "Ana, would you come see me? I need to talk to you."
"Yes, I'll be right there" Oh shit, Ana, now you've done it.
"Ana, have a seat."
"What did you want to talk to me about?"
"First thing, are you okay? I noticed you haven't really been with us today." Well, it's because I had a nightmare last night about the guy I am dating, humiliating me.
"I'm sorry, I didn't sleep well last night. I apologize."
"It's fine, we all have bad days. I just wanted to say there is a new position open for promotion as an editorial assistant, and Friday was a test. I really think you should apply. You've shown real progress in the year you've worked here. You have proved yourself on many occasions." I cannot believe what I am hearing! Now I feel badly for bitching about what happened Friday.
"Oh my god! I am dumbfounded! I'm so happy and I'm definitely going to apply for the position. Thank you."
"You deserve it, Ana."
"Well, I have to get back to my desk. If you need anything be sure to ask."
"Before you go, here is the paperwork you have to fill out to apply. I wish you the best of luck." He adds with a wink. Jack has always been flirtations but I think its just in his nature.
"Thank you."
Once I am back at my desk, I start to fill out the paperwork. How can I focus on anything else. Ah! A promotion! This is so exciting.
Once I am done filling out the paperwork, it's already 5:30. Shit! I didn't realize everyone had left. I decide to stop to get some champagne on my way home to celebrate a possible promotion. When I get home, I tell Kate. She is over the moon with excitement.
"Oh, Ana, I am so proud of you! Let's crack open this bad boy."
"Thank you, Kit-Kat."
"I wish I had known earlier since I am going to dinner with my parents tonight. You're welcome to join, the reservation is eight."
"I would love to, it would be a nice change from take out."
Kate pours us both a glass of champagne and passes me one.
"To new opportunities, Ana."
"Cheers."
Once we have had our champagne and shared about each other's day, I take a bath and get changed. All the while, I can't get Christian off of my mind. I miss him so much. How is this possible? I've only known him for a week. I'm m trying to figure out what to wear, and Kate is pissing all over every idea. She says it's a nice restaurant, I have to dress well.
"I do not see why I can't wear jeans, a tee-shirt and my converse!"
"You are so stubborn."
"How about we make a deal, I either wear dress with flats or jeans with heels."
"Fine." She says as she gives me the death stare.
I take one more look through my closet and find my favourite pair of blue skinny jeans with a white lace semi cropped top with a beaded necklace like collar and my black wedges.
"Now was that so hard, Ana?"
"Yes, Kate, it was agony." I pretend to faint on my bed.
"Well, you better hurry, we have to leave in 15." She says and points to her watch
I quickly get changed, do a light smokey eye, putting on some eyeliner on and mascara. My hair doesn't look half bad today so I decide to leave it down. I grab my purse, throw my phone in, and Kate and I are soon out the door.
I am so excited; a nice dinner out with Kate. I hope it will get my mind off of Christian. Kate and I arrive a little early, so we decide to go to the bar and order some drinks.
"I want a cosmopolitan." Kate says in her flirty tone looks like she's in her rebound stage.
"Make that two."
"Miss, can I see your ID?." Every fucking time.
"Here."
"Thank you, Miss. Steele. Two cosmos coming up." He says and gives me a little wink
We get out cosmos and sit down at a table in the bar area. Once we have sat down I notice Kate has her flirty face on I look in the direction Kate is staring and I notice a very good-looking man, tall and muscular, he has beautiful blond curly hair and beautiful eyes, although he is no match for Christian Grey. Kate walks over and leaves me all by myself great friend. I notice the two of them are really hitting it off. About five minutes later, I have to pull Kate away because our table is ready.
"Elliot, this is my roommate Ana."
"It's nice to meet you. Sorry for stealing away your roommate."
"No problem, but our table is ready."
Kate and him say their goodbyes and exchange phone numbers and we head off to the table. After we're seated, we notice Ethan walk in. I almost squeal when I see him. I practically leap into his arms and he spins me around.
"Ethan, its been so long!"
"Ana, so good to see you."
"Where's Mom and Dad?"
"They can't make it. Mom says she's not feeling very well."
"Typical. Oh well, we can have more fun without them."
The waiter comes up to our table with another round of drinks.
"Which of you is, Anastasia?"
"That would be me."
"This is for you." He passes me a card that says 'I hope you are having fun! Miss me yet?' I know exactly who it's from. Wait is he here? I start getting anxious and look around. I notice his piercing eyes. He looks magnificent. What do you know, he is with that boy Kate has the hots for.
I ask the waitress for a pen and some paper and write down. 'Terribly, come join us.'
"Can you give this the that man with a round of whatever they are drinking on me?"
"Yes."
"Thank you."
"What was that? Who bought us the drinks?" Kate asks.
I point in the direction of Christian and Elliot "Them."
"Oh my god! He is here and with Elliot. That is so weird."
"I know, eh? What are the odds? I hope you do not mind I've asked them to join us."
"Not a problem with me." Kate says with a little giggle
"Ugh, I am going to be a fifth wheel, exciting."
"Don't get snippy, you had your chance with Ana, she's been single since you've known her. For once she is happy." Mine and Ethan's face go bright red.
"Shut it, Kate." Ethan barks. I never knew he liked me. It's not like I would have said 'yes', he is my best friend's brother and that is a line you do not cross.
Soon enough, we see the boys heading our direction.
"Hello, Ana."
"Christian." I stand up and give him a light peck on the cheek.
"This is my brother Elliot." So that is how they know one another
"We've already met. He has taken quite a shine to my roommate."
"I can see that."
Kate moves down a seat so Christian can sit beside me.
"Are you ready to order?" The waitress asks while trying to flirt with Christian.
Kate: "I will have the Caesar salad with chicken.
Ethan: "Grilled sea bass for me."
Elliot: "Can I have the veal tenderloin."
Christian: "I would like the halibut."
Lastly, me: "Can I have the Potato Gnocchi please."
"Coming right up." The whole time she was taking our orders, she was staring at Christian.
Kate orders a round of Champagne to make a toast.
"To Ana and the possibility for promotion. I am so proud."
"To Ana." We all clink glasses and take a sip
The others are conversing with one another and Christian are in our own little world.
"Ana, how come you didn't tell me?" He looks almost sad I did not mean to upset him.
"I thought we were taking a little break so I didn't message you, believe me you were the first person I wanted to tell." I reassure him
"So what would the promotion be?"
"I would be an assistant editor for SIP." That is right we never really talked about my work.
"Well, congrats." He adds a sexy little wink.
Ethan and Christian are discussing his work and I cannot take my eyes off him. The way he looks when he is talking so confident. I am rudely awakened from my daze by our waiter with our food.
Everyone must be hungry because no one has said a word since our food arrived.
"My Gnocchi is amazing and I take it everyone likes their food?" I say to break the silence
They all nod agreeing
"So, Christian, where did you two meet?" Ask Ethan
"Well, she caught my eye as she was going into and appointment and I just knew there was something special about her so I waited around until she was done and asked her out."
"It sounds a lot creepier than it was." I add since it does sound a little weird
Once were finished with our meals, Christian and Elliot have a fight over who will pay the bill.
"How about we split the bill five ways pay our own share?"
"Fine with me" Adds Kate.
"No, Ana, I am paying for the bill and that is final." Shit I've made him angry.
"Fine, Christian, but next time, I get to pay."
"Deal"
Christian and Elliot walk us to our car and say goodnight.
"Well, Christian, it was nice to see you again." I bit my lip because this is somewhat awkward me saying goodbye to Christian and Kate saying goodbye to Elliot right beside me.
"I can't wait until Friday." He leans in to hug me and whispers in my ear. "Stop biting your lip that's my job." I instantly melt this man is going to be the death of me. He gives me a kiss and walks toward his car with Elliot
"Christian's a controlling son of a bitch, isn't he?"
"Oh, you do not even know." I laugh it off so she doesn't question me.
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