I wanted to modify my style of writing a bit. Tell me if it improved or my labour just went down the drain. And also, I couldn't get myself to be as expressive as I wanted to be.
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At Shikamaru's house:
Temari – "Hey, Shikamaru. You know I have liked you for quite some time now."
Shikamaru – "Really? I thought it was just one-sided. I like you, too."
Temari approached Shikamaru for a kiss, and, as soon as their lips touched, Shikamaru's alarm wakes him up.
Shikamaru – "Ah man, what a drag."
He hears the doorbell ring. He takes a look at his calendar for a second. He notices that today is marked with a red circle.
Shikamaru – "Why did I do that for?"
He gets up from his bed, thinking, half-naked, with just a pair of green boxers on.
Shikamaru – "Coming!"
He hastily opens the door, to see Temari standing there, beautifully dressed. It strikes him in that second.
Temari – "Hey Shikamaru, are you…"
She notices his bareness and boxers.
Temari – "You are planning to go out like that?"
Shikamaru – "I'm sorry, it just slipped my mind. Why don't you come in?"
Temari enters the house. She eyes the well-furnished room, and how well the small room's space has been accounted for. She seems rather impressed.
Shikamaru – "Just give me a second. I will be right back."
Temari – "Uhm, sure."
Shikamaru gets into his bedroom and opens his cupboard. Meanwhile, Temari stands there, gazing at the house's interiors. He looks at his collection. He picks up a casual outfit.
Shikamaru – "Would this be okay? Ah, just let it be."
He puts it on hurriedly. Seeming satisfied with himself, he walks out to talk to Temari again.
Shikamaru – "Hey, I'm ready. Let's move out."
Temari – "Yeah, sure. But hey, wait. Where are we headed to? You have planned something beforehand, haven't you?
Not having planned anything beforehand, Shikamaru is in loss for words.
Shikamaru – "Ah…umm…the Amusement Park, yes, The Amusement Park, yeah, I did."
Temari – "Okay, then let's go."
At the Park:
Temari – "Wow, so many rides. Where to go first? Should we go on that roller coaster?
Although he doesn't want to admit it, he is claustrophobic and is afraid of rides which induce a large g-force on the rider. But saying no at this moment will hurt his pride.
Shikamaru – "Okay, let's go."
They board the ride. In spite of the fact that Shikamaru was hesitant at first, he found the ride entertaining. On the other hand, Temari has lost all her enthusiasm and is vomiting like hell.
Temari – "Oh…bwa…bwa…I'm…bwa…I'm sorry, Shikamaru."
Shikamaru – "Don't worry yourself, Temari. Keep calm."
After a few not-so-good minutes, Temari is back on the track. Both of them share an ice-cream as well.
Shikamaru – "I think that's enough for a day."
Temari – "I'm sorry about that, but who said we can't continue our date?"
Shikamaru – "Really?"
Temari – "Yup, but not here. Why don't we continue at my home?
Shikamaru – "Well, I guess. If that's what you want."
Temari – "You won't chicken out at the last moment, would you?"
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Guys, I'm sorry. This isn't even a proper conversation. I wanted to make this chapter at least twice the previous one but ran out of ideas and I'm a bit of a sloppy fellow. Please bear with it. It's the last chapter anyway. It took me 4 hours to write just this much and after that I was helpless. I will get something new out as soon as possible. Please don't turn your backs on me.
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