Wow, the number of reviews I got was seriously shocking!
14 wow…
To be honest this is my least favorite of my stories.
Disclaimer: Does anyone ever bother to read these things? Whatever, I don't own MR :P
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Sorry guys but Edward is going to be OCC in this chapter.
Previously…
"WILL SOMEONE EXPLAIN WHATS HAPPENING!" Rosalie shouted. I looked at the Cullen's and the pack. They all had the same expression in their eyes:
Confusion . . .
And;
Blood lust . . .
Chapter 3
Oh shit, I so did not plan for this!
"Umm…." I began; shot Ari a look that said please help!
"Don't look at me, I have no idea what's going on here anymore then you do!" Ari said childishly, me being even more childish then him; I stuck my tongue out at him. He raised an eye brow at me, I laughed at him.
"Bella, what's going on?" Carlisle asked me, "You just fought two vampires and wolf!"
"About that….."
"Who's Bella?" Ari interrupted. They all shot hate full glances at him. I looked around, looking for escape routes. My chances or escaping were fair enough, but I wasn't leaving Ari behind.
"Max, What's going on? I think we all deserve an explanation!" Ari said sternly. Curse you Ari! I felt his arms grab me.
"Hey put me down!" I yelled at him,
"I don't think so, you're not running away!" Ari said sarcastically.
"Put her down you mongrel, or I'll rip your arms out of there socket!' Edward threatened menacingly, the werewolves growled in agreement, and the vampires hissed. I raised an eyebrow at them, Ari set me down.
"If you so much as touch a hair on his head, I will personally kill you all one by one…and it will be painful!" I shot my darkest death glare.
"Oh so your picking him over us!" Alice yelled out.
"He's my brother! Family always comes first!" I snapped back at her. Everyone gasped.
"Bella, I thought you were an only child," Edward said.
"Who the Fuck is Bella?" Ari yelled.
"I am, bone brain!" I whispered hastily. Realization dawned on him, and then he looked out the Cullen's and the Pack.
"Her name is Maximum Ride, get it right," He snapped at them!
"Would you care to explain this...Maximum," Rosalie spat at me. Damn, I thought we were over this.
"It's Max, just Max! I don't know how to explain to where to start or how to begin," I yelled at her. I sighed and closed my eyes.
Why don't you show them?
What? What do you mean Voice?
Close your eyes and think of your past, everything that you think, they will see.
Er…okay.
"I don't know how to tell you guys, so I'm just going to show you, okay?" Everyone nodded at me. I saw that the werewolves were still glaring at Ari, as were the Cullen's…well mostly at me. I scowled at them. If they were going to be petty like that than fine, be that way! I wrapped my arm around Ari's waist and he put his hands on my shoulder. I saw everyone's faces twist with rage. Geez, he's my little brother!
I closed my eyes and tried to remember everything that happened to me, and I sent them the images: being in dog cages, making sure the flock didn't get to bad, Iggy going blind, getting experimented on over and over again, the pain, the suffering, then escaping with Jeb, living together, taking care of Angel as a baby, discovering her psychic abilities, playing around with Fang, Iggy and Gazzy always blowing stuff up, Nudges being a motor mouth, learning how to fly, learning how to kick ass, Jeb disappearing, me taking care of the Flock, Fang my second in command, Angel getting kidnapped, me running into the Martinez's, Chocolate chip cookies, meeting Ari, finding out Jeb was alive after all, hating Jeb, saving Angel, going to New York to search for our parents, Brain attacks, Fang comforting me, Angel's mind control, finding the institute of higher living, getting my first real hair cut, fighting on the beach, My first kiss with Fang (which I lingered on longer then I really should have) Fang getting hurt, fighting Ari again, accidently killing him, Fang getting scratched up, taking him to the hospital, living with Anne, my first real date with Sam, Iggy leaving us, getting betrayed by Anne, (crap, I'm so sorry guys but I can't remember what happened after this part so I'm just going to skip a few scenes) Fang and I's kiss in the cave, the one that never seemed to end, getting captured by the school, pretending that Angel betrayed us, escaping the school with Ari, the Flock splitting up because of Ari, going to Germany, getting captured, finding out who my real mom is, my big fight with Omega, Ari getting taken away by Jeb after our fight, the flock getting back together, the Flock ditching me, running away to Forks. (A/N like I said, Ari doest die at the end of my version).
I snapped my eyes open; I saw all of them with their jaws dropped open.
"There now you know what happened," I said close to tears, I had just relived some of the best and worst moments in my life. I fought the tears back, they may have seen Bella cry, but Maximum ride doesn't cry. Now they knew everything, my other life with the Flock as my brothers and sister, Fang, my best friend, and they had seen my fights with Ari. The rivalry between us had faded away years ago.
"How can you forgive him so easily?" Alice asked us. Ari answered for her.
"I may have wanted to kill Max, but that was because I loved her so much, and it hurt me to see her hate me." I smiled guiltily.
"Can we...can we ...see them?" Carlisle asked; I could literally hear his curiosity. How many times have I heard that line before?
I smiled and snapped my wings out. "Pretty aren't they?" I asked them. All the Cullen's subconsciously drifted towards us, the Pack were sitting there staring at my wings. Slowly they edged closer and closer to me.
"If you think for one second that I'm going to let you touch my wings, then rest assured that there is no chance in hell that I'm letting you!" I warned. Big words always add to sarcasm! I saw disappointment on Carlisle's face. I looked over to Edwards face, and I wish I hadn't. I saw shock, betrayal and anger.
"Edward ...I" I started but he cut me off.
"You lied to me," He muttered.
"I never lied, I just kept it a secret." I said sluggishly. Yeah like that's any better.
"We gave you our secrets be-Max, You know about vampires and werewolves!" He pointed out.
"Yes, but …." I got cut off again.
"Do you think your secret is more important?" Rosalie spat at me. Rage, burned through me, calm down Max! Jasper's eyes shot to me, I put up my barrier so he couldn't change the way I felt.
"No…I was scared…that …you wouldn't like me….the same way…if you found out that I wasn't human." Everyone's face softened, Jasper and Emmet started chuckling. I shot them a glare. "What's so funny?"
"Bel-Max, You loved Edward before and after you knew he was a Vampire, you were best Friends with the Jake even though he's a mutt." Jasper told me, I threw a smile at Jacob. I looked at Edwards face, I still saw betrayal there.
"Edward…I'm sorry,"
"No you're not, you love him Bella, sorry Max. You love him in a way that you don't love me!" He yelled.
"I'm sorry," I mumbled not knowing what else to say.
"Is this why you wouldn't agree to marry me?" A growl came from a certain russet brown wolf.
"Look I'm sorry okay! I love Fang, what happened between us wasn't over for me; I thought that I would spend the rest of my life with him! I didn't know that I would fall for a vampire, I didn't expect to befriend a pack of werewolves it just happened!" I explained.
"When were you planning on telling us?" He said back angrily.
"I didn't think I'd have to, if you changed me into a vampire my body would have been frozen as a human, not as an Avian-hybrid!" I sighed, "As selfish as it sounds I'm trying to protect you from my past, the worst the Vulturi could do to you is kill you, but Itex can make your life living hell! You saw what they did to me and my flock, the fact that any of us are still sane is amazing,"
"I still think you're crazy," Ari mumbled, I chuckled and elbowed him. I heard him mutter an 'Ow' under his breath. Whoops I forgot how strong I was. I looked at Edward, something in me clicked right then and there.
"Edward, look, I can transform into a human and back. Bella and I, we're like two separate people living in one body but the truth is, this is all me! I'm Maximum Ride, I hate being Bella swan. I was born to survive not to be taken care of. All my life has lead up to this, I can't settle down yet, the world still needs me!"
"So what you saying is that we're done," Edward asked his voice sounded all clogged up.
"No I'm saying that I still have a job to do, maybe in a few years…we could try ...again?" I shrugged, he smiled at me. This is what he wanted to begin with wasn't it? To wait a few more years.
Clap, clap, clap….
"Oh bravo, bravo! That was heart touching!" I voice came from behind me. I spun around.
WHAT THE HELL?
Im sorry I took so long!
This chapter is so much longer then I planned so be happy!
I want to say Sorry to Fnick, I promised her I would have this up yesterday but I didn't. : (
Please forgive me!
Anywho who do you want Max to be with Edward or Fang?
I'll put up a poll
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