(im sorry i disappeared iv been having writers block i gurantee chapters will get better as my story progresses plz rude comments are not appreciated considering im still new to this kind of thing i dont own any thing except Cora )

Cora's Pov:

i walked in the cafe and passed by a group of three girls they looked oddly familiar i ignored the thought and took a seat . Then i realized that one of them was wearing a moon ring then before i could even start jumping to conclusions , A tall girl walked to me with her friends and said hi in a way to enthusiastic which may or may not have annoyed me but i said in an allot less enthusiastic tone what do you want and then she said i love your necklace (which are like the ones from h20 just add water ) I replied yeah thanks i bought it at a jewelry shop i like your ring . Then the tall girl said im Lyla thats Nixie and she's Sirena . then i replied coldly listen i am not dumb you are mermaids and i dont have time to waste so if you could just get to the point . They seemed rather shocked then that Lyla girl looked rather annoyed and then she said lets go we dont need her help then Nixie said stop thinking about yourself its for the pod Sirena said Lyla shes right they explained to me what happened with that Zac guy and how he dosent trust them anymore and yada yada yada . Then i said so what do you want me to do they replied Just help us he dosent know you so get his trust and dont lose it .

Zac's Pov

I just cant stop thinking about that Cora girl her brother Luke is one of my best mates and he never said anything about his sister who is also flawless how could he not have told me about his hot sister who just shows up and says she was at bording school at least it wont be hard for me to learn about her cause she is going to Sun Coast any way i need to focus on getting the trident and Cora is making it very hard with her gorgeousness .

(how did i do reviews are appreciated i really tried to use all the tips given i used puncuation and really tried to make it as long as i could will be writting soon bye )