First, I would like to thank Jenna for her review and the fact that she find them unique and her citing though I'm not sure I understand what she means, so I would like ask you explain a bit more, reason is that their personalities while simple or vague and can be added on ton should someone claim them and just because those traits I listed are there, it doesn't mean they use all the time, it's like knowing someone is a genius yet you never seem them trying and being lazy, it's vague for a reason. The Powers, frankly only a couple really have a lot and that's because they were meant to, it doesn't mean they use them all the time for lots of people had a lot of powers in Charmed but we never see them use them all or enough to show it. As for it, Wizards are neutral in a way because of their magic they can hop between good and evil just like non magical humans, so yes they at neutral, some lean towards one side or another, my Thief Warlock, he's another version of the Phionex Witches, rejected both side and though the Phionex Witches are Assassin, they are neutral but are a shade in of Darker Grey. I am doing this to highlight that several being out there aren't pure evil or Pure good, because it is subjective at the end of the day and it's really just Grey with shades lighter or darker, with only select individual truly being good, evil, or true neutral with examples being Nymphs, Source, and Angel of Death . As for flaws, like I said one could argue it's their personality and whichever side of it you chose to take advantage of, or if someone claims them whichever information they add to them to make. After all I'm giving a lot of information and still wish for it to be unique should someone like them enough and use them. I will take what you said to heart though and try to add noticeable flaws and such, but it's difficult to do with these characters who are meant to be adopted for others to change and add things to fit what they want. If I haven't answered sufficiently enough for you, please tell me more about your concerns for I enjoyed the feedback.
Name: Galen Silver Vein (Prefers to be called by his Middle name)
Speacies: Human? Unknown
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Apperence: I feel like being lazy so just picture Tayler Launter when his hari is short, with no tattou from the twilight thing and having Green Eyes that are like Jade.
Personality: Sarcatic, Wise, Intelligent, Cunning, Funny, Romantic, Paintient, Lustful, and Easy Going. Though he known to be a prankster and occansionly will take things a bit too far, as he grew older he has learned to tone it down some but not completely. Has a stron sense for he believe to be right and wrong, and it doesn't always follow th rules of what the Good and Evil thing is, Examply being he will use his powers however he wants even if it is selfish, for they are his. However he won't kill or steal powers. He won't recklessy go after innocents that more or less will die the moment he isn't proecting them, but if he happens to be there he will step in and prevent it, after all he thinks that if you are present and able to prevent the crime in progress you should. But vision he follow because if it's future he doesn't always know when or if it would change, and if it's past, he might get curious to why he saw it but it's doesn't mean he will go and get involved with it.
Brief Bio: He isn't certain what he is, due to the fact that he has had demons think he is a demon, witches think he is a witch, etc. he isn't certain but he is certain about just doing his own thing and having fun along the way. He doesn't have much in the way of offenceive powers he mainly has defensives and supportives based, but he has found that a better mind makes for a better power anyway. He's not certain how he got his powers ethier due to not knowing his family and has only recently learned that he did have a mother who had the power cast Illusion like himbut tha'ts about all he knows and nothing else. He is searching for and identiy of who he is in the whole good vs evil, for he knows that while neutruallity exisits, true neutrally belong sonly to the Angels of Death in his eys, everythign else are shades of grey that allign themselves to good or evil more often than not. He likes to think that if he more good than evil, but he doesn't believe in not using his powers as he sees fit and that no one should punish him for using what's his by birthright. He's currently working in a small Café/Bookstore called the the Seekers Brew. He works there filling in just about every role while attending college, in which he is Majoring in Psychcologyy, Creative Writing, and Art. .
Powers:
Immortality: The ability to possess an infinite lifespan and an arrested aging process. (He doesn't have it active, but he has the potenial to unlock it or if he never does, pass the gene down to his child and etc.)
Reconstitution - The ability to be reformed again after being vanquished. (demon attack reveled this when he was 16 and this lead to possibly believe he was related to the Phionex Witches who claim to be neutral but are on the darker shade of grey)
Regeneration - The ability to heal rapidly from any injury; the rate of recovery depends on how strong the user is. (Active since he was 9 when he cut himself and it healed quickly much like his force field it grows strogner as time moves on)
High Resistance - The ability to survive otherwise lethal attacks from physical and magical harm (active since birth)
Agility - The ability to lighten one's body and make oneself more agile. (Active since birth making him respon and move more quickly compared to others his age and progressivly got better)
Illusion Casting - The ability to create illusions which alter the victim's senses and perception of his/her surroundings. (He's always had this power though he only truly noticed when was 11)
Intangibility - The ability to render one's body intangible, allowing them to pass through solid objects. (New, he's only had it for awhile)
Invisibility - The ability to become unseen by the naked eye. (Inlcude Projective and he's had it since 11 though he believes it's an evulution of Illusion Casting))
Potion Making - The ability to make potions. (Always had, since anyone could make it, but he's not the best Poiton maker but not the worst etheir)
Mediumship - The ability to see and communicate with ghosts. (Always had)
Spell Casting - The ability to cast spells. (Always had and is actually very good at them even to shorting spells)
Sensing - The ability to sense the location of other people. (Always had, though he believes it's more of awarence, much like someon people get for friends and such, just having the feeling, over time he understood what it was)
Enhanced Senses - The ability to have extremely advanced senses. (Always had, though just believes he has better sense than normal people, much like how some people just see or hear better etc.)
Immunity: The ability to be immune to certain powers, spells or potion. (Immune to all Spells no matter who casts, and to Powers that he has. Can still be effected by other powers and potions) (Isn't aware of this power at all but active since birth)
Scrying - One of the basic abilities of a witch, the ability to search with a crystal to find a lost object or person. (always had)
Cloaking - The ability to make someone invisible and unable to be detected (Has, though he isn't sure if it's by product of his spellwork, invisability, or Illusion casting, or some combination,)
Healing - The ability to heal injuries and diseases of others, unless that person has already died. (Unlike Whitelighters, Elders, or Witchlighters, he can heal anyone no matter who they are unless they have dies. (Has but he doesn't know what his percise trigger is for he needs more than just love and has only used it twice once on a pet and another on friend. Possible regeneration advancedment)
Inspire Creativity - The ability to create and direct creativity with one's presence. (Has though he doesn't know it, just beleifs he can help others brainstorm and often has his own case of brainstorming when he writes or paints, draws, or sculpts)
Literary Manipulation - The power to absorb all information a book contains. (Always had though he belives he is just a quick learner with good memory recall for what he has read)
Omnilingualism - The ability to understand and speak any language without extensive training. (He has though not fully, in away it's advanced of Literary Manipulation for he was able read about other languages and start to practice them with ease to the point it sounded like he was speaking as a first language. Making him Multilangul. He isn't aware he has it)
Spirit Dominion - The ability to have control over spirits. (Doesn't have yet, but he can unlock it this would come from Premetions, Mediumship, and Sensing.)
Resurrection - The ability to resurrect the dead, could be others or could be oneself. (Doesn't have but can unlock it but only if he masters Healing which he is having trouble with, otherwise is would stay locked and being passed down)
Shredding - A form of teleportation that allows the user to disperse their molecules one place and reform elsewhere. Remote) (Has it and he believes it's connected to his Reconsution and Intnagibility that he's recently got)
Power Negation is an extremely powerful magical ability to cancel out the magical powers of other beings as they are being used. It can also be used to reverse or undo spells as well as nullifying the power of some magical objects. (Doesn't have it unlocked but he will the same time he unlocked Immortality if he enver does though it will be passed down to his child)
Catoptromancy - The ability to see distant people or places through mirrors. (This is an evovled form of Scrying and Premonitions)
Dream Leaping - The ability to project into peoples dreams and manipulate them. (Has though at first he just thought it was him controlling his own dreams with Lucid Dreaming, though over time he realised he could do more with it, it was interesting to let some his teenage hormones out in. As well as get vengece on thoughts who ticked him off in a relativly safe way, though he wonders if it's related to Illusions for Dreams are often Illusion of the reality we seek and or deny of)
Force Fields - The ability to control a shield of great amount of concentrated force. (He has it sicne he was 16 and it's gotten stronger he has gotten older, in time he may be able to combine some of his powers into it and such, though he wonders if this power came from cloaking? He isn't sure)
Hydrokinesis - The ability to create and manipulate water. (Honestly he has this and at first it was just small things like only controlling what was already present but now he can conjure the water, he might if lives long enough learn the powers of Cryo (Ice), Hygro (Mist/Fog), Aero (Wind), Electro (Lighting), Atmo (Wheather)kinesis. Dew there connection, but this is only if he lives long enough.)
Hyper Speed - The ability to move extremely fast (Evovled form of Agility and Enhanced Senses and it's not active but it might, or just being passed down.)
Premonition - The ability to receive a vision about the future of an object or person with or without touching them or those. (He is a Trained Seer with all aspects unlocked, though it doesn't mean he full control even if he can see past, present, and future. He's gotten better though still much in the way of activly calling the visions forth though he has an easier time calling visions of the present forth, which might be related to Sensing)
Molecular Inhibition - The ability to slow molecules down completely, causing them to crystallize, encapsulate a being or object in ice. (Has it though he hasn't used it yet, but it's avaible to be used so brand new)
Molecular Immobilization - The ability to slow down the movement of molecules, leaving the being or object immobilized. (Already had unlocked at 14.)
Molecular Dispersion - The ability to utterly destroy an object or being by ripping it apart on a molecular level. (Still waiting to be unlocked, but will gain it)
Suggestion - The ability to plant thoughts into the mind of another, bending them to your will. (Always has this, though right now it's passively not actively, for he sometimes does this when dreamleaping or just when he realy wants something he unintentially puts ideas in other peoples heads and gets what's he wants, it's passivly something that's compelty unreasonble though in time he may discover he can do this and might try to take a more direct avenu which could open other pathways within Mind Manipulation)