I DO NOT OWN ONE PIECE! (WISH I DID THOUGH)

I'll probably use ideas from other anime's and that, also tell me if I make a mistake.

Text - this is for the voices inside Luffy's head
Text - this is inner thoughts
Text - this is for attacks


Chapter 2 - When the hopeful become the hopeless


An hour passed when suddenly Akainu got the upper hand and punched whitebeard in the gut, though it wasn't magma infested. The tall man hunched over spilling blood from his mouth, akainu swiftly ran behind him and leaked magma from his fist. This was the real thing.

''It's over old man THE NAVY WILL WIN!'' The whitebeard pirates shouted for their farther. ''OYAJI!''

Luffy woke up suddenly, the shrieks and cries of grown men infiltrated the atmosphere. At that moment Straw hat twisted his body to evaluate the scene, Jinbei was sat wide-eyed with his single hand on the young boys head, which was kinda comforting, although he could feel the fishman hands scrunching.

''uhhhhh... what's... happening...?'' Luffy managed to drag out while his eyes were adjusting as the exhaustion climbed up his leg.

Jinbei slowly orbitted showing the pain in his iris. This caught the young boy by surprise, I've never seen him like this, I wonder wha- ACE! Luffy, who didn't care about his health, picked himself up and ran towards the edge of the giant ship.

He peered at the visual in front of him. Akainu nearly hitting the old man's back, the phoenix frozen and a- ''GET YOUR MAGMA HANDS OFF OYAJI!'' The fire-fist roared. A sigh of relief escaped Straw hat's mouth, Ace is alive!

The now smirking Akainu turned around. ''What a surprise... Gol D Ace ,'' The last part made Ace flinch. HOW DARE HE CALL ME THAT! Vigorously, fire busted out of his body and emotionally torn apart the fire-fist sprinted towards him.

''ACE STOP YOI!'' Marco screamed, HE CAN'T DIE NOW!

Expeditiously, the adrenaline kicked in, unable to stop himself furthermore ignoring the phoenix which left the hovering man to anxiously wait. Akainu disappeared and reappeared to the side of ace pulling his arm back ready to punch.

Ace ducked while grunting and called out ''ENKAI,'' which caused flames to come out of his arms and fly in the middle of Akainu's chest. However, it was useless as the admiral stood emotionless.

Ace finally felt a burn go up his arm, How the hell... Luffy caught sight of this and bellowed ''ACE!'' The lava from the admiral managed to burn fire, well of course lava is hotter than fire. Straw hat thought finally comprehending what was happening.

''Well look who's awake.'' Akainu muttered.

''Luffy-kun stop moving around,'' the fishman stood up and re-placed his webbed hand against Luffy's shoulder again. ''You must remember what I said before you went unconscious.''

The young boy blatantly oblivious to Jinbei's words focused on the admiral and the second division commander, Ace-kun whatever you're doing please don't get yourself killed. Your brother is clearly worried about you... Jinbei self noted.

''Never mind, we'll deal with that problem right away.'' Akainu stated. ''KIZARU!''

Fire-fist became aware of what he meant and swirled his head to see the light admiral pointing his fingers like a gun to where Luffy's heart was while Straw hat was glaring away from him absent mindedly.

''LUFFY!'' Ace shouted unfortunately it was too late though.

Luffy turned around half way when a single bullet of light phased through his body letting crimson blood ooze out of the hole it made, which trickled down his stomach making Ace pause in horror. ''Luffy...''

Straw hat's eyes were unseeing but people could only imagine the agony the young one was facing at this moment. His body fell forward. Time altered to a drowsy capacity as stillness engulfed the battlefield. Luffy... Ace followed his brother and fell to his knees.

Garp, who was being held down by Sengoku, was now softly crying letting tears escape his eyes but he wasn't sobbing. He couldn't stop himself. The flashbacks of him and Luffy infiltrated his mind, Luffy... My grandson...

Meanwhile Akainu lifted his arm into a fist in addition slowly walked towards ace, who was emotionless. ''This is it pirate prince, the navy will also get their way whether you like it or not,'' the admiral laughed.

Straw hat laid there lifeless, Jinbei tried everything to no avail. Shaking him, shouting at him. It was hopeless. Luffy was dead. Nothing more... Nothing less...


Impel Down

The young boy stopped in front of Ace's cell, he hoped that Ace would be there but he wasn't. Jinbei took notice of him, A straw hat. This must be Luffy, the pirate empress was telling the truth then...

Jinbei told him where Ace was also telling him to hurry morever When the boy slowly vanished the fishman was left to his own thoughts. Who is this boy? To break the impossible. To accomplish the inconceivable and yet to charge into another struggle more hopeless then the last and ace knew.

''My brother really would break into here. He does stupid things without thinking all the time, since we were kids he's always been reckless and made me worry about him. THAT IDIOT!'' Ace really was worried.

Jinbei quickly gave in and sat silently. I hope he get's to him soon.


This can't happen. All the effort to save his brother for him to reach his impending doom. Jinbei felt limb, and vibrated rapidly. Tears left his eyes, he was stunned. He's never cried for a human before, it gave him a weird feeling.

''Luffy-kun why did it have to be you...?'' Jinbei muttered.


Luffy's mind

When the young boy opened his eyes he was in complete darkness. No light. No sound. No one there to talk to. Are my eyes even open? Luffy became struck with stigma as flashing images of what happened before filled his conscience.

He remembered the light admiral behind, having his hand against his heart. Did I die...? Straw hat didn't react with optimism or cheerfulness that he died for Ace, he reacted with fury and confrontation.

I was suppose to become pirate king, I WANTED MY DREAM TO BECOME TRUE. I won't see my nakama ever again, which I'm very worried about, they maybe dead anyway. Straw hat's teeth scrunched together. I won't ever know if Ace gets out alive...

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO N- I can give you what you want... If you would let me... The young boy paused, who said that? You know exactly who I am. Straw hat gave a bewildered look even though he was in blackness.

I don't think I do. He felt something swashing beside him, Water...? WATER! Startled, he tried to pick himself up to no avail as the liquid seemed to be bind to his body. WHAT'S GOING ON!? Don't be alarmed, I'm helping you. I'm the one keeping your conscience alive and well suited.

I am the voice of all things, the sea, the forests and even the wild animals. He laid there shocked, that's what Roger had wasn't it. So do I have the voice of all things? You're quite right, I am the one that talked to you all those years ago remember.

What do you want from m- I don't want anything from you but I know you want something from me. Just let me devour your body. The raven hair boy heard crashing from a distance, it was a familiar sound. Earthquake... no. Maybe a volcano... definitely not that. Visions of natural disasters flew across his head.

He abruptly felt the shallow water caress his cheek furthermore anxiously meditating of what it was when it came to him, WATERFALL! Quickly, the liquid enveloped his embodiment leaving him to hopelessly drift.

Straw hat was pounding, every cell in his body screaming for oxygen. he keeps fighting the charcoal water until he feels like his head is about to explode, he desperately wants to take a breath. Let it drown you... Let the power infect your body. LET IT!

Slowly, black begins to seep in at the edge of his vision. Even though it was already black to begin with. He tried to open his mouth to breathe, but he only got salty water. Then, ever so slowly, everything faded away. Painfully, quietly. He didn't want to die like this, but it was too hard to try to fight, so he simply let the darkness take over him.

You can't fight the darkness, it always gets its way...


For the duration of time, Ace was sat there empty mouthed although the tears that managed to escape his eyes crept down his face obviously avoiding the hard inhalants he took every second. His body became limb. Flash backs tormenting his soul. He couldn't think he could advocate a life without his kid brother. His eyes, blurry, exhausted.

He could sense the presence of Akainu strolling towards him. He didn't flinch, he didn't move. He just let it happen. He could also hear the voices of the whitebeard pirates, calling him, wanting him to snap out of it. Even whitebeard himself but it felt like a distant memory. To just ignore he told himself.

''Was your crew, friends and your brother coming here just plain stupidity or just ignorance. Maybe death wishes that followed them to the ends of the ocean for their criminal activity. Your rookie brother was lucky enough to make it to the pier and free you from the scaffolding however... Luck doesn't favour the same person all the time, it's time to turn in Fire-fist Ace and follow your dad's steps into hell.'' Akainu declared. ''Like farther... Like son.''

Eagerly, the admiral heaved his fist back, waited for a minute, and rammed his arm forward. He was nearly at killing distance when a sudden roar erupted breaking every, not damaged, window that was on the destroyed island. This managed to snap Ace out of his trance.

A dark aura could be seen evaporating from the moby dick, everyone paused for a moment, waited, until a spec of yellow was flung into a mountain which was now just a pile of rubble. Vice admirals crowed around the scene pausing for the dust to clear. Just then one of them must of spotted something because at that moment he gasped inhaling, ''IT'S KIZARU... HE'S... HE'S... HE'S BEEN DEFEATED!''

Akainu quickly grew furious. DAMN! Lava leaked out of his hat and trickled down his body like blood, NO ONE DEFEATS ONE OF MY COLLEAGUES! He came to the conclusion that the ''accomplice'', he wasn't quite sure, was on the enormous boat. ''Tch''

Meanwhile Ace was now even more debilitated, not being able to stand on his feet to see the commotion made him disorientated but he kept trying over and over and over again. Not giving up. Suddenly he felt claws rap around his arms afterwards levitating him off the floor.

''Wha-'' ''Ace don't struggle. I know this is hard for you but don't let your brothers work die in vain yoi,'' Marco said dryly.

When the pyromaniac heard the word 'brother' stillness was sent down his spine, oh yeah... I forgot... Marco hesitated. SHIT I FUCKED THAT UP! The phoenix and Fire-fist, obviously distracted didn't notice the emotionless body that was standing on the deck, looking upon the audience.

Both of the commanders laid eyes on said person, examining him for a moment and finally expanded into big balls as they saw a tanned boy with raven hair and a unforgettable straw hat that waved in the wind. Also a scar that was a perfect semi circle under his left eye.

''That can't be'' Both of them muttered at the same time.

Akainu was taken aback. How can he be alive! Kizaru shot him right? The magma man hovered his glance over the young boys body taking in every feature until his eyes stopped, like millions of red flowers blooming, the droplets of blood fell to the floor and created a path.

The trail of blood soon disappeared into the wooden floor, the drops quite invisible to the human eye but something was wrong. Akainu spotted it as soon as possible, His blood it's... Black...

The admiral stepped forward. ''So I see that you did this... Straw hat Luffy''


I'm sorry but it's kind of rushed but I've noticed that I'm not very good with writing fights. I feel like I also need to include Iva, Hancock and Akoiji in the next one. XD