Here's chapter two, didn't get much of a feedback but it's understandable.( i did just start) The only feedback i got was from my friends who actually made the first character introduced. Again hope it's enjoyable to the few people who come across it accidently.
*ALSO UPLOAD WILL BE ATTEMPTED EVERY TWO DAYS!!!*
The story continues with our saiyans confronted by the seven characters who have descended.
the first to appear is Ikari a female demon, she has horns about the size of hands that curve outwards and then back in. She also has a tail that is thick in width and is decently long. Her facial expression is a constant serious face and personality is explosive when angered. she has a short bobbed hairstyle with golden blonde hair, her skin a light caramel tone. She's wearing light armor that covers both her arms, but only her left hand is equipped with a small glove like gauntlet and each fingertip is as sharp as a blade. Her top torso being the only thing covered by armor and her stomach is completely revealed. She has the exterior side of her legs covered with plated armor and the interior is left covered by steel mail. Not much is known of her.
"It seems i'll be the first to beat you four into a pulp, not really interested in beating someone while they're down but i don't really have much of a choice. Why don't you guys do that fusion thing again you'll probably be more of a fight like that."
SSJ4 Goku is finally able to speak but has a bit of trouble letting out his words.
"Well i wish we could also fuse, but we're not in the required state to fuse. You might just have to deal with us as we are."
As he finishes his statement he gives a giggle and smiles, Ikari rushes him and grabs him by the throat and then tail whip's SSJ4 Vegeta across the chest slamming him to the other saiyans.
"Listen you damn monkey im not here to be made a fool of, this is a serious matter that has not only placed your life but your realties entire existence at stake. Either you fuse now or you fail all of those innocent lives that are depending on you."
Goku struggles to breathe but to no avail, Ikari puts more force into her grip but is interrupted by one of the other beings.
"Ikari put him down we aren't here to kill them yet, if all they need is to be healed then let me handle this."
Ikari tosses Goku to the ground and walks away angered. She then looks back at goku and says.
"You better be grateful that any mercy is being shown by your enemy."
The one who spoke earlier was Senbo a female angel who was banished from her realms heaven, she was banished because she carried the sin of jealousy. And with that her jealousy for Ikari is enormous, she envy's how open she can be with her emotion and actions. Also for the fact that she doesn't' care of being told she is wrong. She has long jet black hair and bangs that she'd toss behind her ear, she was decently tall with a slender figure. She wore a pure white greco-roman garment and nothing else. She attempts to tuck her wings as much as she can because of how they're slowly being tainted black. Her choice of weapon is a long spear that is said to be forge by a god of her realm. She can also fight in hand to hand combat but chooses to weild a weapon. She flies towards the injured Goku and says.
"Do not worry child although we may be of opposite sides, and our ideals may differ greatly we still wish to understand one another till death due us part."
She smiles gently and attempts to heal Goku, but is interrupted by him. Goku confused as to what she just said he rolls away from her and quickly gets up even though he's in immense pain.
"listen lady i don't know how to respond to what you just said."
he pauses and takes another step back.
"But i do know that a really bad amount of energy is flowing out of you the most and i'd rather be strangled by the other lady then to be near you."
Senbo is infuriated but does not show it she grabs ahold of her cheek then smiles and says.
"oh my whatever could you mean im insulted to be told such a thing..."
She vanishes and appears behind goku kicks him behind his knee causing him to fall onto it and then grabs his left arm breaking it. She whispers into his ear.
"I'd like for you to say that one more time and i'll see to your torture myself."She walks away and laughs, and then turns too look at the pained face of Goku and says."Now be a good little monkey and let me heal you, you fool."
The other saiyans left in shock and feeling powerless to the beings currently in front of them. They let themselves be healed but don't seem to be pleased with it. SSJB Vegeta then speaks.
"What now, you've healed your playthings. Or are you expecting us to fight each other again, were you not entertained enough."
Another being descends with a stern look on his face, his name is Hikori he doesn't have any armor and only wears the lower parts of a set of gi. His aura appears to almost be liquid as it goes upwards and has a bright silver tint to it. He is a saiyan but from another reality, he seems disappointed looking at the saiyans from this reality but also confused as to what their transformations look like. In his reality he was the last of the saiyans and he hated to fight spending most of his time training his mind with meditation and his body with exercise. He knew that it didn't matter if he liked it or not and that it was inevitable for him to know how to fight.
"I don't know if i should be excited to see another of my kind or disappointed with how weak you are. Although your transformations both differ from my understanding and that has intrigued me."
he lands in front of our group of saiyans and begins to analyse them. He then draws his conclusion and states.
"It may seem we each achieved a different branch of transformations for ourselves."
He begins to walk towards the two SSJ4 saiyans and says while observing them more.
"One achieved it with rage and resentment to themselves or another."
He also walks towards the two SSJB saiyans and says.
"While the other achieved it with the assistance of the gods, and i reaching my fullest potential without a transformation such as yours. Now if i were to gain one i may become even more powerful... i'm glad i came to this place i've learned even more than i anticipated from my species."
The group is shocked to hear that this saiyan has yet to learn how to transform.
SSJB Vegeta and Goku look at each other and put on the potara earrings once again to fuse into Vegito. The SSJ4 Goku and Vegeta then do the fusion dance and fuse into Gogeta. Vegeto then speaks.
"To believe you're this strong without the help of any transformations or assistance from objects and dances is truly a terrifying thing to take in. But now we know that you must be the first to go out!!"
Vegito throws a right punch to Hikori's face; but is scarcely dodged and then countered with a ferocious right hook that impacts Vegito's face sending him flying.
Hikori then begins to make chase but is kicked by Gogeta in the face sending him the opposite way of Vegito. Hikori manages to stop himself and intensely launches off towards Gogeta who is currently flying at him. He spears the fusion in the gut and tosses him upwards.
Hikori then swings his right arm at the air releasing an energy wave that chases after Gogeta. as soon as he finishes though he is punched straight in the gut causing him to bend forward, Vegito then hammer arms him downwards to the ground. He then transforms into SUPER VEGITO!!! and releases a blade of energy that captures Hikori as he descends.
Goget at this time had already stopped ascending and managed to dodge the slash. He notices Vegito's spike in power so he begins to charge a ki attack BIG BANGG!!! while simultaneously transforming into a SUPER SAIYAN 3!! he then teleports beside hikori and shouts KAMEHAMEHAAAA!!!! hitting him face first. The two Fusions get together and Gogeta then speaks.
"Do you think that got him Vegito?!?!"
Vegito replies unsure.
"I can't say for sure but that was a powerful attack there is no way he could have survived that in a his base form."
Senbo then flies up to the saiyans and states.
"Do you really think that would have been enough to take that monkey down. What a shame you two have become, if you truly wished to kill that man you should have gone all out. i would have guessed you both should have understood since you're saiyans but i'll spell it out for you."
As the smoke begins to fade away a bright silver aura begins to light up the spot where Hikori had landed. Senbo continues.
"I've fought that monkey of a man and it pains me to say but he is the strongest being i've faced, i had to get serious and nearly killed him. But that wasn't the scariest part. You saiyans have a unique trait what was it called again... ahhh yes a Zenkai boost and man did he gain a lot in our fight, by now i'm sure he just got another one and i'm also sure he figured out your transformation technique. So either you figure out how you two can fuse and become something even more powerful or you beg your colorful transformations are enough."
The two fusions quickly gazed downwards to the enormous power that just spiked out of nowhere. They're left with panicked face's the energy kept on rising.
"Have you two ever wondered why you were still alive?"
Senbo says as she slowly flies away.
*TO BE CONTINUED*
HELLO GUYS HOPE THIS CHAPTER WAS GOOD I HAD MANY ROUGH DRAFTS AND DECIDED TO STICK TO THIS ONE. I'M SORRY IF THERE ARE SOME ERRORS I EITHER FAT FINGERED SOME LETTERS OR THE APP ADDED SOME WHO KNOWS BUT IM SORRY. AS I SAID I WANT THE VIEWERS TO CONTINUE THIS BUT IF THAT PLAN DOESN'T WORK I'M GOING TO HAVE TO CONTINUE IT LIKE THIS. *UPLOADS ARE EVERY OTHER DAY.*