Tiger: please bare with me, I haven't written per say in a long time. Let's hope I don't put this story up for adoption. This will be au, please keep this in mind; nothing will be exactly as the book...
Fireheart: ... Wouldn't that be crowfood then.
Tiger: oh hello Fireheart, do the disclaimer?
Fireheart: Tigerstar's Fire and Heart doesn't own Warriors the Erin Hunters do.
He had done it; he killed Redtail. Tigerclaw looked around the sunningrocks where the battle took place; he then picked up Redtail's dead limp body and started to drag it towards Camp. Tigerclaw's amber eyes gleamed with satisfaction never noticing Ravenpaw had witnessed the whole thing. Ravenpaw ran towards Camp before Tigerclaw got there. Ravenpaw slinked in Camp right after Rusty's renaming.
-Before Ravenpaw entered-
Rusty hissed at his collar and dug up dirt to cover it. Bluestar yowled, "From this day forth, you'll be named Firepaw; in honour of you're flamed colored pelt. The newly named Firepaw grinned as Greypaw his new friend yowled his name; that is when Ravenpaw burst into Camp a stuttering mess not exactly getting Redtail's death and murder straight. Firepaw whispered to Greypaw, "Who's that?" Greypaw looked at Firepaw, "Oh, that's Ravenpaw." Sandpaw and Dustpaw snickered, at Firepaw. This is when Tigerclaw came into Camp with Redtail's body saying how he avenged the former now dead Deputy's death. (He said same as cannon.) Bluestar looked saddened and Dustpaw yowled sadly upon seeing his mentor's body.
Tiger: I may or may not write more and edit this, but right now review suggestions..