The oni loomed over her, his breath hot and putrid as it washed over her making her gag. He reached down and lifted her by a fistful of hair. She cried out as her scalp erupted in pain. He reared back to strike and she cringed but the hit she was expecting never landed. The quiet of the woods was punctuated by a fearsome growl before she suddenly ended up on her butt on the ground. When she looked up, she saw a white streak tear the oni's throat open and it crashed down to a bloody and painful death.
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