First thing first: This is not an update. Sorry. BUT chappie 15 is almost done.
There is something important at the bottom, and starred points, per request of vetty123. Since there are so many characters, I will add the important things you need to know about the characters at the beginning of every chapter~
This is mainly for vetty123, who reviewed EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER IN A ROW!
Seriously, my email exploded with updates.
There are so many I don't even know where to start...
OH! If you see an asterisk, read until you hit the next one. It's important for everyone!
Chapter 2: Welp, you might already know this, but Kindness's (is that right?) *is a Virtue. Mother made them before Father even began to exist. They were made for law, order and peace.* That's basically all you need to know. Since you brought it up, I'll try to include it in a chapter...somewhere...
Chapter 3: *Ah, yes, Chastity was purposely made the only Virtue, simply so Lust could have someone ;) Don't worry, everything will be revealed in time~* I can't tell you if everyone gets dropped to earth, 'cause that would be a spoiler.
Chapter 4:
Original review: "...Mainly because I feel that Greed's life sucked enough as it is. I mean, think about it. He had a normal lifestyle, so no immortality. He had no real family - other than his wife, who didn't know he wasn't human. He was experimented on as a child - harsh enough to make him my favorite even without the other reasons. And finally, he's actually got a reason to hate people, unlike the other homunculi, who seem to raise hell just for the fun of it."
I'm kinda confused on this one. It sounds like you're talking about Wrath, but you say it's Greed...anyway, *I'm going to try to put more Greed x Charity in, but writing for Greed is hard for some reason.*
Chapter 5: Thanks! Writing Envy x Kindness is fun~ :D
Chapter 6: .:blush:. Thanks~
Chapter 7: *Clouds becoming solid...I dunno, but this is anime and fanfiction! Anything can happen! XD But to be serious, Charity can change the density of the clouds to make them either like mist or solid rock.*
Chapter 8: *Ah yes, the confusing part of where everyone actually is XD I frankly don't even know myself... haha, no, I've got a vague idea. It's neither heaven, nor hell. It's kinda like... the gate, but with no Truth or gate. I picture it as a huge white room with a star on the floor, and a balcony that has a door that leads to nowhere for anyone, but leads to somewhere for Virtues - that somewhere being wherever they want it to be. (I think I just confused myself) Anyway, you can just picture it however you want.*
Chapter 9: I've got nothing really to say to this, except thanks :)
Chapter 10: Ah yes, I was wondering when someone would mention *Blood-bending...taken from Avatar: The Last Airbender. It's only used in emergencies. It can be fatal if used incorrectly. Yes, it is kinda dark and creepy, which is why Temperance rarely uses it.*
Chapter 11: *It's an accurate assumption to think Kindness when to college before the story. And for the sake of the story, we'll say that's what happened XD* Hey, that's a good idea! Pierre and Adelaide would be pleased -_- XDD
Chapter 12: They never seem to learn... or listen, huh?
Chapter 13: Yay! Everyone's in character! That's my worst fear: I'll write something and everyone would be OOC :/ *Temperance is pretty calm most of the time, and I think Chastity was too caught up to really react much. The only thing I don't like about this story is how slow and relaxed it is. It's only because I have no idea what my plot is, so everything moves at 1/2 speed as I try to figure out how to get everything and everybody to do what I want them to XD*
Chapter 14: A solid 1/2 hour? Wow, you're dedicated O_o WHICH IS A GOOD THING! Yes, cliffies are evil. Very evil. Which is why I like writing them. Because I am evil. :D
Anyway, here's the chart of everything you need to know:
Name: Humility
Age: 9/293
Powers: Elemental control of Life and omnilinguilism
Earth name: Not revealed yet
Color: White
Description: Crazy white hair, dark blue eyes, freckles
Personality: Shy, can be hyper at times
Likes: Not revealed yet
Paring: (Not majorly) Pride
When in trance: Starts chanting in Latin and Greek
Starter Outfit: White shirt with a panda on it, pink capris, white sneakers.
Job: N/A
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Name: Chastity
Age: 26/243
Powers: Elemental control of Fire and telepathy
Earth name: Chase
Color: Red
Description: Black wavy hair, green eyes
Likes: Not revealed yet.
Pairing: Lust
When in trance: Not revealed yet
Starter Outfit: Slacks, a red dress shirt and boots.
Job: At a dojo
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Name: Charity
Age: 26/243
Powers: Elemental control of Air and invisibility
Earth name: Clarity "Claire"
Color: Purple
Description: Curly black hair, light blue eyes
Personality: Outgoing, sweet, generous
Likes: Not revealed yet
Pairing: Greed
When in trance: Can see the past
Outfit on Earth: purple corset with a sweetheart neckline, a ruffled purple skirt, thigh-high white socks and black, lace-up ballerina flats.
Job: College, meteorology
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Name: Kindness
Age: 16/168
Powers: Elemental control of plants and wall-crawling
Earth name: Kiara
Color: Green
Description: Red hair, green eyes, tanned skin
Personality: Hotheaded, sarcastic
Likes: Reading sci-fi, Dancing
Pairing: Envy
When in trance: Can see the future
Outfit on Earth: Faded jeans, a blue tank-top, a green crop jacket and white sneakers
Job: College, biology and herbology
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Name: Diligence
Age: 28/118
Powers: Elemental control of Lightning and night vision
Earth name: Not revealed yet
Color: Orange
Description: Reddish-brown, curly hair, purple eyes
Personality: Laid-back, usually curious
Likes: Not revealed yet
Pairing: Not revealed yet
When in trance: Body turns to metal (metal casing)
Starter Outfit: Not revealed yet
Job: Not revealed yet
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Name: Temperance
Age: 24/93
Powers: Elemental control of Water (and Ice) and teleportation
Earth name: Talia
Color: Blue
Description: Long blond hair, brown eyes
Personality: Calm, gentle
Likes: Baking, healing
Pairing: Pierre (OC)
When in trance: Not revealed yet
Outfit on Earth: Blue shirt, fingerless gloves, white mini-skirt, white leggings, brown boots.
Job: At a bakery
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And Forgiveness is not going to play enough of a major role in this, so putting her in here is pointless.
OH! 3vilPurpl3d0t and Ice Maiden Olivier, I will answer yours in the next chapter, since they're (their?) short
Any questions, comments or concerns please leave in a review.
Have a great evening~!
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