/Rant: Dear "Guest"

Okay, so, as I work on the next chapter of Remnant Hearts, I figure I should share something that happened recently. Apparently, some "Guest" (aka an Anon) decided to "Review" one of my older works (as in, circa. 2012), and decided to shit on it. This is mostly for my own peace of mind.

As for the next chapter: Don't worry, it's coming soon. I'm trying to bring it up to my Editor's expectations, and since there's no school today (1/6/2015) I'll work on it now.

The Review (copy-pasted from the Review page):

"No trollers or flamers." Huh? Whats the matter? You don't like recieving what YOU'VE been doing to other fanfiction stories? And don't worry, my review will be constructive.

First if all, the dialogue, stupid and seems to be rushed, I'm not impressed. "NOOOOOOOO! YOU GUYS! WHY" Uh...doesnt seem like something Sora would say, especially while watching his friends get blown to bits.

Secondly, "the economy sucks"? What economy are you talking about, in Kingdom Hearts, there are multiple worlds and I'm sure their "economy" doesn't suck.

Next, what the hell? You killed Donald and Goofy in the first chapter? Ok if you didn't want them in the story, why didn't you just leave them out in the first place? Which reminds me, escape pods? Wow...just...wow. And don't you think that it's incredibly unlikely that 2/3 of the escape pods jettisoned? Seems your stories aren't as good as you believe them to be huh? And also, "I think some Heartless or Nobody or something shot something at us!"...do I really need to say anything? The Gummi Ship should be able to stay intact after a single attack.

Next, Ice King's dialogue is garbage, its a tad similar to what he WOULD say, I'll give you that, but he wouldn't say "You mad, bro?"

When Sora uses the last of his magic, the last of his magic, he doesn't limp, I'd expect a headache, not limping.

Something else that bothered me besides the rest of this trash, "He pushed the thought aside as a girl with pale gray skin floated in, along with a pink girl and a girl made of fire." Where the hell did PB and Marceline come from? And then later Marceline said "So, should we bring him to PB? Maybe she'll know what to do." PB was just there right? Or did you forget what you wrote? And also, why does PB have to know all the answers to everything?

And lastly, really? You're just going to bring Roxas into this? He isn't living in Sora's heart or whatever, he is a part of Sora, he is Sora.

I felt sick to my stomache after reading this, and if I seem harsh, try reading all your old reviews for other stories and ask yourself if what you said is worse than what I said. I hope I applied enough "logic" to your story. Next time you have the DESIRE to talk trash on someone else's fanfiction, just remember, it's only because your stories are worse and you just gotta take them down to your level. You're not better than them, if this is how you act in the real world, you're not better than anyone.

My Response:

Dear Guest,

Why so bitchy? Art thou butt hurt? Are thine jimmies rustled? I assume you're coming here from The Light of Remnant, by ImSoAwesome or perhaps one of the other stories on the RWBY x KH page. Or perhaps you're one of the authors themselves, going Anon to disguise yourself. If so, I will assert here and now that every criticism I've made was absolutely valid.

Also, nice job criticizing a story I wrote 3 years ago. Yeah, I know it's bad. Shit, everything I wrote in 2012 was bad. I know that the date of publication for stories isn't exactly easy to see, but it's there. If you had taken the time to read one of my more recent stories, such as Remnant Hearts or what little there is of Meaning of Birth, you'd see that my literary quality has improved greatly.

You claim that your review will be "constructive", but all you did was point out flaws in this old ass story, without offering any solutions, improvements, or advice. If you actually read my reviews of The Light of Remnant, you'd see that I did offer improvements and solutions. I was also at least marginally supportive, saying things like "it's going well" and "keep it up", etc. etc.

You said that "it's only because your stories are worse and you just gotta take them down to your level". Whether or not that's true is a rather subjective topic; you can't arbitrarily define whether or not a story is bad or not. I mean, some people thought that Twilight was good.

To recap: your arguments and criticisms are invalidated by the fact that this story was written 3 years ago, as well as by your apparent inability to spell "receiving" and "stomach"; or at the very least, your inability to correct yourself.

Ciao,

Kuroyami Fuakaikuro

PS.

*What's *receiving *doesn't *it's *stomach