Ok im sorry this took long…guys… : ( I had to go on vacation for a month and I never had time ****
A tabby brown tom came out of a thick green leafed bush The tom stretched as he walked out of the thick leafed bush. "Finally some peace "he murmured
"Get over here you furbull!" Hissed a golden she-cat. "Yes mom... " Sighed the tom.
The tom padded up to his mother "hey Uglykit! What are you doing? Lazy furball!" a golden tom laughed
"Why does everyone hate me? " He silently said to himself. "Yes mom?" ugly kit meowed "Don't call me mom! You're supposed to call me Sunrise!" she hissed "but you let Tallkit call you mom why not me! "Uglykit whined. "Because he is a good kit not like you! " Sunrise hissed giving ugly kit a horrible glance. "Today you and your brother and Pinknose's kit are becoming apprentices today. " Sunrise hissed. "may all cats old enough to catch their own prey please come beneath the High rock for a clan meeting! " A black cat with white tip tail and muzzle named Whitestar hopped up on the high rock. All the cats gathered around the high rock. A sliver tabby she-cat with a unusual rosy colored eyes walked over to to sunrise and Pinknose who were chatting about their kits "May I speak with uglykit? Sunrise " "yeah sure whatever Rosepetal" muttered sunrise .
Ugly kit was talking to a white she-cat kit with named frostedkit"hey Uglykit " Frostedkit whispered " we are becoming apprentices today… I think your name ugly kit is strange…. Can I call you lionpaw? " she asked . " uhh sure " ugly kit whispered. "CAN ANYONE HEAR ME! I AM TRYING TO CALL UP THE KITS!" Whitestar yelled all the cats stop and look at whitestar " tallkit frostedkit and uglykit please come up here" whitestar called out there names. "Tallkit please come forward" the golden kit walked up. " until tallkit has received his warrior name he will be known as tallpaw, and his mentor will be Redspike, redspike a orange she-cat came up and toched noses with tallpaw. " Tallpaw! Tallpaw!" the cats shouted, " frostedkit and ugly kit please step forward " as ugly kit and Frostedkit step forward, Uglykit felt a tingle of excitement. "frostedkit until you have earned your warrior name you will be known as frostedpaw your mentor will be hollydeath " hollydeath step forward and toched his noses with his new apprentice the cats gave each other a anxious look, Ugly kit has herd of the story of hollydeath's frist death that star clan has given him another life…. Giving him the name hollyDEATH "frostedpaw! frostedpaw! " the cats shouted, " uglykit step forward, ugly kit you be known as ugly paw untill you have earned your warrior name. " Hissed Whitestar. the cats gave Uglypaw a hateful glance. " your mentor will be Shreddedear" Whitestar flicked his tail to dismiss the clan. Rosepetal ran out of the medicine den."Whitestar! Clawtail is dead! "
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