I've been trying to write differently, and this is my attempt at writing differently than normal. Please review, constructive criticism is wanted

Whenever Anakin and his Jedi seceded, most of the GAR went with them.

This chapter starts with Yoda and Obi-Wan conversing. Then, out of the blue, Yoda says "become the Grandmaster you must, to be the Grandmaster I want not." "But what will you do now Master Yoda?" Obi-Wan asks curiously. "Teach the Younglings, I will" replies Yoda.

The story then skips ahead a few weeks to Obi-Wan and the Chancellor conversing. The Senate has decided to create some new laws, for starters, The Jedi no longer answer to only the Chancellor, but rather the Republic Justice Department, and that when a Jedi goes on a mission, they must take a member of the new Security Division with them. Obi-Wan says that the Jedi will do that.

"I'm just gonna log into the Holonet for a few minutes before bed" Obi-Wan thinks to himself. And when he logs in, he sees a news article "Confederacy of Independent Systems renamed by new leader"

"The Confederacy has a new Leader, eh?, guess I better see who it is, could be trouble for us." says an intrigued Obi-Wan, as he opens the article. Obi-Wan contorts in shock when he sees "Anakin Skywalker named Head of the Galactic Confederacy." He thinks to himself "Why Anakin, why? Obi-Wan, still in shock, heads down to the Meditation Gardens, He is so distracted, he doesn't see Master Yoda in front of him, and he walks right into him. "Oh my, Master Yoda, are you okay? I''m so Sorry, I was just so sidetracked I didn't realize you were there." Obi-Wan says apologetically with concern visible in his voice. "Okay I am, Okay" says Yoda and then he says "so distracted what has you Master Kenobi?, Hmmmm" "It's Anakin, Master Yoda, he's become the Leader of the Galactic Confederacy, and I am worried about him, and I wander constantly where I went wrong. "For Anakin, you have done the best you could have." Yoda says in a way as if he has hidden knowledge. "What do you know that you aren't telling me, Yoda?" Obi-Wan says "Because if you know something about Anakin that I don't I would appreciate you telling me" "In another life, Anakin became a Sith Lord and killed the Jedi."

"How do you know this?" Obi-Wan says with very clear disbelief in his voice. "A vision, the force has given me" says Yoda almost apologetically. "Very Sorry, I am to tell you that" says Yoda.

Obi-Wan spends all night, grieving for his lost brother, when at 9 am, he gets a message on his comlink

"Meet me in my office ASAP" from the Chancellor. So Obi-Wan goes over to the Chancellor's Office

"Sit Down" says the Chancellor to Obi-Wan, so Obi-Wan naturally does as he was told. "Naboo is in a state of Civil War. It's because The Gungans want to go to the Confederacy because of The Confederacy's Equal Rights for all species and for their love of Padme Amidala. The Naboo however, do not want to leave the Republic their beloved Sheev Palpatine built, The Naboo have asked us to send Republic Forces to help them, so we are. Obi-Wan is confused and so he asks "Why are you telling me this?" "The Jedi and the Senate need to trust each other, so I am sharing information, and if you have any for me, I would hope you would share it with me, so, is there anything you wanna tell me?" "I don't have any information that you don't already have" says Obi-Wan. "The Chancellor thanks him for his honesty and excuses the Jedi from his office.


Padme runs to the Nursery, where Anakin was with Qui-Gon, their one year old son and Luke and Leia, their four year olds. Where she tells Anakin "The Republic has deployed their troops on Naboo to try and help with the Civil War." Anakin sits and thinks for awhile, before saying "We need to help, I'm going to go spread the word to the Army, could you call Beru and have her watch the kids for me?"

"Of course" says Padme, "Are you planning on leading the Army?" "I must, but don't worry, I'll come back soon, I promise." Padme tells Anakin "You know I'm gonna hold you to that, don't you?" he says "You better" as he heads off. Padme sighs, and just then, her messenger beeps and says "ASkyGuy: I love you" Padme smiles and then she calls Beru. Padme says "hello, Beru? How are you? Beru: Good. Padme: that's good. Anyways, I was calling to ask if you and Cliegg could watch Luke, Leia and Qui-Gon for the rest of the night? Beru: Why of course I can, and Cliegg keeps telling me how much he wants to visit Luke. Padme: well, he's welcome anytime, but it's hard to have anybody over with Our Schedules. Beru: Don't worry about us, we know it isn't intentional Padme: anyways, Beru, thanks for watching the kids, and I'll have food brought over for all of you at around 6-6:30, but I've gotta go, so I'll talk to you later Beru: goodbye Padme. "Hey Luke and Leia, come here please." Yes Mommy says Leia. I need to go to work and so does Daddy, so Aunt Beru is gonna watch you, and until she gets here, Aunt Ahsoka is going to watch you "Yay! Aunt Ahsoka!" and Cliegg is gonna come over with Aunt Beru "Oh no" groans Leia, and Luke cries "Ahsoka and Cliegg in one day? This is awesome, thank you Mommy!" there's a knock on the door, and when Padme opens the door, it's Ahsoka, and Padme says "I've gotta go, thanks again for watching them for a little bit" "What else was I gonna do? My ship was in the shop here on Raxus, and besides, I love playing with Luke and Leia and seeing Qui-Gon. See you later Padme, and tell SkyGuy hi for me." "Will do!" shouts Padme as she runs towards her office.

Anakin is up on a pedestal talking to his Army "Our Gungan brethren are under attack from the Republic forces the Naboo have called in" "WHAT ARE WE GONNA DO ABOUT THAT" Anakin shouts "WE'RE GONNA GO FIGHT THE REPUBLIC" shouts a mixture of Clones and Other Organic Species. "OKAY!" Anakin shouts. We're deploying tomorrow, so get ready, and then get some shuteye. Thats an order, and Rex, you come with me. "Yes, Commander Skywalker?" "would Ahsoka be okay with you coming?" says Anakin "Probably not" Rex replies honestly. Let's go ask her then, I've gotta head to my place anyways. Anakin tells him "What is my wife doing at your house?" Rex asks inquisitively "She's babysitting my kids, while her ships in the shop" Anakin replies, and then adds "at least that's what Padme said" and they walk to Anakin's house, and he sees Beru, out on the Porch with Qui-Gon "Hello Beru, how are you?" "Pretty good, how are you?" "I'm alright, how's Qui-Gon?" he replies. "Qui-Gon has been sleeping since Ahsoka held him about an hour ago." "That's great, speaking of which, where is Ahsoka now?" "upstairs with the kids" "Okay, I've got to go talk to her." as he goes upstairs to Luke and Leia's room,

and opens the door, to see Luke and Clieeg playing together on the Luke's side of the room, and their playing with their plastic Lightsabers, Luke's was Luke's Personal toy, modeled after Anakin's, and Cliegg was playing with a red saber with a generic handle. And Leia was playing with her plastic Lightsabers, which all three were modeled after Ahsoka's, she was dueling Ahsoka with her two sabers, while Ahsoka was using the plastic one, and trying to teach Leia how to use the saber. "Hey, Clieeg, your mom needs you, and Ahsoka, could you go talk to Rex please" Anakin says and Clieeg and Ahsoka leave. "Hey kids, I'm gonna be leaving the planet for a little while" Anakin says and then Luke says "Can I come with you?" "I'm sorry Luke, but no, you can't" "will you be back soon?" asks Leia "I hope to be, princess" he says "anyways, I love you both, and i'll see you soon." as Anakin goes downstairs with his kids in his arms. Ahsoka comes to him and tells him that Rex can go and fight, but he better come back in one piece. "Yes, Ma'am!" Anakin says and salutes. "Good" Ahsoka says.

At this point Anakin would be done working, and play with his kids, till Padme came home and in the morning, Anakin and Padme would have their lovey-lovey goodbye and I'm not good at writing those, so imagine it anyway you want.