Author's Note: This review was posted a few days ago. While constructive criticism is

appreciated, I need to get something straight. I don't wish to be all powerful. I don't

want to be mysterious or beautiful. I want to write. I want to create something new.

I write because I want to write, not because others want me to write. In all honesty

I probably am childish and cliche, but I don't care. I don't want to be my characters

I just want to create them.

JustACasualReadr chapter 12 . Sep 28

wooowww...Mary-Sue much? Its cool that you wish to be this all powerful, mysterious,

beautiful person, but don't you think its quite childish and cliche to use it as a character?

And... It's the 13th chapter so this won't be an update. Sorry for not getting a chapter up

for so long. With any luck I'll get another one up tomorrow. So sorry about all this I've

been so busy lately.

WarriorOfHades Out!