Chapa 16
GUESS WHAT ZAKAR. U SUK!1 AN GUES WHAT ZAKAR PAIGE DITCHED U COZ U R SO UGLE AND FAT AND STUPID AN IF A GURL LOKKED AT U SHE WOOD SCREAM AN DIE STUPIHEAD! UR SOO STUPID U FELL OFF A BIKE AND BROKE URSELF AN UNCLE BOB HAD 2 CALL AN ABULANCE 4 U AN UR IN HORSPITAL NOW IM NUT! I AM NUT SAYN NOTHIN TO MUM 4 U. I HATE U!
fUCK OF FLAMERS I HAVE OVA 100 REVIEWS THAT PROVES IM BETA THAN U. LOK DA SITE MADE ME BE A BETA READER COZ IM SOO MUCH BETA DAN ALL U FUKKERS!1 UR COMENTS R RUDE N DICUSTEDING!111 i NO UR POSSING REVITES AS ASH AND GRAY AND ITS NUT DEM THEY WOOD NEVA SAY DAT 2 ME STUPIDHEADZ!11111
I DUNT NED UR HELP ZAKRN UR FUKKN CHJANGED MY PASSY BUSTARD!1 UR SORTAY SUKS I HAV MOR REVEWS DAN U!111 UR A VEGEN NUT ME HA!11
BTW MINIPOEPL ZAKS GONG TO CUM KILL U SO TELL ME WHERE U LIFE! UR STUPID N CANT WIRTE!1 HES GONG TO CUM KILL ALL U COWRDS DAT FLAME ME COZ HE DOES WOT I SAY COZ MY UNCLE HES BOSS!1
UR SORTA IS TOOO LUNG AND MAKES NO SENCE FUKKER! WOT DID I SAY EARER? iM NUT A FUKKIN TROLL I AM BETIFUL PEERSON K! UR ALL TROLLS GO UNDER A BIRD AND DIE!
MY SOTRY IS DA BEST 1 ON DIS SITE COZ I FUKKN WROTE IT! SCREW U!11
Anyway hear is sum mor of my story for my fans (I HAVE MOR THAN U ZAK!)
Da old man made us cum. We went into hos house and he talked to us. I new u wood cum Ruby. I sawed in a dream u wood be the 1 2 save us.
I gosped. "Y me?" I asped.
"first u must talk to da Celibi. It will be at da tree of Tim." The old man said all mysterious. (c dis is how u build expense in a story)
Me and Ash went to the place where the tree was. It was a big oak and had lots of green leaves. There was a box in the tree. Then silver green light pored out and celbi appeared.
We wnet up to the tree and there was a box in it but nothin else. I opedn it na d there was a letter. I took it . there was also a gold ring with a ruby gem inside it and gold around the outside. It wasz up in da tree of time.
sUDddenly Celibate appeared!
I gasped and looked at Sah all shocked. He looked shocked aswell.
dA CELIBI spoek to us in a pokemon mind voice that sonded relly cute like in da movie!
"Ruby you hav cum here to put rite the unbalance of time. But the only one 2 put the time right angan will be fated to die!"
"WTF! NOOOOOO!" I was angfry and runned away. I dint want to die yet. Ash came after me beggin me to stop but i kept runnnnn. I burst into tears and cryed and wept. It was nut fair, furst Gary had dyed and now i had to dye and save the world.
"Its nut fair!" I weept into Ashes shoulder."Y is it always me who must save ever1 and fix things."
"Its because you r a talent." He sad assurely.
"I no but still why shold i hav to do anythin. When will it be my turn to hav somthing god happen to me. When will pople be able to do stuff wifout my halp. Its nut fair!
"I no I no." sad Saffire.
"Ya" sad Misty.
Ash looked me in da eye and sad softly. "Sara u r the most beauftifl person in da hole world. U r so smart and funny and ur soo god at writing! Ever1 loves u and the ones dat say they dont are stupid and can go fuk demselves like MINIPEOPLE and ZAKAR AND ALL DA ODDER FLAMERS!" He sad quietly. " U dont have to do ne thing?"
"No I fukkin do." I snaped. "Its up 2 me."
I had ben sad coz i didnt want to die but Gary was dead 2 so maybe we cold be 2gether in da afterlife.
"I'll do it I sad."
Everyone gasped and told me no but i make my mind.
AN: DIs is another clifferhanger it is my idea but you can use it in ur storyats coz its relly god writing. BTW Im a beta writer now coz they chose me to win dat prize coz im lots of talent. C I CAN RITE FUKKERS! Anyway i have a god twist (a twist in a story is a surprise) for da nex chapa which is ull c...!