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Tris
We get to the fear landscape room just in time, the initiates are all there, Calla is going first.
Tobias and I stand in the corner of the room just waiting, we really don't have to be here, but we are. Tobias and I just stand back talking about anything and everything. We barley notice that Julian has just finished his and everyone is clapping and cheering,He must have gotten out really fast.
There are only 2 more initiates that have to go through their fear landscape, Rachel and James.
James goes in, Eric injects his neck with the serum, and before I know it he is threshing around, and screaming, throwing his hands in the air.
He's out in what seems like 20 minutes, people clap for him, 20 minutes isn't that good, but I think most of them are clapping just 'cause they fear him, Julian, Rachel, Ian and Rex are the only one's not clapping.
"Rachel." Eric calls her name, she walks in, she doesn't look so scared not as some of the others looked. I watch as she fights off spiders, I know they are spiders by the way she acted when she went through the simulation.
Tobias and I stand just watching as she screams, I wonder what she is going through.
Rachel
As soon as the spiders are gone my father comes, he grabs me and pulls me into the bedroom, I try to get away but I can't his grasp is tight.
"Dad! Please stop!" I beg, but he doesn't stop he just comes at me. "Mom will be home, any minute!" I say trying to stop him. He push me to the bed and try's to rip my clothes off. I clutch them and try holding them on, but he is stringer than me, he tears them away, I scream and start to hit him. He slaps me as hard as he can, my cheek burns from the slap. I elbow him in the ribs and run out of his room, I run to the bathroom and lock the door, like I always have.
But, he always finds a way in, this time he broke down the door, he grabs me again, and rapes me. "You filthy slut!" He shouts to me, and leaves me in the bathroom. I curl my naked body up on the floor. I hear him coming back yelling, and cursing, I scramble to my feet and run to my bed room, I lock the door and put a chair in front so he wont get in.
When I turn around he is already in my room, I scream, he grabs me and starts to beat me, kicking me, punching me, once in a while he will leave bite marks all over my body. He comes down to the floor to try to rape me again, but I kick him, and I punch him, I beat him.
The next thing I know I am standing in a field in the Amity sector, I see Max, my old boyfriend. "Rachel! you made it!" He says.
"Of course I did, I told you I would choose Amity." I say and walk over to him, I give him a hug.
"But, you didn't. You choose Dauntless, you let me down." He says, I start to cry as I realize I let him down, I didn't keep my promise. I am still in the Amity field and my mother appears.
"Rachel. You would have been better off here, with me and your father." She says.
"Mom, I had to leave, Dad, he- he hurt me mom!" I scream to her.
"You let us down. You are a disappointment." She says and fades away.
The next person appears, it's one of my old friends, all I know is I didn't disappoint him.
"If you say one word I will shoot you! I didn't disappoint you, I did what I thought was right!" I say. He is gone before he says anything.
After those 3 fears 5 others come, One of them was drowning, After that there was not being able to trust people. Another was being factionless, the next was freezing to death, and the last one was Owls.
Tobias
When Rachel finishes her, fear landscape the leaders have smiles on their faces or they are laughing. She walks out the room and people congratulate her, her time seemed really short. Rachel just takes her seat, I watch as Julian goes and sits next to trying to start-up a conversation, she doesn't respond to him, I wonder what she went through.
I have always been curious on what other people's fears are, I have never seen anyone but my own. I don't think I would want to go through anyone's fear landscape just because, to me showing some one your fears is very personal, you are letting someone see your greatest fears and they could use them against you. I don't trust many people, I only trust one person, and that's Tris. I grab her hand, just thinking about her makes me forget my fears.
Tris, looks up at me and smiles, giving my hand a small squeeze. "I'm going to go talk to Rachel." She says, and lets got of my hand, and walks over to Rachel. She pulls her to a corner where no one, is and talks to her. I can see Rachel's eye's start to tear up, she nods a few times, and then she give Tris a hug, Tris hugs her back, and they break apart, Rachel walks back over to her seat next to Julian and starts to talk to him.
Tris comes back to my side and holds my hand again, we walk down the stairs, we pass the initiates at the all head down to wait for the final scores. Tris and I continue to walk to our room.
When we get to our room I feel it's safe enough to ask her what she was saying to Rachel. "So what was all that with Rachel?" I ask.
"Oh I was just talking to her and telling her she should try to move on from her fears. She told me some of them were to hard, but she will try, she told me about her fear of trust, mostly guys." Tris tells me.
"I see. trust is something a lot of people have to learn to do, even if it's not a fear, some people just have a hard time trusting people, because of their past."
"Yeah." Tris says and lays her head on my shoulder. I move her a little and lay back on the bed pulling her close to me, we lay together, not talking, just us together.
We've been like this for at least 20 minutes when some one comes banging on the door.
"Come in!" Tris yells, Christina barges in the room.
"Guess what!" She says, and looks at us like we are suppose to guess.
"Um, you're pregnant?" Tris says, Christina gives her a glare.
"No. So you know how I got the next week off, well I found out why!" Now this I'm interested in, I want to know why Eric gave her a week off.
"Well why?" Tris says.
"Because, Max told him to!"
"Do you know why Max told him too?" I say.
"No, I am about to find out though! I'm suppose to meet Max in five minutes!" She says and runs out the door. I wonder what it is, Max doesn't give anyone a week of, maybe for a really good reason.
Tris and I look at each other confused but, lay our head back down, we know Christina will tell us once she hears why she gets a week off.
- Page Break -
It's been and hour and a half since the initiates went though their landscapes, Tris and I make our way down to the dinning hall, we get there just in time to see the first face that comes on the screen. Rachel. I hear screams of excitement, I look over and most of the initiates are patting her back or hugging her.
I look at the screen to see the other Rankings.
1st - Rachel
2nd - Julian
3rd - Calla
4th - Levi
5th - James
6th - Rex
7th - Ian
8th - Shay
9th - Mason
10th - Autumn
Everyone claps and I her shouts of Joy, there was only one person who didn't make it into Dauntless, it was one of the Dauntless born, not very sure what his name was but I can tell he's very mad. Tris and I congratulate everyone but get out as soon as we can, we walk and talk, I push Tris playfully, she push me back and runs ahead I chase after, she runs to our apartment and bust open the door, I run in after her, I see how stand still looking at the couch, when I get in to see what she was looking at I see, Christina sitting on our couch crying.
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