Hey this is a thank you to Concerned Guest for noticing things I didn't noticed at all. Like she/he said, I will try to learn more and more about writing. But when I first started writing, I was in love with Hunter X Hunter, and I thought I would have been funny and exciting to have a vampire in the starry, so I thought why not, because this was just on pure enjoyment for me.
Well, soon after I wrote this, it suddenly got really likable for people and they keep asking me to keep writing it. And in a way, I wanted to balance her, but end up unbalancing her because it was harder than I thought. You see, I thought I gave Fiona the slight jealousy in her eyes while Hisoka just has plain sadistic guy that wanted to rip everyone apart. And I thought I try to put it clear that she hates Hisoka, she's overprotective of her friends, and at least tries to cool down when is the time to just observe someone.
If it's not too much, can you make an account and help me out on this. I would be very thankful if you did, but you can still help just in the reviews. Thanks for the help and if there's any more flaws I can't see, please help me out on it. Thanks!