Hey guys! Thanks to Concerned Guest and Cicilien Yuan, I am probably going to do a rewrite of this story. I know how they feel about this, and I should improve on my story. And you guys deserve an explanation for why I didn't put Leorio in in really important events yet. I thought it would be a good idea that he would have a HUGE roll in future stories, but I guess that shouldn't be an excuse for anything. I would like it if people gave me some suggestions as well how to make my stories better.
I try to base Grace off of myself and how I react to things. Like sometimes I also let my past haunt my thoughts, and how I try to act strong even though I'm not. But 78 percent of the physical strength she has is actually part of my wishful thinking actually. And thinking about me being a vampire used to be my dream when I was little. I just wish that I have this type of potential on myself even though I don't really. The more I write, the more I wish I can be as perfect as I can. And I think that's what's pushing me down on to story.
Trust me, if I wanted to not make them into Mary Sues, I would probably fail. I have wild imaginations, but it's really hard for me to balance out my characters. And thank you all for listening to me, but if this is an excuse for not be able to make a good character, then at least help me out on this. Please, I just need to know how to make a good character and that's it.