Thank you all for the reviews, and I'm sorry for not updating in awhile. I had a presentation to do for school. -.- 30 slides. I made 32 by mistake. I thought I needed 32. ~.~ Anyways, so here I am, thank you for supporting this. I can't believe I have 17 review already! In just having 6 chapter. OMJ TYVM TYVM TyVM keep it up PLZ! Anyways, I'm glad you all love this, and are enjoying it. I will (I hope) get into the story plot and all. Just some action maybe...I hope. ~.~ Anyways.
I'd like to say this. If you find so much mistakes, I would like to answer why. Because it was likely I was listening to something, while writing this. And I normally don't read this over. I apologize in advance. I am just lazy to read. Really I am. I'd like to ask this.
Do you want me to add yaoi?
For those who do not know what yaoi is. I will explain. It is boy x boy. Which means, a guy in love with another guy.
If I get enough people agreeing to this(By reviewing and telling me so). I will do it. And might change the rating to M if so. Why, will they aren't only in love, but I will make them 'do' things. Just saying. Anyways. If that is not to your liking, and even though there is much more people agreeing to it. And there is a big enough number of people saying no. I will say no. I do not want to lose my readers. But in return YOU'LL HAVE TO REVIEW EVERY CHAPTER I UPDATE. I will check every time if you haven't .. I have my eyes out you know. I'm very sharp.
Who have to review if they regret the yaoi, (and if enough people do) THEY have to review not the people who said yes. Lol.
I'd like to add, if there is yaoi. Tell me what pairings you'd like. I will tell you now. It can't be Kisame, Itachi, and Kakuzu. Because they're a little interested in a girl so no. Only Deidara, sasori, Pain, Zetsu, Tobi/Madara...etc. Ok. SO YA.
I forgot to say something, but now I can't remember it. Really. SO LET IT BEGIN.
I own nothing but anyone you don't know. Or place. or object...etc.
Tobi, or should I say, Madara, passed me down the hall. He seems to be in his 'Madara mode'. I quickly turned away. I never really...liked him. I woke up quite early today, of course getting some ranting and yells from Konan, for something little. Honestly, she is so annoying. So naggy and picky, and she nags more if something doesn't go her way.
"Alex, Kakuzu is pissed off, he wants you" Hidan yelled, angry. His neck was bleeding, and it seemed, his head so just sewed.
"..." I nodded and walked pass him. I walked in. "So what did you-WAH!" I was flown on the bed.
"I didn't tell you to leave the room"
"Huh?" Blink. Blink. Widen. "Eeeehhhh, why!" I pouted. I was held upside down with his thread. "Could I be placed upright?" He kept staring. He set me down in front of him, on the bed. He tilted my head, so he could get a better look at my neck. He grumbled under his breath. He patched it up, and he got up.
"Stay" He walked out.
"...HEY! I'm not a pet!" I pouted. I slouched on the bed, but then I heard a yell. I jumped out, and walked out. Making sure Kakuzu wasn't around. I followed the little whimpering noise.
"Do you have to be such a bitch!" The voice a deep voice. Madara.
"SHE SHOULDN'T BE HERE!" Konan yelled at him. He voice seemed to be in pain, or maybe sobbing. I leaned my ears on the door.
"SHUT UP! That isn't for you to choose, nor is it for you to get into. This choice belongs to the leaders. You may be his partner, but that doesn't give you the right to speak when not told to. Now be a good girl and play nice. Or I myself will convince Pain to 'kick you out' do I make myself clear." I heard something fall.
"...yes..." My eyes widen as I heard footsteps from the inside get louder. I looked to my right, and to my left. Looking for somewhere to hide. I ran to a corner, and began to walk, as if I just happened, at the moment to be walking through this hall. The door opened, and Konan's eyes looked down the hall at me.
"...Good Morning...You look quite...healthy" She seemed to choke at the nice words, and she quickly wanted away. 'Tobi' walked out after her.
"Ah, good morning Alex-sempai!" He said in his Tobi voice. I looked at him.
"..." I walked away quickly, till and hand held my arm.
"What's...the hurry?" He seemed to smirk under the mask.
"I. Don't. Trust. You"
"And he I thought you'd thank me. I got Konan off your back, and I'm letting you stay here. Is that anyways to thank your helpers...a superior?"
"...Let go" I pulled, and he chuckled darkly.
"Such energy" He let go, and I ran away from him, the chuckle vanishing. I slowed down, the further I went. I was barefoot, and the stone ground felt cold on my feet.
I froze. I was lost. I went to the wall I hit my head on it.
"Stupid, stupid, stupid, stupid, stupid, stupid, stupid, stupid, stupid" I kept saying it over and over again. I door, I hadn't noticed opened behind me. A man with long black silk hair, with a pale face appeared. I turned around, and my eyes widen at who it was. His eyes were like a predator as he stared at the prey. A smirk appeared on his face.
"Oro...chimaru..."Oh hell no. No, no, no, no, just NO. He advanced to me.
"Stay back..." He chuckled. I ran for it, I didn't see him move, or turn or anything, he just stood there. Suddenly a snake tripped me. And I fell, crashing into the ground, and sliding. He was suddenly behind me.
"How rude" He grabbed my leg and dragged me.
"Wait, stop, what do you want from me!" No answer. "HELP, SOMEONE, ANYONE HELP" I kicked my leg. "HELP" He kept grabbing me, and I kept kicking and trying to hold on to something. "ZETSU, KAKUZU, HIDAN, SOMEONE HAS TO BE DOWN HERE! PAIN...EVEN KONAN!"
"Huh?" A confused voice came in my ears. The dragging stopped. Orochimaru turned to see who was stupid enough to get this far here. I bet this was Orochimaru place, and seeing own dirty and dusty it was, I bet no one comes here either. Not that I blame them, this was Orochimaru after all. The odd person, who was smart, and yet stupid enough to come here walked forth. And an anime sweat drop accrued on my forehead.
His cloak opened up a lot, showing most of his chest, his hair was gray, leaning to being white, his scythe wasn't on his back, and his necklace was still worn. His purple eyes looked down on me, and back on Orochimaru.
"The hell are you doing here. I thought you were with Kakuzu." Hidan, as stupid as he may be, I shouldn't have thought he was stupid enough to ignore a yell of help. Or...maybe it was his name that brought him here. Either way it worked, he can't die, sooooo even if Orochimaru and him fought it was useless. Either way.
He was still stupid, I was on the ground being dragged by Orochimaru, and can't he see the picture. Can't be put two with two? I signed. Of all the members, I would of been even fine with Madara.
His head looked up at the pale man.
"The hell are you out here you freak" Orochimaru chuckled.
"I was only welcoming our new member is all"
"Well guess what snake head, and a clone of Michael Jackson. I am not a member at the moment, nor do I think I will in the future, so your 'welcome' is cancelled. And I hardly call, being dragged on the dirty floor with snake skin and dust everywhere a welcome" Sarcasm filled my voice. He dropped my leg. I got up. Dusting off the dirt and anything on Itachi's cloth. Hidan kept his eyes, and then gestured me to follow him.
"You've got to tell me how you make Kakuzu so mad" He said, laughing.
"Mad...?" I said a little panic in my voice.
"Yeah, he's cut my head off this morning, when I refused to get you...dam him, one of these days I'm going to kill him"
"Not until Naruto gets to him and Shikamaru gets to you" I said.
"What?"
"Nothing, could you hide me...from Kakuzu?" He gave me a odd looked.
"That might be good; he seems to rip everything in front of him..."
"..." DANM, he's that mad! I should have just stayed in his room.
"But, I can't help, got to go pray"
"WHO CARES ABOUT YOUR-"... "I mean, ok..." He walked away. I ran toward my shared room.
"Did you even see the mark she had after you bit her yesterday?" Itachi's voice in the room said.
"She didn't say anything"
"She's being nice, and you're taking advantage of it"
"If she doesn't want me to bite her, she could have just said so."
"Does she have a choice? It's either get bitten or your die"
"You should talk about advantages, when you took it easily by kissing her"
"She already told you nothing's happening"
"That doesn't make it any better" And they talked back and forth. Insults were made, and there voiced yelled.
Why are they so mad at each other, honestly, it was just a kiss, and he did only to get Tobi/Madara off his tail...Tail...ph...pha...hahahaha. Weasl's tail...hahahaa.
I walked away, before I started to laugh loudly. But the laughter died when I felt cold eyes on me. I turned slowly.
"Kakuzu...Hi..." He walked to me, head held high, and his green and red eyes on me. Looking down, coldly. I shrank under his glare. "Uhm...you...were looking for me?" Silence and tension was in the air. My heart beating fast, remembering what Hidan said earlier. "He seems to rip everything in front of him" I swallowed the lump in my throat. I placed my two hands together in front of my face. "I'm sorry! I heard a yell and went to check it out, and then, I started to run, and then I got lost. And then I saw Orochimaru, and he started to drag me, and, and, finally Hidan comes to the rescues to help me get away from Orochimaru, and he told me you were so mad. I'm sorry!" I said quickly, closing my eyes in doing so.
"Orochimaru...What were you doing there!" I winced at his voice.
"I told you...I got lost..."
"You idiot, how could you run not knowing where you're going"
"Haha...ya..."
"Come, I still need to do a check up on you...The way Kisame drank your blood wasn't right."
"...But...he needs it?"
"He drinks too much, and his bites are to deeps and violent. If he keeps this up, you might get a scar"
"...Oh..."
"I had a talk with him, and when I returned your were gone" His face stayed the same. He walked off, and I followed, looking down. He entered his room, and checked on my neck, and blood.
"Don't give him blood for...a few days...most likely three." I nodded and got up to leave. "Don't wonder off, and stay away from Orochimaru." I nodded. "Are you roommates still in a fight?" I nodded again.
"Could I stay here tonight too?" He nodded, and then I left. I hadn't seen much of Sasori or Deidara, must be on missions. So now what?
"There you are Alex" Konan said. "Have you seen Pain-sama?" I shook my head.
"Now that you say that...I haven't seen him all day."
"Oh, well-"
"...Why do you hate me?"
"What?"
"What do you hate me-?"
"I heard what you said" She interrupted. "I...I...I was just...You have no rights to question me on anything!" She said quickly taking her leave.
"...ooook" I turned around, and walked off. Hmmm, I wonder why Orochimaru is still here. Didn't he leave? And Deidara is here, so...shouldn't he be gone by now. Plus he's right in the corner of the cave. Far, far off, and his place looks like its rotting. What has he been doing?
WOW. OROCHIMARU HERE? WHY. Anyways sorry if it was short, and it didn't match the sneak peek, coz. I LIED. JKJK. I partly lied. So ya. ~.~ PPL REVIEW. so I can go on your name, and whenever I update, I'll PM YOU that I have updated. Because my alert thing is not working so REVIEW ANYWAYS SO I CAN PM YOU AND TELL YOU I UPDATED A CHAPTER.
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