Here you go, Zetsu and Zetsu. My friend who requested this, was mad that I didn't make it like a plot when I told her i started doing this.
Then yesterday she mailed me saying, HOW AMAZING it is, and she even said, no words can describe how good it is. Well...she didn't really say that, but close enough. She said, this is good and is looking forward for the plot ones :P.
I, myself realized how boring and bad my writing style from really my own, old stories. I have seen my problem and changed it. I have made and improvement from the day I come to Fan fiction till now. And I am very proud. I hope you keep making me happy and encourage me more by reviewing.
That. Would be much obliged. *meaning, many thank, for those that don't know*
I own nothing, but this story.
Dark zetsu talking : "HI"
White zetsu talking: "HI"
Zetsu and Zetsu
"Ahh...nng...AH" The white side of Zetsu moaned, for just entertainment, his black side splits with him and 'play with him'. Right now, his white side lay in bed, on his side, his legs and ass, on his other sides lap. While his white side sobs silently, his black side, strokes, and fingers him. All out of pure entertainment and pleasure, his black side has no emotions for him, but his white side does.
Why? Will his black side, to him are more like best friends, and best friends usually end up getting together.
His black side sees him as a brother, and normally, you don't become lovers. Which, he won't make love to his other side, only play with him, like brothers should.
"I hate you" Zetsu panted. His dark said added another finger and thrust harder and deeper.
"Try saying that again" Zetsu whimpered and help the bed tightly as he came hard on the bed, for the 5th time now.
"How...AH...long till you...nnnngh...stop?" He questioned.
"Soon, maybe...maybe not" He laughed like when Hidan laughs doing a sacrifice, and kept going, trying to make him come more.
"I hate you" He whimpered out as he came again. Every time he did, he would say these words. It hurts him, to say such words, and he knows his dark side gets hurt by too. He would continue to say those hurtful and harsh words till his other half stopped doing this unless it's true love. Suddenly, his other half stopped and sunk away. Zetsu's white half stayed.
"I hate you, I hate you, I hate you, I hate you" He repeated over and over again. There was a suddenly silent.
"I love you" he said quietly. His other half rose up from the floor.
"...If you wanted it that bad, you could have said" he tired.
"You, would only decline" Zetsu kept sobbing, till he felt something on his hole, his head snapped up to and turn to look. He screamed when Zetsu's dark side, thrust into him. Blood dropped out, and his other half panicked. He didn't want to hurt him; after all he's done for the past few years. He moved slowly, hearing moans from under him.
He kept going slowly till his other half nodded. And that's when he started to thrust hard.
"AAhhhhhh... NNNNGGGH" he screamed and moaned and clawed, and finally he came, along with his other half.
"I love you"
"Lair"
"I thought maybe you'd feel weird doing something like this"
"Lair" His darker half hugged him, and closed his eyes to sleep, not bothering to clean up. Zetsu had to smile, normally, his dark side was mean and cruel but right now, he's acting like some other half. That he likes very much. I love you too.
Their relationship advanced as the days pass, acting normal outside, but when together they act as lovers.
Sorry if it was shorter then usually and not AS nosebleed-ing as the others, but I was never good at doing Zetsu characters, but you will see better ones next time.
Which pair.
MADARA AND ITACHI. This is a request from a patient review, thank you for review and Enjoy the next ChApter when it comes. :D
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