I'm back, and with a new chapter! I only got one review for my fan made character for fluttershy. If you don't remember go back a chapter. So I hope you like this and also there will be some action soon and a double rainboom. But I won't spoil it. Well enjoy the story!
(Rainbowdash pov)
I was in a dream, and I was a hedgehog. Then I saw princess Celestia. She was a pony still, she told me something. I didn't know if Luna helped her in my dream or was I imagining. Well, she started to speak, "You, rainbowdash, are the fastest thing in all of the demensions. But there is one guy that is fast but not nearly as fast as you. But about as fast as you used to be before you got talent. He is the one." I was confused. "The one what. Tell me!" But then she left. And I was coming back to the world.
(Sonic pov)
I paced in the room waiting for the girl to wake up. But then knuckles entered the room. That was usually a bad thing saying he always has to start up some kind of fight. "You have been pacing for a while are you okay?" I answered with a nod yes.
(Knuckles pov)
I could see there was more to it. So I asked. "Are you sure you have not been yourself?" He answered and said, "I will always help any one in need." But he was acting as if she was family or... I stopped for a moment and thought about it. She was a hedgehog, rock and roll, not girly girl from the looks of her style, mysterious, and wings? Sonic is in l-o-v-e, love! Wow, I'm gonna tell him. "Hey sonic... Do you like her?" I smirked, and he stuttered. "N-no I don't, I d-don't even k-know her!" He blushed hard. "Okay,okay, whatever." He only turned around and huffed.
(No pov)
They were all in there waiting for a response from tails sence he was doing all the tests. "What information did you get tails?" Sonic said that as tails walks away the tests machines with a paper. "Well, they have some energy source like the chaos emeralds, but the opposite. And she has some kind of diamond element, and diamond sword, they also have this energy source. I put the Element and the sword in two different glass cases over there." He pointed to the left corner of the room. "A girl with a sword, thats not something you see everyday." Shadow took a step closer to the girl. "What the hell, she has wings!" They all came closer to the mysterious girl (its rainbowdash you stupid nit-wit. The fastest thing alive!). Then they heard a moan. "Wow!"
Rainbowdash pov)
I was waking up, and was aching all over. "Ouch. What the hell?" There were four hedgehogs, a bunny, a bat, and a fox. Then I looked at myself. "I'm a hedgehog!" They looked at me strange, like they thought I was always a hedgehog. Then a blue hedgehog came close to me. I backed away and fell off the lab table. He helped me up and smiled at me. "Hi, what's your name?" I then got ticked off, he wanted to ask me who I was after I just got sucked into this world. "First off, who are you and where in the world am I!" They looked in shock shock. They had never seen a girl with such a dirty mouth. Then the blue one spoke again, "Um... sorry you're in mobious. And this is Amy, the pink hedgehog, silver, the silver hedgehog, shadow, the black and red hedgehog, cream the rabbit, the cream colored bunny, rouge, the bat, and tails. " My real name is miles power, but people call me tails because of my two tails." Tails said as he lifted himself of the ground with his tails like wings. I then spoke to the blue one. "And who are YOU!" He looked at me and answered, "I'm sonic the fastest thing alive." Then I was pissed. "I dought that, you see, I'm the fastest." They all looked at her and laughed. Then she did a Sonic Rainboom out the door. They were shocked. Then she came back and made a rainbow through the house and landed gracefully. Then sonic did the same in the same amount of time, but he couldn't breathe anymore. "Well... Then... That... Solves that we are the same speed." "That was your best?" He answered back with a nod yes. He couldn't lie he was never so tied from runinng. Then I stated to talk again. "Well, that wasn't even half the best I could do." "WHAT?!" They looked at each other. "I want to race you sonic." He accepted.
The race
(No pov)
Sonic and rainbowdash were at the starting line. Cream was starting the race. Ready... Set... GO! They began and rainbowdash iimmediately did a Sonic Rainboom. It knocks sonic on back a couple feet but he got back on his feet and went on the race. He was way behind in no way to catch up with RainbowDash, she was too fast. He finally caught up with her but she only did a sonic rainboom again and knocked him away. They went up mountains, around curves and over Valleys, but soon it was almost to the end sonic had no way to catch up but then he caught up, it was a miracle. But then the worst thing happened Rainbow Dash had did double Sonic Rainboom. She crossed the finish line in last sonic behind about a mile. The double Sonic Rainboom then caught up and destroyed half of Sonic's house and half the land. Sonics was a mile away with his face planted into the ground with humiliation as he was beaten by a girl. Soon the double Sonic Rainboom had drug him and his friends, and they were badly wounded. the place looked awful and was halfly destroyed. Rainbow Dash plane over there and give sonic a hand and then said, " who's the fastest now sonic, tell me who, who, who." " I have to admit you are fast but maybe next time be less dangerous." " whatever sonic that's not the best I can do anyways I was still being easy." He looked at her with an uneasy look as he was prepared for more damage but she just stood there and watched him. " The most dangerous I could do is a triple Sonic Rainboom which was a myth until I could do it.(This information could come in handy later). " the first thing I did was a sonic rainboom but the second thing I did was a double Sonic Rainboom there is a difference in the strength of it." Sonic then asked what her name was, " By the way what is your name I never got to know it?" She answered politely for the first time, "My name is Rainbow Dash. The fastest thing alive." Sonic always thought he was the fastest until now he had found someone who was faster than him. For some reason he wasn't mad at all as if he actually liked her, but that can't be right, I don't know. His friends were still looking at Rainbow Dash wide-eyed as she had beaten him in a race. They stepped away from her and went behind sonic. They were afraid that she would hurt them some more with her double Sonic Rainboom. Surprisingly she didn't she just looked at them as if they were little children.
(Sonic's pov)
So what the heck happened out there. I thought that I was the fastest of them all but I found out I found out I wasn't but what if something had happened like an accident, I had to accept defeat this time she is totally faster than me. I hate being defeated and losing its just my thing. Silver stepped in the room now along with shadow. " Hey sonic can you talk a minute." I wave them in and they sat down on the couch in my bedroom. " So what do you need guys." They look at each other for the right words but then shadow spoke up. " I know you thought that you were the fastest and found out that you weren't but how come you weren't that mad or sad or anything." Sonic blushed and Shadow and silver saw what was happening here. Sonic tried to hide it but it only got worse and Shadow and silver started giggling. He tried to tell them that it was not what they thought but they kept on laughing and giggling. Then sonic notice footsteps near the hallway. They were Amy's, he knew he was going to be in trouble if Amy heard what was happening. " Be quiet amy is in the hallway so I would be quiet if I were you or she will hit us with her hammer and until she passes be quiet then we'll start our conversation again." They went silent and waited for her to pass. When she passed they started up their conversation again. " ok, ok I will admit, it I do have a small crush on her." Then the door came open and Knuckles came in. "I knew it all along, can't hide anything from me, expecially you Sonic." He looks like a tomato now with all the blushing going on but his friends kept on laughing as if he had fallen in the mud in kindergarten. He had heard someone knocking on his bedroom door they all went quiet and sonic open the door. It was Rainbow Dash and she was in a very lacey dress, she had a mad face on he knew he did not want to piss her off right now. " What's Wrong rainbow do you need anything?" She stared at him a minute her eyes turn red as if she was about to use the magic fire ice or water she wasn't sure which one but then she quickly controlled herself and look him straight and eyes. " could you tell Rouge to stop making me these dresses I told her that I only like rock and roll but all she makes is fancy dresses I need help at this moment." Sonic quickly raced and talk to Rouge about the dresses she said that if it wasn't fancy that she's not making anything.
It was a couple hours later and Sonic Shadow and silver we're still talking about crushes and how to intrigue Rainbow Dash and stuff like that but then there was a knock on the door again it was Rainbow Dash again. He answered it and she was mad again. " where's my sword and element of harmony tell me where it is now or I will crush your bones and skull and beat you and feed you to the birds tell me now!" Her turned red again and she was flaming hot with fire literally she was using her magic but she couldn't control it this time. Sonic silver and shadow watched in amazement as she tried to control herself but her magical only got stronger, soon he finally found herself to get controlled. " its in the lab where tails is you'll have to ask him first." She zoomed off into the lab and grabbed tails by his neck he didn't know what was going on or why she was doing this to him. "Where is my element of harmony." but he only choked, she let go of him and he turned to the corner and asked her if it was that necklace with the Lightning Bolt over there. She nodded and he soon understood why the power source was opposite of the Chaos Emeralds power source. " chaos and harmony are opposite of each other so that's how could I have been silly." She was confused so he explained everything to her about the Chaos Emeralds then she understood. Which Rainbow Dash's permission you told everybody else about how the Chaos Emerald in the Elements of Harmony were opposite of each other. He also explained about how hers was stronger because hers is harmony and harmony always overpowers chaos.
( no pov)
Rainbow Dash was telling them about her world in a equestria but she didn't tell them that she was a Pegasus then something vibrated in her pocket. Something about instinct told her what it was it was a iPhone 6. She answered it but a hologram came out the screen this was very unusual for her but then she saw a familiar face more like five. It was Twilight Pinkie Pie Applejack Fluttershy and rarity. They were in the regular pony form which made the others look strange at them. " We are glad that you're okay Rainbow Dash. Who are your friends Rainbow Dash I've never seen anything like that?" Then Applejack took a look at Rainbow Dash and noticed that she was a hedgehog like some of them. " Twilight, Rainbow Dash as a hedgehog if you haven't noticed." Twilight noticed and cursed out loud she didn't mean to and she covered her mouth. " yeah I know I'm a hedgehog and it's pretty fun here that now that I'm the fastest person and I raced the second fastest person, oh and here's the names of my friends." Amy was in the room too so Rainbow Dash had to be careful of what she said. " this one is silver, this one is shadow, this what is Sonic the one I raced, this one is tails this one is cream, this one is Rouge, and this one is Amy. Tails was kind of staring at the purple pony she was smart and in a way very beautiful. He snapped out of it and ask them what their names were. They told their names the purple one was Twilight the orange one with Applejack the pink one was Pinkie Pie the white one was rarity and the yellow one was Fluttershy. " Rainbow Dash I am working on a way to get to that world so that we can bring you home but it seems that you're having fun so we might as well work on the spell to have fun too by the way where is your element and sword?" Rainbow Dash looked at tails any quickly handed her her element and the sword. She told Twilight that she had told them about how the element works and she told her about how the Chaos Emeralds work. Silver then spoke. " if your friends are ponies then what are you Rainbow Dash?" She took a deep breath and told them that she was a Pegasus in and told them she lived in the land of Equestria and was raised in the clouds she also told them how she got her cutie mark and what cutie marks were. At this point her cutie mark was on her shirt that she didn't mind as long as she had her cutie mark.
we are getting into some stuff now! Like sayed in the beginning rreview, and tell me what you think. It is 11:22 in my time zone and I have the whole week of this week starting for Thanksgiving. Thanks for reading and sorry if the race part was short, I am tired and wanted to hurry up and get to the point. God bless you all and, have a good day, well night. Bye for now!
