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Italics = Inner most thoughts
Bold Italics =Thoughts of the 'Beast'
Chapter 17
Riddick stands against the desk inside the abandoned storage hanger, pants and belt undone and open, cock buried deep inside Rain, enjoying her slick, wet, heat. His beast is unusually quiet, sprawled belly up inside his mind, eyes closed and purring away contentedly; like a great cat lounging in the sun.
Riddick watches Rain writhe in pleasure on the desk below him, dressed only in her black thigh-highs. What a view. Her thighs wrap firmly around his waist, her arms around his back, clutching at his shoulders as he leans over her. He thrusts steadily inside her, hands grasping her hips for better control.
In and out, in and out, a slow and steady rhythm that has her squirming on her back in bliss with each new penetration. He takes it up a notch by hooking an arm beneath one of her knees, using it to hike her leg up, folding her in on herself and changing the angle of his thrusts.
"UNnnnn." Rain stifles a moan by biting her lower lip, a look of euphoria on her face. A tiny frown between her eyebrows has Riddick wanting to provoke her further.
"Don't keep it in, kitten. I wanna hear you." He whispers in her ear, taking the fleshy lobe between his teeth and nibbling.
"Gah!" She grabs his shoulders closer, breath hitching, inner muscles clenching around his erection. "F-faster…please."
"Hmm, of course." He complies, hiking her leg even higher and increasing his speed. She's so fuckin' adorable when she begs.
"Oh god, Riddick!?" She exclaims, urging him on lustily.
"Yeah?" He runs his tongue around the rim of her ear, teasing and tasting.
She contracts even tighter around him, adding a little thrust in her hips to help goad him along. "D-Don't stop. Oh god, p-please don't stop."
A quiver runs through his abs, a contraction that means he's getting closer to climax. He gives a feral growl. "Wouldn't dream of it, babe." Fuck, that's good.
Rain is in paradise. She can feel every thick inch of Riddick's cock driving into her…and she wouldn't trade the feeling for anything in the world. A-fuckin'-mazing.
Holy shit, did you just curse? Uh, I don't know; it's fuckin' hard to concentrate. Hmm…
Riddick shoves a hand down Rain's front, between their colliding bodies, starting a quick, circular rhythm with his thumb on her clit. She loses all perceptive thought, becoming an incoherent puddle of throbbing rapture, capable of only basic introspection. Her beast isn't much better, drunk off of their shared sensations and just as overwhelmed. Purrrr.
The overload of pleasure sends Rain's body building up to that special precipice, tensing and coiling for that explosion at the end. Yessss. "Aaaah. H-harder!" She encourages. So close.
He grunts an affirmative, obeying, never stopping his thumb on her clit and keeping the swift pace of his cock in her cunt. "Come on darlin', you're fuckin' beautiful, I ain't gonna last much longer."
Oh GOD!His growling bass in her ear is what finally tips the scale, sending her hurling over the edge into orgasmic ecstasy. "RIDDICK!" She sinks her nails into his back , clamping her inner muscles around him in a world shattering detonation that has her yowling like the kitten he's labeled her.
Rain's shuddering release sets off Riddick's own.
"Fuuuuck." He grunts in satisfaction, thrusting into her…once…twice…three times, burying himself deep and tensing for his climax.
She accepts him greedily, twitching and throbbing in delightful aftershocks and whimpering at the heat that fills her. She holds him tight while he lets it all go.
He groans, shuddering with a few lingering sensations before collapsing onto his forearms above her. He releases her leg and hips, pressing his face into her chest and panting in weariness.
Rain smiles; exhausted, but satisfied. Yup…A-fuckin'-mazing.
Riddick purrs as he relaxes against Rain's chest, a pleased rumble that's almost loud enough to echo in the warehouse around them. Mmmmmnnn. I think I can die happy now.
He unwinds from his high; tranquil, content, and unable to stifle his purring. Who's supposed to be the kitten in this relationship?
After a few sedate moments of gaining control of his pulse, a soft murmur from the chest below his ear has him lurching up in surprise. What he finds is bewildering.
Rain is asleep.
Full on, eyes closed, breathing slow, murmuring in her sleep, asleep…Okay I take my previous thought back, she's definitely the kitten.
"Hey, not cool." He shifts further away, wincing briefly when he pulls out of her. "Wake up." He nudges her shoulder. I don't know whether to take this as a hit to my pride, or a compliment. Compliment. We fucked her unconscious. Okay, I'll go with that.
"Wha?" She blinks sleepy eyes at him.
"No cat-naps, damnit. We've got a skiff to catch." He stuffs himself back into his pants, zipping and buttoning it, and re-buckling his belt. "You can sleep when we're off this hellhole." He snatches up his tank top and puts it back on.
"M'Kay." She agrees, but her eyes close again.
Riddick watches her, sighing in defeat when she stays unmoving. Fuuuuuccckkk. That seems to be the phrase of the day. Riddick ignores his beast.
"Really?" He asks the empty warehouse around them, exasperated. "I said I'd take care of ya girl, but this is a little much." He loiters around for another minute before grudgingly gathering Rain's clothes. No one better fuckin' find out about this.
He doesn't bother to try and sort out the knotted lace of her panties; he puts them in his pocket and grabs her shorts instead. He slides her shorts up her legs, pulling her off the desk and into them, then fastening the front. Richard B. Riddick…a fuckin' nursemaid. Suits you. Fuck off.
Rain stumbles, a zombie on her feet, eyes never opening more than a few millimeters.
Riddick raises an eyebrow at her drowsy expression. This is just ridiculous. "You gonna help with the bra?"
Luckily, she rouses at the mention of her bra, gaining enough sense to lethargically help him get it on her. Yes! Next, he shoves her shirt on over her head and adds his loop of lights over her shoulders. When she's finally looking presentable enough, Riddick grabs her hand and starts for the exit of the warehouse.
That wasn't so bad.
Don't talk to me.
Riddick gets Rain out of the warehouse and halfway to the skiff before their rough luck catches up with them. Two of the raptor-like creatures block the way around the last building to the skiff. Of course.
The creatures notice them at almost the same time, turning and starting towards them in that swaying walk of theirs.
"Time to snap out of it, Rain." Riddick mutters, releasing her hand and putting his arm out in front of her. He draws his shiv with the hand not protecting her. "When I say move, you make a break for the skiff."
"Huh?" Rain starts completely awake. "Wha? I-I'm not leaving you. No way." She's finally fully aware, stepping up close to him and frowning at the side of his head. "W-We stay together."
He growls, challenging the approaching creatures and showing his displeasure at her refusal. "Damnit. Do as I say, woman. I can't focus on fighting them if you're distracting me. I'll follow behind you." If I'm able.
She's still indecisive, reluctant to abandon him. "A-are you sure? Promise?"
Promise to try my best. "Yes." He replies, keeping his focus on the hammer-headed raptors.
"Okay." She relents; relief surges through him. Good.
When the raptors suddenly lunge forward, Riddick shoves Rain to the side, out of their path. "MOVE!" He orders. "You know the way!"
She obeys, thankfully, and the last thing he sees of her, before one of the raptors brings him to the ground, is the fleeing bounce of her tousled ponytail.
A/N: Will the two ever see each other again!? What will happen next? Stay tuned for the all-revealing conclusion of Whispers from the Soul! Please Review!
