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Chapter 48: Smile!
"Mr?! Blondie? Are you okay?!" Mavis, eyed the blonde in front of her.
"N-No, I-I... What is this?!" The blonde was in deep thought, "Oi, these blankets are rough! It's annoying!" He suddenly snapped as he jumped out of bed he woke up in.
"Oh, this is the bed Yuri puked on when he was sick, the puke must of dried up on it!" Mavis stated, a smile on her face.
Naruto turned to her, his right eyebrow twitching, "O-Oi! Don't just say that with a smile, brat!"
"Hehe, your facial expressions are funny!" Mavis's smile got even wider, "Ohh, I know! How about you join the guild?!" She walked towards the blonde, who had gotten up.
"L-Like hell - What the fuck are you doing?! Did you just stamp me with a Fairy Tail mark?! Why pink of all colors?! Oi, and you stamped it on my neck too! I'm going to kill you!" Naruto said, while glaring at Mavis.
The blonde haired woman only smiled, "It makes your neck look prettier!"
"Oi, I'm going not make the walls prettier by painting them with your blood!"
"I see that you really don't mean that, Sir. I can see it in your heart... You are very interesting.." Mavis smiled at the blonde once again.
Naruto just blinked, while running his has right hand through his spikey hair, "What a troublesome brat!" He mutterered under his breath, knowing fully well Mavis had heard him, but he didn't care.
Mavis just beamed with joy, "Let us go down stairs! You can meet the other members of the guild! You'll love Yuri! Zeira! She's my best friend! She can be shy but you'll love her too, oh -"
"Oi, I told you! I'm not part of your guild, I want nothing to do with Fairy Tail!" The blonde cut her off, however it was no use telling her that, because she ignored him, while reaching for his hand.
The blonde haired girl intertwined the fingers on her left hand, with the finger's on Naruto's right hand, the moment they touched hands, the blonde felt the warmness of her palms, the warmness spread throughout his entire body, it made him feel warm, and safe. It was a feeling that he was a stranger of, it was something he had never experienced before.
"O-Oi, what is this? I feel so warm... So safe... This brat.. What is she?" The blonde thought, as he eyed their intertwined hands.
Mavis just opened the door to the room they were in, and ran out, having no choice. The blonde followed her lead, while she ran down the stairs of the second floor they were in. Once they reached the first floor, he felt her detach her hand away from his, taking the warm and safe feeling he had felt with her.
"Everyone listen! I'd like you all to meet our new member!" Mavis said enthusiastic, everyone who was doing their own thing, turned to Mavis and Naruto who were standing next to each other, "H-His name - err what's your name? I never got it!" She asked him.
"Naruto U-"
"His name Is Naruto! So let's all make him feel at home!" Mavis cut the blonde off, causing his right eye brow to twitch, but he said nothing. The blonde just stood there blinking, his shoulders slouching, a lazy and bored expression on his face.
"Hahah! Why do I get the feeling he doesn't want to be here?!" A young teenage man with blonde hair spoke, a grin made a way to his face.
"That's because Mavis probably forced him to join, Yuri!" A young fourteen year old girl told Yuri.
"You think, Zeira?" Yuri grinned, as he turned to her.
Zeira nodded, "She does it to everyone who she comes into contact with!"
The blonde eyed the duo speaking, so they were Yuri and Zeira? The people Mavis had told him about, the blonde continued blinking as both walked up to him, Naruto noticed Zeira was walking a bit slow and at a shy pace.
"Yo, welcome to the guild - we are guessing Mavis forced you to join? Well - not really forcing you - you're welcome to leave, If you want!" Yuri grinned at the blonde.
Naruto stood there, his started picking his right ear with his pinky, no expression on his face. This caused Yuri to sweat drop, "Y-You don't smile much do you?"
"He's probably too lazy to smile!" Zeira commented.
"I know right?! A smile is the window to your soul!" Mavis added her two cents, "Smile for us Naruto-kun! I want to see you smile!"
"Oi, the windows to a soul are the eyes!" Naruto told Mavis.
"Nope! it's your smile - see? Smile like me!" Mavis smiled at the blonde, her index fingers pointing at her smile.
"Oi, I'll just take my leave - I have something I need to do," Naruto said, he he started walking, only to stop when he felt Mavis grab his wrist, once again he felt the same warmness from before.
"Please stay! Pwwweaaase? With a cherry on top! Be part of the guild!" Mavis pleaded to the blonde, while the blonde looked at her. He had to admit, she looked rather cute.
"Oi, I have to get back to my time! I don't belong to this era! I have to find a way to get back to my time!" Naruto said, as a thoughtful look was seen on his face.
"Huh? Y-You're saying you're from the future or something?" Yuri questioned the blonde.
Naruto nodded, "I'm from a better time than this shitty era - I have to go back to the future!"
"Mavis... This guy is weird - or more like crazy!" Zeira whispered to Mavis, who nodded! The blonde heard this and spoke, "Oi, you can believe that Fairies exist but that I'm not from the future?!"
Mavis's eyes widened, "How do you know I believe in Fairies?!
"I'm from the future!" Naruto replied with a smirk.
Mavis and the others stayed silent, the blonde shrugged his shoulders and started walking away, nobody tried to stop him - nor they spoke. They seemed to be thinking about what the blonde had said, was it really true? They wondered.
"Mavis! I have bad news!" They were snapped out of their thoughts, and looked at the entrance of the guild to see Precht walking inside the guild and towards them.
"What is it?" Mavis asked the older man, worry noticeable in her voice.
"While on my quest - I overheard that Blue Skull have formed once again.."
"W-What?! We took care of those bastards!" Yuri roared, "Even if they do form once again, we will wipe them out again, right?!"
"No." Precht shook his head, "I heard this time, they have all S-ranked members... not only that but they are coming for us... They want revenge - they plan on taking over this town once again!"
Mavis's eyes widened at this, she bit her bottom lip nervously, "If what you said is true, we need to be careful... yes! Be careful everyone, who knows what Blue Skull is capable of..."
"Mavis... I'm scared... Will we be okay?" Mavis turned to Zeira, who had worry written all over her face, "I still remember when they attacked daddy's guild..."
The blonde haired woman smiled warmly, "Of course we will, after all I am the greatest guild master, ever!" She assured her friend, who smiled back.
"I will be heading out once again - I will try gathering more information on Blue Skull, Mavis." Precht suddenly told Mavis, who nodded as the older man walked out.
"I'll head out, too!" Yuri quickly said, while he turned to the entrance of the guild and ran out.
Mavis and Zeira looked at each-other, neither said anything, until Mavis spoke, "Well, I'm going to take a nap - wake me up if something happens!"
"I want to nap too!"
"Let's take a nap together then!" Mavis smiled, while both walked towards the second floor of the guild, the other members of Fairy Tail just sweat-dropped at this.
Naruto was walking in Magnolia, it looked so different from the Magnolia he was used to. The buildings and houses looked to be in poor condition, but not only that but a Dragon Skeleton surrounded a portion of the city.
While the blonde walked he could hear people whispering, and pretty soon - the city streets were no longer crowded and filled with people, everyone had gone to hide. Naruto looked around to see cloaked figures on top of buildings, looking down at him.
"He has a Fairy Tail mark! Get him!"
"They are probably Fairy Tail's enemy... How troublesome..." Naruto thought, while he watched the figures on top of the buildings jump down, and run towards him.
"Oi! I'm not part of the guild! T-This is just a misunderstanding!" Naruto stated, while raising his hands up in the air.
"Bullshit! Kill this bleached blondie!"
"Oi, I'm not bleached blonde! I'm sun kissed blonde!"
"Like we care!"
The blonde jumped into the air, while a group of the cloaked men charged at him, he was about to attack the cloaked figures - when he felt a bottle smash with the back of his head - the blonde fell to the ground as he saw darkness...
"Mr! Wake up! Naruto wake up!" Naruto woke up to someone shaking him, and calling out his name.
"O-Oi... Gimme 500 more years..." The blonde groaned, his head was hurting, he could feel blood oozing out of his head too.
"We can't wait 500 years! I need your help - the guild was attack - they did sometbing to Mavis - I'm scared! She told me to run away - and too look for Yuri or Precht.. But I found you passed out on the streets with blood all over your head and face!"
Hearing this - Naruto quickly revived! He quickly jumped up only to fall down on the floor - he had a huge headache - he felt dizzy - before he could speak - he puked, the blonde started coughing, and as he did - he puked out blood.
"O-Oi... W-What is this..." Naruto said, as he looked at the blood on his hands.
"The same thing happened to Mavis! They injected her with some stuff - please help Naruto!" The blonde turned and looked at Zeira, the little girl from earlier.
"Who are "they"?" He questioned her.
"Blue Skull! About a year ago - they ran this city... But we defeated them... They have come back for revenge - especially against Mavis - who outwitted them!" Zeira, told the blonde who groaned as he tried to get up. He didn't want to fight - but he didn't have no choice but to fight..
"Oi - just take me to Fairy Tail, brat!" Naruto told Zeira as he leaned on her.
"Y-Yes!" She nodded, her face going up and down...
Mavis Vermilion, she had no idea what was going on - one moment she was with Zeira, the next moment she was surrounded by Blue Skull.
Geoffrey the Blue Skull guild Master spoke, "We poisoned you with a special type of poison - one that prevents you from using magic, and it shuts down your entire immune system.. your entire body... You'll be dead any moment now - unless you give us that treasure - and leave Magnolia along with your pathetic guild!"
"I-I... Won't..." Mavis said weakly, "W-We'll stop you..."
"Hahaha! How do you plan on doing that?! Look around!" Geoffrey laughed at her.
Mavis looked around to see everyone in Fairy Tail knocked out on the floor, she would of done something but she felt so weak and powerless. She could hardly even move.
"Boss, can we have some fun with her - before we kill her?!"
"Yeah! Let's have a lot of fun with her!"
The members of Blue Skull started speaking, while Geoffrey only smirked. He was about to speak when the doors to the guild burst open to reveal Naruto. He was grinning darkly, "You bastards! How dare you leave me, the main character left for dead!? Oi, you're all about to see hell on Earth!" The blonde grinned as he huffed in air and then yelled, "Flame Storm Howl!" as he shot out a huge beam of black flames mixed with red lightning at Blue Skull. The destruction beam hit them, all before destroying half the guild - followed by Magnolia's block.
The Blue Skull members fell to the ground as Naruto walked to the guild Master who was knocked out, the blonde dug through his pockets - to find the antidote to the poison coursing through his and Mavis's vains.
"Hahaha! There's only one of those antidote - so one of you will die - either way we Blue Skull wins, hahaha!" The Master laughed, as the bonde kicked his stomach.
"Oi, give this to that brat!" Naruto threw it at Zeira who caught it.
"W-What about you?"
"Oi, I'll be okay..." Naruto said as he walked out of the guild, coughing and puking blood as he walked out.
Zeira dropped on her knees besides Mavis, and she gave he the antidote. Minutes later the blonde haired woman slowly got up, "W-What happened?"
"Blue Skull came and poisoned you - but luckily Naruto came and stopped them - he gave me the antidote to give to you as well - I'm worried... He got poisened too, and there was only one antidote.." Zeira told her.
"Where is he?!".
"He left..."
Mavis quickly got up, "I-I'll go after him! You stay here and make sure everyone is okay!" as she ran out of the guild, to look for the blonde...
There he was - Mavis found the blonde sitting down as he leaned on a tree, in the woods outside Magnolia. The blonde had his eyes closed, he didn't seem to be breathing, which worried Mavis.
"N-Naruto?!"
"..."
"Naruto? Are you okay?!"
"..."
"N-NARU-"
"OI, I'm trying to sleep you annoying brat!" Naruto suddenly snapped at her, causing her to get startled.
Tears formed in her eyes, "I-I thought you were dead!"
"Main characters don't die - its plot armor! Remember this!"
"If you got poisoned... How are you alive?"
"I don't know," Naruto shrugged his shoulders, "I seem to have gotten immune to it!"
It stayed silent before Mavis spoke, "I-I... I found a way to take you back to your time - I heard... some rumors that a Fairy exists.. Rumors has it - she knows a spell called Fairy Time... It could send you back in time...if we find her - we can maybe convince her..."
The blonde stayed silent before he spoke, "Oi, I guess I'll have to be a Fairy Tail mage for the time being... How bad could it be?"
Mavis heard this and her eyes widened, and she couldn't help but smile at the blonde.
Once again to her surprise - he smiled back.
It was a warm smile,
A smile that put the brightest of stars to shame.
His pearlly white teeth shining back at her.
All the light, warmness and happiness had been poured into that one smile,
It was an honest, genuine smile, full of hopes, dreams, and joy...
To Mavis, the blonde's smile...
It was a beautiful smile.
Note: Yo, this chapter was inspired by Mahesvara Yotsuba, so credit goes to him! Thank you everyone for the ideas! Now I wrote this chappie at night and I'm sleepy - so probably many mistakes and errors.
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