Thank you Madhumanti. Yes as per your request I will change the name to Suman. And you needn't call me Di. I am only 16 years old and you can call me Ruchi.
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Continuation
Here Kavin and Dushyant are staying in a mess qwned by Suresh who is also uncle of Suman.
Kavin: Yaar chalo chutti to mil gayi. Ab jaldi se Packing Shuru kar deta bada maza aayega. Mummy-Papa kitne khush honge. Aur udhar jaake main tere liye koi achchi si kudi bhi dhundh lunga.
Dushyant: Yaar tu hamesha mere piche kyon pada rehta hai. Tu apni shadi ki soch. Meri shadi mein abhi time hai.
Kavin: Haan haan pata hai. Teri shadi ke liye to mujhe dura janam lena padega. Kisi ke saath patti hi nahi hai teri. Uss din ek ladki ke saath bheja to jhagda karke aagaya ki use India mein nahi rehna. Aur dusre din to tu gaya hi nahi jiske maine setting karai thi. Haye mere mar jaane ke bad tu mere bête(sons) aur pote-potiyo(grandsons-granddaughters) ka achchi tarah se khyal rakhna.
Dushyant: Yaar bus kar apna drama. Chal abhi niche khana khane jaana hai. Chal chal(trying to divert the topic).
Kavin: Haan haan chalk al jaldi uthke Punjab ki flight bhi pakadni hai.
As they went down they were greeted by Rahul(son of suresh) and Kedar(another resident of mess).
Rahul: kya Kavin bhaiya maine suna ki aap kal jaa rahe ho. Maine socha ki kal mere exams to khatam ho rahe hain to meri birthday party kal manayenge.
Kedar: haan haaan, do din aur ruk jaao na. Main, tum, dushyant, Rohan sab rahenge. Bada maza aayega.
Kavin: Nahi nahi Kedar da. Maine ticket kaat li hain. Waise bhi dushyant to haina.
Dushyant: achcha chalo chalo khana lag gaya hai. Dekhte hai aaj raju ne kya banaya hai.
After that they all chit-chat a little and retire to their rooms. Next day Kavin took his flight and since it was a Sunday Dushyant was in the mess only helping out with the preparations of birthday party.
Rahul: are waah ye sab to jaldi ho gaya. Mujhe to laga tha ki suman didi ko bhi aake help karna padega.
Dushyant: are ye suman koun hai?
Rahul: Meri chacheri behen(cousin). Wo bhi C.I.D mein hi kaam karti hai aur unka ab transfer hogaya hai Mumbai mein. To wo apni dost ke saath idhar hi rahegi.
Then only Sapna(Suresh's wife) came looking for rahul.
Sapna: are rahul tu abhi tak tayiyaar nahi hua. Jaa jaldi jake taiyar ho jaa. Suman aur ishita bhi aati hi hongi.
Suddenly someone rang the bell.
Sapna: Dushyant beta, zara dekhna na koun hai. Main abhi bohot busy hoon. Bohot kaam baki hai.
Dushyant: haan haan zaroor aunty.
He went to open the door.
Dushyant: jee kya chahiye aapko?
Ishita: ajeeb hai mere hi ghar mein bolte hai kya chahiye. Are ye mera ghar hai mujhe ghusne dijiye.
Dushyant: jee kisi anjaan aadmi ko main aise ghusne nahi deta. Zamana kharab hai.
Ishita: first of all, main aadmi nahi aurat hu. And secondly, main anjaan nahi hun. Isi ghar ki
Dushyant: to fir iss ghar se aap nikli kyon? Zaroor aapko nikal diya gaya hoga aapka jhagdalu swabhav(fighting nature) dekh kar.(laughs to himself)
Ishita(angrily): Dekhiye aap chup hi rahiye. Main ek C.I.D officer hu aur kabhi bhi aapko custody mein le sakti hun mujhe harass karne ke jurm mein.
Dushyant: to main bhi ek C.I.D officer hu aur aap bina sabot ke muje giraftar(arrest) nahi kar sakti.
Then only Rahul comes.
Rahul: are ishita di aap. Kab aai? Aur andar kyon nahi ghusi?
Ishita: tumhara ye tenant ghusne de to naa.
Rahul: are dushyant bhaiya, ye hi meri suman did ki friend ha. Maine kal jiske bare mein aapko bataya tha.
Dushyant: kya? I am so sorry ishita ji. Mujhe pata nahi tha i am really sorry.
Ishita: it's okay. Waise galti meri bhi thi. Maine bhi apna introduction diye bagair aapse jhagadna chalu kar diya tha.
Rahul: are lekin suman didi kahan hai?
Suman: kisi ne mujhe yaad kiya aur main aagayi.
All see her standing at the door.
Rahul(hugging her): chalo ab aahi gayi ho to maza aayega.
Suman: kaise miss kar sakti thi apne bhai ka b'day? Chalo uncle aunty se milkar aati hun. Chal ishita.
Ishita: haan aayi.(to dushyant) main aati hun.
Dushyant: haan haan jaiye. Bye (both smile at each other)
After that they all heartily enjoy the party. Since suman and ishita were tired they retire to their beds early...
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Ruchi