Strong Hate, Somehow Love?

by rainbowdash4610

Four has always been a douche and Tris is definitely not his #1 fan. Having hated each other their whole lives was as simple as can be...but after a specific night together their whole relationship is compromised. The entire aspect of their hate becomes more complex, and maybe, just maybe, it's for the better.

20. not a chapter

NOT A NEW CHAPTER! SORRY!

First off, I'd like to say I really needed some time off from this because all my free time would go here. And that's not okay. I couldn't manage my time because I have a shitload of stuff to do. I still probably won't be able to manage it. However, I am fully prepared to continue this now, especially with all the breaks coming.

Secondly, my laptop has been broken for 8 months. (Yes, procrastination.) And to tie this in with my first part, I figured I'd take off as long as it took to fix my laptop, because I really savored my free time.

I hate it when authors do this. In my defense, though, it's completely different to be a reader and a writer. I didn't understand their responsibilities until I took on the challenge. But I want anyone who is still paying attention's help on improving.

There are major dry spots, I feel, in this story and I'd like some constructive criticism. So if you could—any of you—take time out of your life and read the story or send me some stuff on how I can improve, I'd really appreciate it. I would like to better myself, really. In addition, I will also be rereading my story and seeing what spots I don't like or think should be fixed. And you're opinion would be incredibly valued, too, because I wouldn't like to take out anything that many of you guys agree on or find special about it.