Jatelyn0203: Its awesome, dude. U should continue ._.
Congrats, you're the first reviewer!
Castie-With-A-Shotgun: Well, you started off with Puns. Great story, and do I sense Athena/Poseidon fluff? Right, just because I know the author doesn't mean that I could spoil it for u folks... Well sorry, not.
Pothena will never happen in this story... maybe.
1234: Nice . that seems promising . I like the title . would like it if you continued it . it is definitely something I want to read , very interesting . I like chaos story's to it is rare to find others who appreciate them . I do realize it is hard , but please update soon ! I really do like \ love chaos story's .
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I agree with mostly everything you wrote...
PercaBethPotter: This is really good plzz continue
Thanks
Brsrkfury: I like it solely on the fact that's it's both of them running away not just Percy.
Totally agree 100%
KeyboardisMightierThanthePen: surprisingly good chaos story, not a low quality crappy one
Thanks, means more than you think. PS: Like your name.
Bluest-Ocean: This is a great story please update soon
Thanks and you're welcome
nihal: Should I continou!? - Of Course! I love chaos storys in general but your story seems to have two special facts which I like very much. Fist: Percy and Annabeth stay toghether ( no cheating couse I love them very much ) and second: In a lot of chaos storys Poseidon is beeing a cherk and favers an other son. Well I happen to love the relationship between Percy and his father so for me its good that he helps his son. I hope you will continuou becouse I would really like to read more.
I completely agree w/ you since those things piss me off sometimes with how cliche and unreal they are. Also, your wishes are granted cuz I'm about 10 chapters done by now, but you'll have to wait for them.
Guest: Roy did I really good job on the story hope u update soon
Your wishes are granted
PercaBethPotter: You're very welcome!
I hope you update soon, I'm looking forward to it.
Haha, no need to look too far.
Anyways, thank all of you for reading and reviewing! This story is just... Probably gonna be the best thing I ever do. Anyways... On with the story!
Annabeth's POV:
That was 1,000 chaos years ago – 100 Earth years ago, one year on Earth is 10 years on Planet Chaos. A lot's happened over the years; I dumped Percy, got promoted, and started dating Blade – just kidding, I'd never give Percy up. What actually happened? I'm now known as Alpha, Percy as Omega. Lord Chaos allowed us to form our own elite army – Tide – involving people we thought deserved a second chance (we're usually the second-to-last resort).
Percy was the leader; I'm his second in command. Our army has Silena Beauregard as Dove, Charles Beckendorf as Fire, Lee Fletcher as Lambda, Michael Yew as Mu, Ethan Nakamura as Eta, Bianca Star as Angel, Zoë Nightshade as Star, and Luke Castellan as Blade.
Our weapons got upgraded too, my Drakon sword was now coated in Chaos Diamond, Black Ice, and Red Gold all of which were melted in the flames of the Void, dipped in the Styx, blessed by Chaos, Ra, and Odin.
If you think mine seems cool, Riptide was coated with Celestial Bronze, Imperial Gold, Stygian Iron, Chaos Diamond, Black Ice, Red Gold also melted in the flames of the Void and dipped in the Styx, blessed by Chaos, Ra, Odin, and Bor – yes, Bor, father of Odin.
Both of our swords can kill any beings in the universe such as a titan and god.
So, I should probably shut up and tell you what's going on now…
"I can hear you thinking from all the way here, Beth."
"Shut up Seaweed Brain." I said as Percy came to our bed which I was currently lying on.
"Sorry, no can do, baby." Percy smirked, crawling onto the bed beside me.
I looked at the ceiling. Our room was gorgeous, it was big yet comfy. The main colors were silver, blue, and black. The technology was centuries ahead of Earth's. Everything is just – I can't even put it into words.
"What are you thinking about?" Asked Percy as he caressed one of my curls that escaped my bun.
"I still can't get over how amazing this place is." I exclaimed, my voice full of awe.
"Wise Girl, it's been 1,000 years…" Percy muttered with a fond smile.
"Still," I insisted, "The architecture here is just…
"Way better that Earth." I finished lamely.
"Do you ever miss them?" Percy asked and even though he didn't specify who "them" was, I knew exactly who he was talking about.
"A lot. I miss Thalia most of all though. And Grover. And Chiron." I listed, getting sadder by the second.
"Lord Chaos said we wouldn't have to go back until the huge war that they'll need our assistance on."
"Let's just hope it never comes to that." I whispered, yawning at the end of my sentence.
"Tired?" Asked Percy, lowering the volume of his voice.
I shook my head but my eyes and mouth betrayed me as my eyes started drooping and I let out another yawn.
Percy chuckled lightly, "Go to sleep, Wise Girl."
He started getting off our bed but I quickly latched onto his hand, "No, stay." I mumbled into his tan arms.
I heard him chuckle and felt him press a kiss onto my head, "Goodnight Wise Girl."
He tried to leave but I just gripped his arm tighter.
I heard him sigh – he tried for exasperated but it came out too fond to be anywhere near annoyed – and finally surrender by lying down next to me and wrapping an arm around me.
Ω
I woke up to someone clearing their throat.
"Yes?" I asked, annoyed that someone woke me up this early in the morning.
"Cuz 11:35 is totally early in the morning." I heard the voice say sarcastically.
"You can read minds, since when?" I asked curiously.
"Dude, just get ready and go to the arena."
"Ash, tell me!" I whined, curiosity getting the better of me.
"You serious bro? You're wasting your pride and dignity on me reading minds?" Asked Ash, raising an eyebrow.
"Be at the arena in 10 minutes with Percy, mom and dad are coming." She stated before she left.
Ash is the daughter of Lady Nyx and Lord Chaos, she's also in the highest rank in the army and is the heir to Chaos's throne (she wasn't given her rank, she earned it). She was named Ash since that's what she used to do as a child; burn things with flames and turn them into ashes.
Whenever I ask her what other powers she has, she changes the topic, ignores me, or answers vaguely in one word.
She has color changing eyes – a lot like Piper but Ash can control the colors – that turn mostly black, violet, or red and sometimes blue or green. Her hair is white – not like the grey ones old or stressed people get, but white – and is dip dyed (she claims they're natural and she's never dyed her hair ever) dark blue/ purple with black and red strands. She usually wears a grey t-shirt with a black leather jacket on and a blue flannel around waist, ripped jeans – sometimes shorts – and black worn out converse – apparently, she's been to Earth a couple of times.
Anyways, I changed into my black jacket that I got when I got when I advanced my rank in the army (everyone gets a unique one when they get ranked unless they stay in the same rank, the jackets show our ranks), a grey shirt, my black leggings, and my combat boots.
I shook Percy awake, "C'mon, we have about 7 minutes to get to the arena!"
He groaned, "I don't wanna-"
"Lord Chaos and Lady Nyx are going to be there today"
His eyes shot open and quick as lightning, he got into his black pants, a blue shirt, and the black jacket that he got when he became the leader of the army, and his pure black Nikes.
We got to the arena with one minute to spare. Everyone in Omega's elite army was there along with Chaos's entire army – hundreds of people.
A pitch black portal opened, Chaos and Nyx stepped out. Everyone bowed until Chaos said, "Rise my children."
"Is there a reason why everybody on Planet Chaos is standing here?" Asked Ash as patiently as ever.
"We have bad news." Nyx stated somberly.
"Well, what is it?" Asked Percy after a long pause.
"Earth is in trouble." Said Chaos, looking conflicted.
"Again?" Percy and I exclaimed at once.
Chaos nodded grimly, "There might not be an Earth left if we don't stop this."
I bit my lip, "But aren't Percy and I wanted dead by Zeus?"
Nyx looked over to Ash causing her to roll her eyes as she put on the hood of her jacket. Her face became blurred. If I didn't already know it was her, I wouldn't have recognized her.
"You can only see my face if I allow you to," Said Ash, "Nobody can pull down your hood besides you. If someone tries that isn't part of the army, they'll get a tiny electic shock
"Also," She pressed the button on the zipper that I was curious about, "The voice modifier." She said, her voice hardly recognizable.
Everyone tried on their hoods and their faces got blurred, there were a bunch of "awesome"s and "cool"s echoing for a minute until everyone took off their hoods and looked over to Lord Chaos.
"I'm sending Tide and Blaze to Earth."
"Both of them? I thought Blaze was only for lass resorts. " Asked a newer recruit.
"Exactly." Said Chaos grimmly.
"Blaze and Tide, start packing for Earth, we're coming with you." Said Nyx gesturing to herself and Chaos as he gave instructions to everyone else.
Ash pursed her lip, "Back to Camp Half-Blood?"
Nyx nodded as I stared at her and asked, "Back? You mean you're been there before?"
"No, it means I wanna ride a pony." She said sarcastically as Percy snickered beside me.
"When was the last time you went to camp?" Asked Percy raising an eyebrow.
"I was there when you got claimed Percy, same with you, Beth." said Ash, shrugging. We were walking to our rooms as we talked.
"What about the war?" I asked accusingly.
"You never realized it, but I was a huge part of both. I'm just really good at disguising myself. Also, give some 'monsters' a chance like you did with Mrs. O'Leary. Tartarus was actually kind of fun; I've been there and back a few times." Said Ash, her eyes turning a malevolent shade of Purple as she smirked.
My eyes widened, "But-"
"And you didn't die?" Percy sputtered, cutting me off.
I narrowed my eyes as Ash shook her head, "How do we know you're telling the truth?"
"How would you know if I'm not?" She challenged, raising an eyebrow.
"Go pack, we leave in an hour." She said as we reached Percy and my room.
"Yessir." Percy mock saluted causing Ash to crack a smile.
Ω
"Alright, this is how this'll work;
"Mom and dad are going to go using a portal. I'm also gonna make a portal for Percy, Beth, and me. The rest of you need to take the luggage into the shuttle, got it?"
"Yessir." Everyone saluted.
"Get to work." Said Ash, waving everyone away.
Ash walked over to us then took out her phone (it's special and she can communicate to pretty much anyone and anything with it).
"The rents left, let's go." She said as she opened the portal.
We walked through the portal. I looked around and saw that we were on Olympus, not camp.
"Hood up, modifier on." Ash muttered, putting her own up and on.
"I still don't think we should be here." I whispered to Percy in a voice that wasn't mine.
He shrugged but said nothing.
Percy's POV:
What the fuck, I don't wanna be here, was the only thought swimming through my head right now.
"Glad to see you made it." Said Nyx to Annabeth, Ash, and I, looking at Lord Chaos whom was standing in front of the door of the throne room watching the Olympians argue along with Chiron, the cabin leaders of camp, the Queen of Atlantis, some Roman campers, and the Hunters of Artemis.
"They've disappeared and they're not in the underworld, they're obviously the threat!" Exclaimed Zeus as if he solved the mysteries of the universe.
"Dad, you're paranoid. They may be alive but I highly doubt either Percy or Annabeth would turn against us. Maybe you, but not us." Said Thalia, standing at the foot of Zeus's throne.
"Lord Zeus… You're insane if you think Percy and Annabeth would threaten us!" Claimed Nico as he looked at Zeus with disbelief and defiance.
"I agree with my son. Brother, you're turning into our father." Said Hades as he gave a somewhat smile to his son.
A bunch of other gods stated their claims until it came to my dad.
"My son would never betray Olympus even though you betrayed him." Defended Poseidon, causing me to crack a smile.
"This is my daughter you're talking about!" Said Athena, offended at her father's accusation of her daughter.
"Do you even know her current location?" He asked, getting fed up with everyone's protesting.
"If I did, I wouldn't tell you since you want them dead." Athena bluffed since the only person who knew for sure that we were still alive was my mom and even she didn't know the reason and our location.
She told me that Paul passed away and Amphitrite disappeared along with Triton so dad asked Sally to become the Queen of Atlantis. She said yes and became immortal.
Lord Chaos cleared his throat.
"Who are you? Can't you see we're in the middle of an important-" Started Zeus.
"I highly doubt accusing the greatest Heroes of Olympus is very important." Said Ash as she raised a hidden eyebrow.
"Who do you think you are?" Thundered Zeus as the Throne Room shook.
"Awesomeness in the form of a person." replied Ash trying – and failing – to look innocent.
Zeus got mad, took out his master bolt and shot lightning at Ash. Ash caught the strike and redirected it towards his throne.
"Who are all of you?" Boomed Zeus, standing in front of his throne.
"The goddess of night, ring a bell?" Asked Lady Nyx, smirking at the King of Olympus.
"Lady Nyx?" Asked Nico and Hades, their eyes widening comically.
"So you have heard of me." Lady Nyx smiled maliciously.
"And you?" Zeus asked, pointing to Lord Chaos.
"The creator of the Void."
Athena's mouth dropped as she sputtered, "Lord Chaos?"
Lord Chaos grinned at her reaction, "The one and only.
"This is my daughter, commander of Blaze – her army – my heir-"
"And your worst nightmare." Ash cut in.
"Ash." Chaos finished. "This is Omega, commander of Tide – his army – and his second-in-command, Alpha." He said, gesturing to me and Annabeth.
"What is your business here?" Asked the Queen of Olympus in a hostile tone.
"You're going to all die if we don't help you in the next war." Said Ash in the voice she used when she went into her "commander of an army" mode.
"Way to soften the blow." I muttered sarcastically.
"What are you-" Started Athena.
"We don't need your help," boasted Ares, "I'm the god of war, and I think I can handle myself."
"Like you handled yourself many years ago against a twelve year old Percy?" Ash smirked when the fire behind Ares's eyes became full of rage.
"Besides, you're the first one that dies." Stated Ash, her smirk widening.
Apollo's eyes widened, "How did you know?" He whispered in horror.
Everyone look at Apollo as Ash shrugged nonchalantly, "I know stuff."
"So you've seen the war, have you not?" Asked Annabeth, speaking for the first time since we got into the throne room.
Apollo nodded and turned to Zeus, "We need their help, majority rules."
Zeus rolled his eyes, "Fine." He grumbled.
"All for Lord Chaos's help."
Dad, Hades, mom, Demeter, Hestia (she's an Olympian again), Aphrodite, Apollo, Hephaestus, Athena, Artemis, and Hermes raised their hands as Hera, Ares, and Dionysus shook their heads.
Poseidon smiled the lopsided grin that I see whenever I look into the mirror, "Welcome, Lord Chaos, Lady Nyx, Lady Ash, Lord Omega, and Lady Alpha. Where will you be staying?"
"Camp Half-Blood." Replied Alpha as she got sucked back into memory lane.
"Oh, should we clear some space?" asked Hermes as he took out his tablet.
Ash grinned, "Nah, I got that covered." She snapped her fingers.
"Nothing happened." said Dionysus with a bored expression.
Ash smirked, "Oh, really? Then I take it you haven't seen camp."
Hermes raised an eyebrow and pulled out his app for watching over the camp. His mouth dropped as he stuttered out, "H-how'd you d-do that?"
"Do what?" asked Hera, narrowing her eyes.
Hermes showed her his Tab and her eyes widened.
"What'd you do?" I whispered to Ash.
"You'll see once we get there." She whispered back.
"May I see it?" Asked Athena.
"Wow, that's amazing!" She said her voice full of awe as she looked at the Tab.
"Well, we should get going." I said, my patience wearing thin and my ADHD acting up.
"Yeah, we'll see you again soon." Said Lord Chaos.
"Wait, you said something about an army. Where are they?" Asked Athena, looking around briefly.
"On their way with our luggage in the shuttle." Annabeth said, pushing her bangs out of her face.
"Do we know any of them?" Asked Hestia with a warm smile.
"Yes and no." Replied Ash.
"What's that supposed to mean?" Asked Zeus, the vein in his forehead visibly popping out.
Ash ignored his question and just smiled.
"You have to answer me when I ask you something." Boomed Zeus, outraged.
Ash rolled her eyes, "In case you didn't notice, I'm more superior to you. I don't have to do anything. I don't have to be here, but I am so stop being a melodramatic toddler throwing a tantrum, and be grateful for once. What's some respect once in a while?
"Let's go." She said, leaving an openmouthed Zeus behind.
How do you like my OC, Ash?
That was a long chapter but the story's just getting started. Check out my other stories Music and Misery – co-written by Cas – and My Dilemma, also check out Castie-with-a-Shotgun and her story Masked Love that I'm co-writing.
Also, check out The Maze of Dead Ends by Castie-with-a-Shotgun.
And my other story that I adopted called It's Possible.
Review, spread the word, do whatever, flames will be laughed at.
Ω Yours in demigodishness and all that, peace out Ω
-Mal