This isn't a new chapter sorry I just wanted to respond to a guest review. If people want to review I do prefer you to do so using your accounts so I can respond to you personally and not have to do authors notes like this. though if you don't have one that's ok
I am also aware this is probably an overreaction but I'm sensitive at the moment. I am extremely tired as I'm working full time again, have commitments most nights after work and my grandmother just passed away, so I'm not fully mentally stable at the moment.
This is to donnermeister. I'm not sure you know the character of Venus or any of the other senshi well. If you haven't noticed they try to avoid killing humans. If it's a human they tend to heal them or try to convert them to the good side. They try to refrain from killing as much as possible, especially a human with no powers and that's what I was trying to convey. It would effect Mina cause he was a human with no powers and yes he was on the wrong side but she still would prefer to incapacitate instead of kill. It's what all the inners think. The outers are more ruthless but the inners believe in the good of people.
As for the scene being loose and slow. And cap losing his character ability. I had previously shown his ability in the first fight against Loki and I wanted to use this fight to show Venus' ability.
I'm sorry that you didn't like it but it was to show that Mina can fight as they didn't really get to in the battle against Loki.
In the next battle they both will be fully involved into it. Plus cap actually falls of and grabs on to something so it just works to have Mina save him with her chain. I'm not the only one that thought that.
He also saved her a few times in the scene so it's not like he lost his powers.
These scenes were to show that the Venus and Mercury are able to fight well maybe even better than the avengers.
I probably won't update this story for a while as reviews like that make me not want to write.
I know it wasn't an all bad review as it said it was a nice idea but insulting the rest puts me off writing.
Kathryn just FYI there is a story in the silver millennium with Loki and Thor in it. It's pretty good but Loki is paired with Serenity and Venus with Thor. I still like it. Check it out if you want it's called Transcend by MarvelSilver.
Thanks to everyone else for their reviews hopefully I will recover from the review that upset me and update this month