Hello People! First I want to say I am terribly behind in my homework b/c my laptop is down! So with that said, I'm trying to catch up, so I this is not beta'd and my next one may not be either! Not until I'm not crazy behind!
So, all mistakes are mine. I did read it a few times but I suck at comma's and tense. I know this about myself so it's okay!
This assignment was to write the same scene 3x different ways. Bland, Medium & Spicy! The scene was a man kissing a woman's stomach.
The Right amount of spice HW
Bland
Our mouths ghost over each other, as his hands pinch and knead one of my breasts. HIs kisses are light and airy as he trails down my body. I shiver when his lips meet the soft flesh of my stomach. One of his hands tickle up my inner thigh finding me wet and ready for him.
Medium
Our mouths ghost over each other, slow and sensual. Our tongues doing a dance as old as time, as his hands pinch and knead one of my breasts. His kisses are light and airy, I mewl as he kisses my neck, the pleasure running through me like a new summer breeze. I shiver when his lips meet the soft flesh of my stomach. His wet mouth bringing me a feeling of anticipation. Edward kisses and licks my belly button while one of his hands tickle up my inner thigh finding me wet and ready for him.
Spicy
Edward leads me into his bedroom. The California King dominates one side of the large room, it is a beautiful piece of furniture carved out of dark mahogany. Taking my hand into his, he walks me over to his bed. We stand there facing each other for a beat of a second before he starts undressing me. No words are spoken or needed, he knows I want him as much as he wants me.
My breath catches as he unbuttons my blouse, his eyes following the path his hands take. I lick my lips, staring at his beautiful face; those pink pouty lips, that perfect nose, and those eyes. As if he can read my mind he stares at me. I'm hypnotized by those money green eyes, while he peels my shirt off of me, his fingertips grazing my skin leaving a trail of goose bumps.
Turning me around, his hands trail down my spine to the zipper of my skirt. Fingertips rest on my ass, then one hand moves to unzip me. My skirt pools at my feet, and I step out of it walking towards the bed wearing nothing but my bra and panties. Laying myself down on the bed I watch him as he stands at the foot of the bed removing his own clothing.
I bite my lower lip staring at his hard chest and muscled thighs as he throws his pants across the chair in the room. Our eyes meet, and then he crawls up the bed like a predator going in for the kill. He buries his nose in between my legs taking a deep breath in, and then running his nose up the length of my body.
Once he reaches me, our mouths ghost over each other slow and sensual. Holding his gaze, I lean into him catching his lips with mine. Our tongues doing a dance as old as time, his taste exploding in my mouth feels like I've just tasted heaven. His kisses are light and airy as he moves down my neck causing me to mewl like a cat, the pleasure running through me like a new summer breeze. His lips trail over my bra covered nipples causing them to hardened. His teeth bites the nipple through the fabric and I arch up into him, trying desperately to find some friction.
My body shivers when his lips meet the soft flesh of my stomach, his wet mouth bringing me a feeling of anticipation. Edward kisses and licks my belly button while one of his hands tickle up my inner thigh finding me wet, and ready for him. Pushing my panties to the side, he slides one long finger into my waiting pussy, and I cry out as my fingertips takes a hold of his silky mane.