NO. This story is horrible. It has so many clichés that I don't even know
where to start.

Dear Reviewers- You are all morons. Now, even if you are twelve years old,
this is not acceptable. What kind of schools are you going to? What kinds of
books are you reading? Do you even know how to properly write yet?

Seriously. This is just horrible. And anyone who thinks this is actually well
written, actually interesting, has less intelligence than a new born

chimpanzee.

And if you knew anything at all about human brain size and intelligence
compared to chimpanzee brain size and intelligence, you would be insulted.

But, of course, you don't. :/

Kurored

You misspelled Voldemort. How could you misspell the main character's name?
You didn't even capitalise their name!

I reported this story because Author Notes stand as a chapter is against the

guidelines.

Lmao

Okay first of all no one is perfect everyone makes mistakes and if my an was
against guidelines they would not have allowed me to put it up get it right
really and this jb person funny cause really you would need a small brain to
get their stories. Everyone has a unique writing style that why there are so
many authors today funny how I'm published and you're not lol look
constructive criticism is welcome but just bashing people show the
intelligence of a worm (they don't even have brains jb) okay I'm so used
to putting an r in his name I just spell the way I hear it Kay now this is a
short chapter don't like it DON'T READ IT

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------chapter six--------------

Harry awoke to an empty bed 'was tom a dream?' he thought

'Afraid not, in the kitchen.' was Tom's reply

'Okay, I'm going to take a shower'

'Eat first then we'll take one together' Harry shuddered at the mental
image Tom sent him of his hands and slick skin.

'Kay' he replied and heard Tom's laughter from the kitchen

Stopping in the doorway harry watched tom prepare breakfast, he had only his
pants on and the view was perfect, his eyes travelled from his narrow hips up
to his chiselled chest and broad shoulders in to the smirking face and tender

eyes.

"What's for breakfast?"
"I have made eggs, he paused to kiss harry as he passed "and bacon,
pancakes, sausage, and French toast." He smiled at Harry from the table.

"All the major food groups, eggs, meat and sweet, I'm proud"
Harry joked as he sat down

"I try my best, Phoebe called, I told her to bring Selenea home." Tom told
Harry watching his reaction
"I told her, erg seers," Harry shook his head, "so no shower then huh?"
Harry looked at Tom taking a bite "This is good."

"Thank you and she's not bringing her till noon, we have two hours." Tom
said waggling his eyebrows

"Oh, okay" Harry said blushing making Tom laugh again.

'Blushing, I haven't blushed this much since the first time I got with
Tom, what the hell is wrong with me?'

Tom picked up their plates making harry realize he had never stopped eating
and had finished. Tom grabbed his hand and pulled him up and out of his chair,
expecting a very HOT shower, Harry was surprised when Tom just held him
close. Tom had his nose pressed to Harry hair, the intoxicating scent of
Burberry, ice and sex that was his Harry.

"Tom?"

"Let's go, love."

"We'll need to talk afterwards."

"I know"

That's the way he planned to make the shower last the whole two hours.

R&R -out