Hey everyone!

Once again, you've managed to astound me with the huge number of reviews I've gotten. I cannot possible explain to you guys how much I owe you for this. Also, I have done most of the scenes based on the book, not the movie, because the movie portrays it in a more interesting way.

Now, it turns out that I am not above selfish self-advertisement (I could never be Abnegation), so I would appreciate it if you guys could check out my modern day story of Tris and Tobias called Just Friends, as well as a new story I will be posting which is basically about the characters of Divergent reading Divergent.

I would be beyond elated if you guys would read it.

And now…on to the next chapter. Happy reading!

Disclaimer: I do not own Divergent.

*Tris POV*

I open my eyes to find myself in the grassy field outside the city. The fence rises up around us, tall and bold and imposing. The sky is an azure blue, and it looks like a perfect day, but I know what will come next.

Tobias stands next to me, the wind blowing through his dark hair. I fall to my knees, and search through the grass to find the gun. "What are you looking for?" I hear Tobias ask, but it's getting hard to hear him. The wind has picked up speed, and my ears register the sound of the cawing crows.

"Easter eggs," I reply sarcastically. "What do you think?"

He says nothing, but drops to his knees beside me, and roots through the mud and grass. I feel the talons grip my shoulder, and fight back the urge to scream.

I look up into the sky, and I find that the crows have gathered in mass numbers, beyond even my capacity to shoot. It wasn't supposed to be like this.

All the times I went into the simulation before, the crows never assembled this fast. I should have found the gun by now, but my hands are empty.

"Tobias!" I yell. "What's going on?"

The birds surround us, pecking at our hair and clothes. I use my hands to shield my face, but I can feel them rip my skin open, making cuts on my hands and arms and clothes.

I scream, as loudly as I can, my fear clouding my brain. Suddenly, I feel someone stand in front of me, pushing me to the ground, and I feel Tobias on top of me. I know what he's doing; he's protecting me from the crows, the way I took the blow for him in his fear landscape the moment Marcus raised the whip to hit him.

It's this fact, that he's ready to sacrifice himself to save me, that clears my head.

The simulation will move on if it registers that my heartbeat is normal. I force myself to pretend that I'm not here, that I'm a million miles away from this field and the crows attacking us.

I hear Tobias's cry of pain, and feel a stabbing pain in my chest. How can I let him do this?

I focus harder. I remember the first time I saw him, and the peculiar shade of blue his eyes were. I remember grasping his hand to pull myself out of the net, and how it enclosed my smaller one, warm and safe.

I remember my mother cutting my hair in Abnegation, slow, and gentle, and quiet. I remember her smiling at me the day of the aptitude test, remember her looking in the mirror and meeting my eyes.

My mother was Dauntless. She must have done this. And I'm her daughter. I have the capability to fight this.

I let my mind wander on, taking me away from the fear landscape.

I remember Caleb helping me with homework at the kitchen table, patient and understanding. I should have known then, I should have realized that he was meant for Erudite.

I remember my father, teaching me how to cut vegetables for the first time when I was eight years old. I remember cutting my finger, and crying at the sight of the blood. I remember him sticking a blue plaster on my thumb and kissing my forehead.

The noises vanish, and I know the simulation has moved on. I breathe a sigh of relief, before I hear the unmistakable sound of rushing water, and feel the cool glass beneath my hands.

I'm in the tank.

So, I'm really very sorry for leaving you all with a cliffhanger like that! I'll do my best to update soon!

Thank you all once again for all the follows, favs and reviews. It really means a lot to me, and I would love it if you guys could keep up the good work. Can we aim at 30 reviews for this chapter?

Till next time!