So I learned a few more things about what I'm doing wrong. Thank you! I've also been told that you might like longer chapters… I will try my best! Anything else you think I'm doing wrong, just message me! Here's the story!
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"Despite assuring himself that Akane would never leave him, he still couldn't get the image of Akane leaving or being with another man. So Ranma got up from the engawa and headed toward the dojo, hopefully to work out his anger and his fears."
It was sometime in the evening when Ranma had finally worked up out all his anger issues in the dojo. He was currently sitting in the middle of the dojo, meditating. His breathing was labored, sweat rolling down his forehead until it got to the base of his chin and disappeared unto his black wife beater. He had worked his muscles until he felt the familiar burn with his arms and legs but that didn't stop the images of Akane from popping up during his practice, making his determination to defeat this 'Sam' guy more demanding. So now he sat in the middle of the dojo, mentally erasing any image of this 'Sam' guy with his Akane.
'Breathe in, breathe out. Deep breathe in….Out.' became his mantra.
Soon he forgot all about Sam and focused on his breathing. He was so focused that almost missed Kasumi's call for dinner. He got up and walked to the table. When he got into the room, he saw his father scarfing down his food and…
"Hey old man, what the hell do you think you're tryin' to pull?! That's my share you're eatin'!"
Genma barely paused his inhaling of the food Kasumi had prepared.
"Watch your mouth boy. I'm your father and you need to respect your elders. I thought I—"
"At least I don't take without askin', ya dirty old panda!" Ranma yelled and through a punch toward his father.
POW!
Genma was now face-planted into his food. His aura went from a light red to a dark scarlet. Slowly Genma raised his head up from his food and said "NOW YOU'RE GONNA GET IT BOY!"
Ranma barely had time to register that he was flying through the air and landed into the fish pond in the back yard. A few seconds later, a busty redhead emerged from the pond screaming "COME AND GET OLD MAN! YOU COULDN'T CATCH ME IF YOU TRIED!"
And thus the triad of father and son began like it each day. While the two were fighting, Akane had walked into the dining room. She looked at the two fighting in the backyard and proceeding to sit down. She grabbed her bowl, filled it with rice and gave a little prayer before she began to eat.
"So," Nabiki began, "who'd you call earlier, Akane?"
Akane stopped eating. Kasumi, Nabiki and Soun all turned to Akane who was turned a cute shade of red from all the stares her family was giving her.
"It was my pen pal in America. I decided to give Sam a call."
"Oh so it's a guy huh Akane?" Nabiki teased.
Soun stopped eating. "You aren't cheating on Ranma, are you Akane?"
"Daddy," cried Kasumi "That's Akane's business, not ours!"
Both Genma and Ranma stopping fighting to look at Akane, both wondering about the engagement being a forfeit.
Akane sighed. It seemed like everyone in this house jumped to conclusions. "No daddy. Sam already has a boyfriend—"
Ranma was happy. Now he didn't worry about Akane leaving him.
"Boy are you not keeping an eye on your fiancé?" Genma asked while tightening his hold on Ranma's black ponytail.
Now all eyes turned toward Ranma, all waiting on his response.
"Why the hell would I care who she talks to?"
"BECAUSE THEN THE TWO SCHOOLS WILL NEVER BE UNITEED THAT'S WHY!" Genma yelled.
"Why would a marry her—hell would anyway want to marry a tomboy like that?! She's built like brick and her thighs are too think! Her pen pal is"
The room became quiet, so quiet that the cicada's had stopped chirping outside.
A sharp pained burned through the back of Ranma's as Genma yanked Ranma's ponytail to the point Ranma thought his father would have snatched his ponytail out.
"Akane and her family have been nothing but nice not only to you but to me as well. And you continue to insult her! Apologize immediately!"
Ranma looked between his father and then toward Soun, Nabiki, Kasumi and lastly toward Akane. Her brown eyes were downcast and he could feel the sadness radiating off of her. Before he could do anything, Akane silently got up from the table and walked out of the room.
"Look at what you did boy!"
Soun's head grew five times in size, his anger growing along with his head.
"YOU BETTER FIX THIS RAAAANNNMMMMAAA!"
Ranma had freed his hair from his father's grip, ignoring the glares sent his way and stared at the direction where Akane had disappeared. God he lov—liked her a lot but he hated to be the reason that the reason why her tears were falling from those beautiful brown eyes was because of him.
I tried my best to make this chapter longer than the rest but I'm tired and in pain. I pulled the tendon behind my left knee so it hurts to move and I have to keep adjusting my computer because my legs keep getting stiff…. Ugh first world problems. ANYWAY, I hope you enjoyed this chapter! Thank you for all the reviews! It makes my day, it really does. It's like free karma :D