OK, so here goes. I don't own Twilight or it's character.
I have been writing this story for awhile now, so I have a many chapter writen down, ready. But I really need your feedback... I would like to know if you like it, if it sucks. I don't have a Beta, so all mistakes are completly mine, sorry in advance, and if it's a hang up, well...
Ok, so here we go...
Chapter 9
It's been several days now and I haven't moved from my corner.
In fear of making it worse.
I was reprimanded by my superior and was told to act like I need it the redemption, like I wanted to repent. Like I was doing a sentence.
But how much longer can I keep doing that since I have already been here too long.
She's been happier. I see it in her eyes.
She's been painting again; the apartment has been a constant swirl of movement and sound.
One of her "clients" came to see her two days after the episode. That fucker couldn't wait too long.
She welcomed him and they sat and talked. He asked her about the club and she refused to tell him details.
She was a little nervous about this. He looked at her paintings and hmm.. and all that.
But never gave her any solid opinion.
Fucker couldn't appreciate a good thing when he saw one.
They went out. I stayed. I don't like it when she did this before, I definitely don't like it know.
I kept my ears out for her. I know that if she needs me I'll be there in the blink of an eye.
So I wait.
Any theorys on who he is? What she does? I would love to know your thoughts!
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