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Four's P.O.V.

The next day when I walk into the training room, I see Jacob talking to some of the other initiates.

"Jacob I need to talk to you." I say. He nods and comes over to me.

"I don't ever want you to talk to my girlfriend again. Your not allowed to touch her, or talk to her. Understand?" I say to him. "And she is mine so don't even think you can steal her away from me."

"Whatever." Jacob says as he walks away. I grab him by the arm and look at him.

"Don't talk to her, or you will get hurt." I say looking into his soul. He just looks at me before walking away.


Tris's P.O.V.

I'm leaving work because its the end of the day. I just want to go home and lay in bed with Tobias. It's already nine o clock, because I had to work late at the tattoo parlor with Tori today.

I'm walking down the hallway, going to our apartment when I hear a noise. A big noise too. I turn around and don't see anybody so I keep walking.

I suddenly feel a pair of hands wrap around my mouth. I scream and kick and thrust as they hold me tight and another person hits me on the head with something. I feel blood trickle down my head as I fall to the ground, unconscious.

Four's P.O.V.

Tris told me that she was getting home late tonight, but it's already ten o clock. She should have been home by now.

I walk out the door, going to find Tris and see where she went when Hannah, one of the initiates stopped me.

"Four?" She says out of breath.

"What are you doing here?" I ask, curious.

"I saw it happen in the hallway and I didn't do anything because I got scared and I'm so sorry!" She says freaking out.

"Woah, slow down. What happened?" I ask her.

"Some of the initiates had a plan to kidnap Tris and torture her and I was gonna stop them but I was scared that they would kill me! I saw them attack Tris in the hallway!" She says.

My mind goes black. First of all, no one touches Tris without my permission. And second of all, where is she now? What if they've already started to torture her? What if she's dead?... No, she can't be dead. Tris is strong and brave.

"Where did it happen?" I ask in a panicky voice. I need to find Tris before they hurt her.

"I'll show you." She says.


Tris's P.O.V.

I wake up, my head pounds and my side hurts. I look around the room and see that I'm in the stimulation room, tied to the chair.

What am I doing here? How did I get here?... I was walking down the hallway when two people attacked me.

"Hello Tris." I hear a familiar voice say. I turn my head slowly and see Jacob.

"Jacob?" I say. "Why are you doing this?" I ask him.

"Because Four thought I couldn't. But he was so wrong." Jacob says as he starts picking up needles and putting serums in the bottles.

"What are you doing?" I ask him, breathing hard.

He turns towards me and smiles.

"With this serum, your going to kill Four." He says. He puts the needle to my neck and I scream.

"NO!" I say as I try to move but I'm tied down. He then sticks it in my neck and I start to cry. I don't know what this serum will do, but I love Four. I would never want to kill him.

"Now we'll just wait until he gets here." Jacob says, smiling devilishly. I then drift off into sleep.

Four's P.O.V.

When Hannah takes me to the hallway where Tris was, I see a lot of blood on the ground. I start to panic and think about Tris. Please be okay.

"Four." Hannah says. "I think when I overheard some of the initiates talking about Tris, I think I heard them say something about the stimulation room."

"Were going there, right now." I say.


Four's P.O.V.

When me and Hannah get to the stimulation room, I open the door. I was expecting it to be locked but it wasn't, which was strange. When I walk in, the room is dark.

"WHERE IS TRIS YOU BASTARDS?!" I yell into the room. I then turn my head and see Tris, with a gun in her hand as she has blood, scars, cuts, and bruises on her body.

"Tris..." I say. I run over to get her but she holds the gun up to me. I stop and look at her. Her eyes are dark, and her skin pale. She must be under stimulation.

"Tris, your under a stimulation you don't know what your doing." I tell her.

"You want me to get the gun away from her?" Hannah asks.

"If you can." I say. "Tris, look at me. It's me Four." I say walking a little bit closer to her. She moves her gun down and I run up and hug her. Right when I least expect it, she slaps me in the face and pushes me down on the floor.

I can't fight back because I love Tris and I would never hurt her.

"Tris! Stop! Its me!" I say. She climbs on top of me and I see Hannah out of the corner of my eye start to run towards me.

"Don't come near me or I'll shoot him." Tris says in a harsh voice to Hannah. Hannah just stands there, her eyes big.

"Tris, your under a stimulation." I say to her. She holds the gun to my head and starts to look away. I see a tear run down her cheek as she tries to pull the trigger but can't do it. I know she's in there, I just have to be able to get to her.

"Tris..." I say as I hold her hand over the trigger She looks down at me, with blood dripping down her head and a tear running down her cheek.

"I love you." I say to her. She just looks at me blankly.

"Tris your the strongest person and bravest person I know. I know your in there, you have to wake up." I say to her quietly.

She blinks her eyes a couple of times before I see her dark eyes turn back to normal.

"Four?" She asks me, quietly.

"It's me." I say, caressing the side of her cheek. I see another tear roll down her cheek before the expression on her face changes.

"Four!" She says dropping the gun and hugging me. I just hug her back as Hannah grabs the gun.

"I'm so sorry." She says sobbing now.

"It's okay. You didn't know what you were doing." I say to her. "You were under a stimulation."

She sobs even more now and I sit up to hug her more tightly.

"He injected me with the serum and I tried to fight back but I couldn't..." Tris says crying into my chest.

"Tris who did this to you?" I ask, still holding her tightly.

"Jacob." she says sobbing as she starts to shake at the word Jacob.

"Shhh its okay I'm here now." I say.

I sit there hugging her for a couple of minutes before I realize that she's hurt.

"Tris are you okay?" I ask her. She just nods but I can tell she isn't. She has blood on her head and in her hair, she has cuts and bruises on her arms.

"We need to get you to the infirmary." I say to her. I stand up and then pick her up with me. I start to carry her out of the room as I see her eyes close.

"Tris?" I ask. But she's already gone unconscious.

"Four?" I hear Hannah say.

"Go tell Eric what happened. And make sure you tell him Jacob did this." I say to Hannah as I walk out of the room taking Tris to the infirmary.

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