PERCY
Percy was a huge fan of dramatic entrances and this one certainly made it to his books. The sky boomed and the light turned dark. Percy jumped of his chair and drew Riptide and took a stance. All the campers got ready. Then Demeter trips over her skirt. Zeus and the gods burst in laughter and so do the demigods. We quietened down when Zeus's face changed to a grave expression. "Uranus awakes and we join to defeat him." Boomed Zeus's voice.
Zeus then gets stuck by a spear. Apollo quickly helps his father and Artemis looks around nervously. "I AM URANUS!" A voice shouts. All the demigods and gods burst put in laughter. Percy looks around and sees a man who was blue in colour with clouds for his eyes, mouth and hair.
Next to him was a woman shrouded in darkness even darker than Hades. Hades looked uncomfortable facing her. Next to her was an even darker dude who was a guy. He was covered in darkness and just looked like a shadow cutout. I presumed he was Erebus. A smaller figure next to him was definitely Aether as he had epic strobe lighting effects that made Apollo scowl. The last dude was basically all of them in one. Definitely Chaos.
Aether charges at them with way more cooler lighting bolts than Zeus. The demigods raise their swords and counter attacked. Before long, everyone is wrecking each other and slicing each other's minions (the demigods were the gods minions. The primordials had light zombies or something) to pieces.
All the gods took on Chaos before falling to the primordials. They were all dead Percy was the only one standing. The primordials had taken a liking to him. So resistant. They decided to give Percy a choice. He would die and suffer everything he did to the monsters and Titans he met and everyone would come back to life (excluding the gods which was fine with Percy) or be the eternal servant of the primordials and be blessed with so many gifts and have Annabeth live again.
This really got to Percy as he wanted a life with Annabeth but she would call him a monster. He'd abandoned the camp for his own sake. Dying sounded like a better choice but he had to suffer everything he'd done to her enemies and never be able to escape. Both didn't float his boat. So he picked the third option - fight to his death.
I didn't see this coming. He slew Aether and Erebus (well, their mortal forms at least) then he summoned a huge wave of water which grabbed the rest of the primordials and dragged them around like stones tied to ropes being pulled. I was so impressed by this I decided that he deserved better. I rejuvenated him and revived the demigods (I can't revive gods) to fight the primordials. The earth caves in and out comes the gods. They made it as quickly as they could through Hades's palace to come back to the surface. They, together, totally broke the primordials altogether and left them as useless things really. They feasted all night because of their victory in Zeus's halls and of course, never invited me.
I'm Janus, god of choices and doorways. Did I make the right choice?
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ALTERNATIVE ENDING
The heroes fall one by one. Suddenly John Cena, son of Ares, falls out of the sky and kills everything. The End.
This is my first fanfic criticsm is thanked. I'm not a WWE fan just thought it would be funny to add that. I thank the viewers who read this.