(Hello, and welcome to the second chapter of Another My Immortal Commentary! This chapter is longer than the previous, which means that it s even worse! So, let s venture into this chapter!)
AN: Fangz 2 bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da chapta (Uh, i think its trying to communicate..)! BTW preps stop flaming ma story ok! (The people who are flaming this story aren t preps. They just have a positive IQ level.)
The next day I woke up in my bedroom (Oh, i woke up in a tin box.). It was snowing and raining again (Snowing and raining again...Yeh). I opened the door of my coffin and drank some blood from a bottle (Uhhh...) I had. My coffin was black ebony and inside it was hot pink (If i am not mistaken, isn't pink kind of a color... Well, not for goffs ?) velvet with black lace on the ends. I got out of my coffin and took of(f) my giant MCR t-shirt which I used for pajamas. Instead, (WARNING: POINTLESS SCENE APPROACHING FROM THE WEST) I put on a black leather dress a pentagram necklace, combat boots (Again, combat boots? The f***?) and black fishnets (She sure loves her fishnets!) on. I put on four pairs of earrings (Uhh, how can you have four pairs of earrings?) in my pierced ears, and put my hair in a kind of messy bun. My friend, Willow (AN: Raven dis is u!) (Pointless character introduction!) woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair with pink streaks and opened her forest-green eyes. (Soo, she smiled, flipped her hair, and THEN opened her eyes? Whaa?) She put on her Marilyn Manson t-shirt (WE DON'T CARE) with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.) "OMFG ( OMFG ? Really?), I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!" she said excitedly.
"Yeah? So?" I said, blushing.
"Do you like Draco?" she asked as we went out of the Slytherin common room and into the Great Hall.
"No I so fucking don't!"(Idiot.) I shouted.
"Yeah right! " she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me (Timing!).
"Hi." he said.
"Hi." I replied flirtily (flirtily? So, she doesn t like him, but she says things to him flirtily? *dies of too much idiocy*)
"Guess what." he said.
"What?" ("I hate you!" As he said that, he shot Ebony in the head, and she was dead. THE END) I asked.
"Well, Good Charlotte are having a concert in Hogsmeade (From what i know, Good Charlotte are a muggle band.. So how can they have a concert here?)." he told me.
"Oh. My. Fucking. God!" I screamed. I love GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR.
"Well . do you want to go with me?" he asked.
I gasped. (Yep! This ends with a cliff-hanger! So, i hoped you enjoyed this chapter, and , if you want to, review, and follow! See ya on the next chapter! RatcheT2497 out)