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Recap: "We're going to have a 'going away' party." He replied as the airlock came into view.
Now
Shepard ordered Joker to head towards Intai'sei after they were released from Pinnacle Station. Joker had asked about what happened on that station before making a comment about them probably leaving some last damage. Shepard replied with them having set the record on the station's scoreboards. They were so good that he was sure that no one would even try to beat their scores. Joker merely snorted, saying that it would have been nice if their enemies did that more often. Shepard, and a majority of the crew, couldn't help but agree. The Normandy eventually came to Intai'sei and orbited the planet.
"So Shepard. What are we doing here?" Joker asked as the two looked over the planet from the cockpit.
"Well, I won an apartment from Admiral Ahern back on Pinnacle Station and I'd thought we could use it to through a party. You know since we'll be parting ways and all." Joker looked down at that last sentence. That was right. Shepard was going to be leaving the Normandy now that Saren and Sovereign were gone. Shepard saw Joker's expression and sighed.
"Don't think this means I won't keep in contact, Jeff." Shepard said using Joker's real name. The pilot looked at him in surprise before smirking. They both knew each other's real names but still used the nicknames everyone else used or in Shepard's case, his last name.
"Yeah, I mean what would you do without hearing my joke of the day? The horror." Joker snickered making Shepard chuckle. As they got closer to the planet, Joker spoke again, this time with seriousness.
"So, becoming a dad huh? You ready for that?" Shepard hesitated before answering.
"Not really. If I'm being honest, I'm a little nervous. I wasn't exactly raised in the conventional sense, you know?" Joker nodded seeing Shepard's worried expression.
"I think you'll be fine. Come on, you turned out pretty ok-ish." Shepard looked at him curiously.
"-ish?" Joker nodded smirking.
"Yea, I can't say you're completely ok. I mean how many people have we met that get into fights as much as you do? As many times a day as you do?" Shepard rolled his eyes, smirking at his friend. It was true though. Any other person may have snapped already. Or maybe Shepard snapped a long time ago and no one realized it yet. Oh well, no need to worry about that now.
"Whatever." He muttered as the Normandy dropped into Intai'sei's atmosphere. Shepard looked over the terrain as the Normandy closed in on the coordinates Ahern had provided. There were no real cities and whatever forms of civilization were around were in the forms of wind farms and geological survey stations. Shepard noted that the terrain itself was desert and rocky.
'So this is what Ahern meant by 'red paradise.'' Shepard thought.
"Sheesh, this place is like Doctor Chakwas." Joker muttered.
"What? Dried up and hostile to all forms of life?" Shepard muttered as if feeling she'd hear them if they spoke above a whisper. Joker quickly turned his head to Shepard in jaw-dropped shock before snorting at him, trying to hold in his laughter.
"I can't believe you just said that! I was going to say empty, but damn!" Shepard almost busted out laughing.
"You're no better than me! Whatever you do, don't ever mention it anywhere near her! We'll probably be killed." Shepard said reigning in his chuckles.
"You don't think I know that?" Joker said back before the terminal beeped telling them they were close now. Shepard could see a small dot on the horizon as they got closer. Once the scanner said they had arrived, Joker landed the Normandy down. Shepard, still clad in his armor, walked out of the Normandy and towards the house. He looked around and could see why it would be called a red paradise. Quiet and the rock formations were red especially as the sun would set. He noticed a wind farm nearby before coming to the door. He opened and came into a room where decontamination processes began. Once it was done, he walked through and inspected the prefab.
The house was a basic prefabricated structure with a small hallway and a large great room making up both the living space and the bedroom. The hallway consisted of a medical station like the one in the medbay of the Normandy where Shepard usually received a full resupply of medi-gel. More unusually it also contained a grenade dispenser that will replenish the his stock of grenades. Finally, there was a wall of weapons on display, but ready to use, as that is a necessary part of colony life. Shepard walked down the hallway to inspect the main room.
The large quarter-sphere window offered a spectacular view of the planet, the other structures, and the mako which was parked right outside for some reason. The room contained an entertainment screen for playing music, which could be turned on and off via small terminal. A couple of couches, facing the windows, populated the room as well as plants and various house paraphernalia.
Shepard frowned at the bed itself. It was just like the one in the Normandy! A soldier's bed. Granted it served its purpose but that was all it did. No real comfort at all. Mostly a board with a cotton filled pillow on top. He looked back outside and saw his team coming out of the mako. They came over to the airlock and entered before looking around. Kaidan whistled as he looked around.
"Nice place, Shepard. You got this from Admiral Ahern?" Shepard nodded.
"Yeah, won it in that last round with the turian soldiers." Ashley looked at him in amusement.
"Really? An Alliance Admiral bet this?" Shepard nodded and shrugged at the same time. Ashley only chuckled at him and shook her head.
"Only you, Shepard. Only you." Ashley turned back to continue looking around.
"I wonder how much this would cost." Garrus muttered out, wondering.
"I think it might be in the few hundred thousand range." Tali responded as she looked at the TV. Liara was busy looking outside admiring the view. That was when Shepard heard someone whistle.
"Now we're talking." Shepard looked in the hallway to see Wrex messing with the grenade dispenser.
"Don't go blowing up my new place, Wrex." Shepard commented making the krogan look at him.
"Don't worry, Shepard. I'll be trying these out outside." Wrex replied, raising the grenades up as if to show Shepard what he'd be using. Shepard nodded as Wrex walked back out to the door. Garrus seeing the krogan walking out decided to join him. Blowing things up was one of the few things the two could do together. Shepard turned back to the main room and saw both Ashley and Liara looking at the bed with meaningful glances. Shepard felt some excitement at their looks. One last round before they parted ways was going to happen. He also noticed Kaidan was looking at a terminal. Shepard wondered what would be on that terminal since he hadn't checked it yet.
"Shepard, you may want to check this out." Kaidan said ushering Shepard over. He walked over and looked at the terminal. On the screen was a message addressed to Admiral Tadius Ahern by a... blocked sender.
"Admiral, the convoy will be positioned in the Phoenix system for the next week or so. I have spoken with the captains regarding our arrangement. As usual, if you are willing to pay the delivery fee, we can get you a sample from our shipments. If not, no problem, these remote colonies can use all they can afford among other things. Goodness knows the Alliance is taking its sweet time to offer any military support. Regards, Hood." Shepard raised an eyebrow at the message. Hood? Probably an alias just in case this message was intercepted by some other party. He quickly contacted Ahern who picked up almost immediately.
"Hello? Who is this?"
"Hello, Ahern. This is Shepard."
"Shepard? How's the apartment?"
"It's nice. Quaint, quiet and homely. A good retirement place to be sure."
"Ah, that's good. I assume this isn't a social call?" Shepard smiled.
"No sir. It's not. I've got a message on the terminal here about a convoy that's staying the system."
"Oh that? You can have at it. If you can pay for it anyway." Shepard raised an eyebrow.
"What exactly is on this convoy if you don't mind me asking?"
"Oh just supplies for colonies. Food, weapons, armor, and colonial ground defense."
"Really? Hmmm, I might need to take a look at some of those then." Shepard had a few ideas in store for the food itself.
"Like I said, have at it if you can pay for it. Is there anything else you need?"
"No, thank you."
"Your welcome. Hope you come back to make another record here." Shepard laughed.
"Maybe. Goodbye, Admiral Ahern." Shepard said before cutting the connection. He looked at what the convoy was carrying and couldn't help but smirk at it.
'Well, at least we got our food and drinks.' Shepard though as he began ordering.
A few hours later
Everything had arrived on schedule. The food and drinks had arrived along with some fireworks, and some other things that Shepard had bought. Cost him nearly 500 thousand credits. The food was mostly human food, however, Shepard managed to get his hands on some dextro rations.
Nachos, pizza, chips n' dip, pigs in a blanket, deviled eggs, devils on horseback, dextro jerky, dextro carrots/celery. The last two were for Garrus and Tali respectively since Shepard remembered their species' couldn't handle levo-based food. Drinks consisted of soda and various alcoholic drinks that could be found around in the galaxy. The night had set in and the entire crew of the Normandy had all come to Shepard's apartment. Shepard had to enlist some help from his crew to prepare the food which was easily made and placed on a table.
There was music playing and people were dancing inside while others had taken the mako for a joy ride. A few of the marines were playing beer pong. Shepard noticed Chakwas was drinking Serrice Ice Brandy. A pretty expensive drink if he remembered correctly. He himself was drinking a beer. It was certainly smoother than must other drinks he had on Omega but it really wasn't the greatest he ever had. He looked around and noticed Garrus was drinking turian brandy while watching Wrex. Shepard watched as Wrex took a drink in a glass jug and lit a match. Shepard raised an eyebrow before his eyes widened.
'He isn't making-?!' Just as he finished that thought, Wrex tossed the match onto the drink. The brown liquid exploded in blue fire catching everyone's attention before it died down. The liquid continued to burn until it rested at the edge of glass. Wrex placed both his armored hands on top of the drink and sealed the opening until the flame died out. Wrex took his hand off of it. Smoke escaped from it before Wrex chugged the drink.
"Wrex, a little warning before you make a Burukh." Shepard called out as Wrex continued to chug. Everyone started chanting 'Chug! Chug! Chug!' as Wrex kept going. The krogan eventually finished it off and everyone cheered. Shepard smiled and shook his head before seeing Tali and Liara drinking. It was amusing seeing Tali drinking through a straw and calling it some kind of port or something while Liara tried to tell her otherwise. Shepard absently noticed her asari honey mead spilling as he turned his head and noticed Kaidan and Ashley weren't inside. He walked outside looking around for them before having to dodge and incoming mako.
"What the hell!" He yelped, coughing as dust picked up around him. He dropped his drink on reflex as his hand reached for a gun that obviously wasn't there. The mako skidded to a halt before the doors opened to reveal Ashley and Kaidan getting out.
"Shepard! Oh my god! Did we get you?" Ashley asked as she got closer to him with Kaidan following close behind.
"No, close though." Shepard replied, dusting his clothes off.
"Told you to slow down Williams." Kaidan said making Ashley glare at him.
"I didn't think anyone else would be coming out, not to mention missing a M-35 Mako barreling toward them." Ashley defended.
"Well, people would definitely see it, but chances are not many would be able to dodge it." Shepard interrupted. Ashley glared at the ground before Shepard pecked her on the cheek. Ashley blushed before allowing a small smile to come across her face as she and Shepard's eyes met. Kaidan merely snorted before backing away at Ashley's new glare. This time accompanied by an annoyed stare from Shepard. Apparently he ruined a moment between the two. Shepard kept socializing as the night dragged on. Having conversations with various crew members, playing a drinking game against Wrex. He lost by only a little. Both Shepard and Joker sat while everyone else danced, except for Wrex who was just shooting at empty bottles everyone left on the ground. Joker didn't dance because his Vrolik Syndrome kept him from making any too exaggerated moves which could hurt him.
Shepard didn't because he sucked at dancing. Liara and Ashley had dragged him up there earlier with him protesting, saying he couldn't dance save his life. They didn't believe him until he started dancing a little. Then everyone laughed at him thinking he was doing an impressive imitation of him having a seizure.
"So you're heading to the Terminus tomorrow huh?" Joker asked from his seat beside Shepard.
"Yeah. Gonna go back to my life of being a vigilante with the addition of being a father." Shepard sighed making Joker raise an eyebrow at him.
"You sure you're ready for that? I mean it's a big responsibility and all." Shepard nodded.
"Yes. I know it's a big deal and all, but I don't see it as something I can just avoid or walk away from and besides..." Shepard felt a small smile form on his lips. "I'm actually looking forward to being a dad." Joker smirked at him.
"Heh, remember that when the kid reaches their teen years and see if you still feel the same way." Shepard chuckled in response. Shepard had a gentle smile on his lips as he stared off into space. He started picturing out how it would be. Watching as Liselle's stomach grew bigger as the months went by, holding her after she was born, her first crawl then steps and her first word. First day of school or whatever education they'd be able to get her. Possible training, the dreaded teenage years, and the list went on before Shepard snapped himself out of his reverie. His mother's words suddenly came to his mind.
"You may find that things are not going to be the way you think. Especially regarding your child." That brought a chill to Shepard's mind. What did she mean? Not the way he thought? Shepard stored that train of thought away for the moment as the night continued on. Wrex came by and dragged him out along with Garrus so they could take some shots at whatever empty bottles were left over. They even had a little contest that quickly gained attention as they started making trick shots at the bottles. Eventually, several other crewman joined in and the sky was filled with empty bottles that Shepard deviated off the ground with his biotics. Afterwards, Shepard had the perfect thing to top off the night.
"Everyone! Come on and gather around there! I got us a surprise!" He shouted as he pointed to the front of his apartment. Everyone walked over and either stood or sat on the ground. Chakwas brought out a lawn chair for Joker so he could sit in it.
"Here, Jeff." Joker moved over to it and sat in the chair.
"Thanks doc. I thought my feet were going to kill me." Joker replied gratefully. Being buzzed and having a debilitating disease were bad combination for someone standing. Chakwas merely smiled at him before she, along with everyone else, looked at Shepard. The man himself made sure everyone was there before his omni-tool lit up. He brought it up to his face.
"Light it up." He said before shutting his omni-tool off and looking out into the distance. For a few seconds no one could see anything, save for the pitch black darkness of Intai'sei's night sky. Then everyone noticed several lights further away before something exploded in the area and flare fired into the sky. This flare was followed by others a second later before all of them imploded in spectacular explosion. Everyone started making approving noises and clapping as more and more fireworks went off, illuminating the night sky in an array of varying colors going in different patterns and directions. Shepard took a seat between Ashley and Liara who cuddled up next to him. He saw the content and peaceful smiles on theirs faces and he could feel that same smile on his own face. This moment was perfect. He was safe, happy and at peace. He didn't have to worry about anything. At least for the night.
Two days later...
All the members of the Normandy crew that Shepard had interacted with the most were outside the apartment along with Shepard, bidding goodbye to their friend and temporary commander. The rest of the crew had already given their goodbyes to Shepard as they made their way from the apartment to the Normandy. Now we find Shepard, his squad, Joker and Dr. Chakwas. Everyone would have left the day before, after the party, but everyone was nursing a hangover from the party, even Wrex. Shepard had taken to pretty much keeping his eyes closed and puking outside. He would have done it all day if the sun hadn't been so hot. He didn't dare use his toilet since most of the crew had commandeered it with Joker front and center, holding onto it for dear life. It wouldn't have been so bad if Chakwas had given him some aspirin. Apparently, Joker was a chatty drunk and squealed about Shepard's mean little joke to Chakwas. So Shepard had to suffer a hangover without any drugs. He got back at Joker by telling Chakwas what he had said and so he suffered the same fate.
The whole group was watching as the crew went to the ship and began getting things ready for take off. Shepard was actually feeling saddened as he watched the Normandy being prepped. That was when Joker waddled up to him.
"You sure you don't want us to drop you off on Omega?" Joker asked. Shepard shook his head.
"No. I doubt the Alliance would be happy to allow their best ship out into the Terminus with thawed things are now. Besides, I don't want every pirate have their eye on her." Shepard nodded to the ship. The pilot looked at the ship before turning back to him. Joker grinned and raised his fist up to him. Shepard smirked at him before raising his own fist and gently bumping it against Joker's. The pilot's grin turned into a smirk before he began walking to the Normandy as Chakwas came up to Shepard. The doctor surprised him by giving him a hug. After a second, Shepard hugged before the let go.
"Take care of yourself, Shepard. Be sure to keep in contact and try not to get in trouble." Chakwas said making Shepard grin.
"I can do two out of three. You pick." Shepard replied making Chakwas smack him lightly on the shoulder. "I'm joking, of course I will and you better too. I'd hate to find out my favorite, sadistic doctor wasn't doing well and I wasn't there to see it." Chakwas chuckled at him.
"You're terrible. You know that?" Shepard nodded.
"I know, till next time Chakwas." Chakwas nodded before following after Joker. Kaidan came up to him next. The sentinel held his hand out which Shepard took. The two men shook hands with mutual respect.
"Its been fun, Shepard. Shame we have to part ways. Chances are if you joined the Alliance, you'd have be given command of Normandy." Shepard shrugged.
"Someone's got to make sure things are running smoothly in the Terminus. And honestly, I can't see myself in an Alliance uniform. I'm too... undisciplined anyway." Kaidan nodded, knowing it was true.
"Fair enough. Hope to work with again." Kaidan said as he let go.
"Same to you." Garrus came up next. The two shook hands as well.
"So here we are, going back to our old lives." Garrus said with a turian smirk.
"Not exactly. I'm going back with my identity out in the open with a kid on the way and you're going back to become a spectre. We're both going to be in a whole heap of trouble." Shepard replied with a grin making the turian chuckle.
"Too true. See you around, Shepard." Garrus said nodding and walked away. Tali walked up.
"So this is the end of the road, or whatever it is humans say." Tali said looking down. Shepard merely smiled at her statement.
"Not necessarily." She looked up at him with him looking upwards. "It's more like till next we meet." Tali giggled at him before stopping and going quiet. Shepard looked down at her noticing her silence. Tali merely stared at him a couple of seconds before she hugged him.
"I'm going to miss working alongside you, Captain." Shepard hugged her back with a gentle smile.
"Right back at you, Tali." The two parted before Tali walked away. Wrex lumbered up to him. The two didn't shake head but merely smirked at each other in respect.
"It's all kinds of fun, Shepard. You seemed to always find the best fights." Shepard chuckled at him.
"And you always seemed to give the best hits. Remember that one time you hit that human mercenary so hard he flew 10 feet and crapped himself?" Shepard said bursting into chuckles with Wrex doing the same thing.
"Yeah, or about the time when you just glared at that one guy after we tore the place up and he fainted?" Shepard was close to laughing out loud before controlling himself. Wrex took a little longer.
"Ah, good times." Both said at the same time. Both looked at each other, smirking.
"Good luck with the krogan, Wrex." The krogan nodded.
"Good luck out there in the Terminus, Shepard." With that, the battlemaster walked away. Now Liara came up to him. Shepard could see the sadness in her eyes and embraced her.
"I'm going to miss you Liara." He said in a soft whisper. Liara sighed in the embrace, though Shepard could hear the slight sob in it.
"And I will miss you, Shepard." They left the embrace and Shepard could see the tears beginning to form in her eyes. Just as they started to fall down her cheeks, he brushed them away before kissing her. It was soft and peaceful and for a moment, there was nothing but them. Their lips parted and the moment was gone. Shepard looked at her with loving eyes which she returned.
"Till next time." He whispered.
"Till next time." She repeated before drifting away from him with a smile gracing her lips. Liara turned away and trekked to the Normandy. Now only Ashley remained. She walked up to him with her arms crossed, looking everywhere but him.
"Ash..." Shepard said trying to get her to look at him.
"It would be easier to just say goodbye and be done with it." She muttered quietly but Shepard heard it all the same.
"But, that wouldn't give us a proper goodbye. Would it?" Shepard said gently. Ashley still didn't look at him, but he could see she was now fighting not to look at him.
"It's just... you're going away now and I'm going back to the Alliance and we probably won't see each other again and-" Shepard cut her off by wrapping an arm around her waist, pulling her up to him before delivering a chaste kiss to her. He felt her stiffen at first before she relaxed into him. Her arms wrapped around to his back before her hands gripped his broad shoulders. Their kiss lasted a moment longer before parting. Neither spoke a word nor opened their eyes as they held one another with their foreheads touching. A few moments later, Shepard broke the silence.
"Is that better?" Ashley snorted at him, not leaving the embrace at all.
"You're an idiot." She said affectionately. Shepard smirked at her knowing it wasn't mean at all.
"The idiot you fell in love with." He retorted.
"You got me there, skipper." They both opened their eyes and gazed at one another before parting.
"See you around, Ashley."
"Right back at you, skipper." With that she turned around and walked to the Normandy. Shepard placed his hands in his pockets as he watched her go until she disappeared inside it. The Normandy closed all open hatches until Shepard heard the familiar roar of the engines. He watched as his shi-no, former ship lifted off and began flying away. As soon as the Normandy was out of sight going into the atmosphere, Shepard noticed the silence and wasn't comfortable with it. He could feel the absence of his crew already and it was slightly depressing.
"Isaac, did you send for our personal fighter?" Shepard asked. Long before even going to Eden Prime, Shepard foresaw that he could lose his ship and be stranded on some world and so he and Isaac had been making plans of creating a fighter. They had managed to get the schematics from older models of both Turian and Alliance fighters that had been scrapped on the old station. Those plans had been updated due Shepard having abused his spectre status at one point after Noveria and found the modern schematics. Not only that but both Shepard and Isaac had fused and improved the design. Most fighters are equipped for attacking larger ships while other are equipped for attacking only fighters. This fighter was capable of harming all types of ships as well as traversing the relay network without the need for a Carrier.
"Yes, I did. It has been on its way since this morning and will arrive by tonight." Isaac replied, checking his calculations.
"Good, then that gives me enough time to do what I wish." Shepard said as he made his way back to the apartment.
"Upgrading the armor? Is that why you bought all those mods from that convoy?" Shepard nodded absentmindedly.
"Yes." Shepard had made it his goal of making a better, if somewhat illegal, armor for himself. He wasn't stupid. Now that he wasn't with his team and was going back into the Terminus 'alone,' he needed to make better armor to protect himself since nearly everyone in the galaxy knew who he was. No doubt all the enemies he'd made would be coming for him now.
"You know that Colossus armor can only have two types of upgrades right? You've already filled it with a medical exoskeleton and a shield interface."
"Yea, I know. I'll only use two then." Shepard said as he kept walking. Isaac didn't say anything t first trying to discern the meaning by Shepard's until he figured it out.
"You are going to fuse them." It wasn't a question. Shepard smirked at his friend's statement.
"You know me so well." If Isaac were an organic, he would have sighed at his friend and maker's attitude. Out of all the organics he had seen, Shepard was still the most innovative of them all. Thought that might be due to the fact Shepard normally hung around people who had no care for technology passing the 'aim and fire' approach. But still, someone had to make sure his crazy organic wouldn't kill himself by making a potentially dangerous invention.
"Alright, let's see what you have. We already know what you have installed in your armor. What did you buy?" Shepard thought over what he had bought as he began to list them.
"I bought other exoskeleton mods: combat and kinetic. There was also and energized weave and a stimulant pack." Isaac began calculating all those upgrades together in combination with the Colossus armor that Shepard would put them into.
"So your shields would be incredibly strong without you even focusing on them. You'll be able to hit harder, take damage that would pass your shields, if they can, easier; be able to resist toxins and heal faster than you normally do as well as accurately target while running better and also be able to use your powers in faster succession. Did I miss anything?" Shepard shook his head as he made it to the door and opened it before entering.
"Not really, no."
"Do you think you might be too strong?" Shepard thought over Isaac's words carefully as he walked into the living room and began unpacking his armor and all the mods. He was more adept in every common military combat than most others which gave him a big edge in a fight. Not to mention his advanced weaponry, high class amp and omni-tool. Then there is also his natural healing which made a big difference in a fight, but the part that had made him so dangerous when he it was just him and Isaac was their secrecy. No one knew who he was, not even the Shadow Broker. That kept the slavers, pirates and assassins off of his trail and away from his house. Now that his identity was out in the open, there was a big chance that they would find him. Even with all of his abilities and resources, he was unable to take on organizations face to face. That was why he needed to make this armor and that would only allow him some brief respite.
"No Isaac. I dare say I'm more vulnerable than I've ever been since I became the Ghost." Shepard replied as he began to take apart the exoskeletons and started looking for a way to make them work as one while being able to fit in a single piece of armor. Unknown to Shepard, his instincts were right on the money.
Out in space
A single batarian frigate sat at the edge of the system, just out of sensor range. It was watching as the Normandy flew from Intai'sei and straight into the relay network.
"The Normandy is headed into the relay. Sending known coordinates for it. Be ready to take it. The Ghost will pay for what he has done." The batarian captain said as sent the information over the link.
"Transmission received, Captain. Be ready for further orders and confirmation of Ghost being aboard the humans' ship." Came the reply.
"Acknowledged. Will wait for further orders, Commander Balak. Long live the Hegemony!"
"Long live the Hegemony!" The transmission cut off and the captain sat in his chair waiting for orders. Finally, the Ghost would be brought to justice. Finally, Shepard would feel the cold sting of revenge. All that was needed to do now was wait.
I will say it now. I'm sorry that I took so long. College keeps one distracted as well as a bad case of laziness and having a mild fever. But I'm here. Now the next thing that I'll be updating is my Dragon Age Origins: Prequel. It has been too long and I'm starting to get more ideas about.
(Rant coming on, sorry.)
Now, I don't want anyone whining about me to like abandon it. Heck no! That is more original than this story. Admittedly not as interesting, but I take pride in the fact I managed to take it as far as I've gotten it without understanding much of the mechanics behind the DA universe and I won't abandon it. That being said, I'm was a little sad that not many voted for it. Don't get me wrong I understand why, but I thought it would be better than 27-5! Thank God that Omegas Prime liked it so much that he is going to try and emulate it. (Looking forward to it by the way Prime) That was enough of a pick-me-up to get me to finish this chapter and go back to writing my DA.
(Rant over.)
Okay, you guys might not be seeing this story updated anytime soon. (Though those of you who have been following me since the beginning know I tend to be fairly regular than others) I hope you enjoyed this and feel the need to either favorite, follow, or my personal favorite, review. Have a good day.