Announcement: Hello everyone. This is Reviewer543. I have been making this story in 3-4 weeks. Which is pretty good since I"m a beginner and this is my first story. And so it is with a heavy heart that I'm saying that I am abandoning this story. JUST KIDDING! HAHAHAHA! Seriously though, the reason is I'm making this story and getting to the battle of Torfan and since I have only a few ideas such as the main fight in the chapter, I still need some ideas like how he gets in the base, how many enemies he is going to face and who he is going to meet on Torfan. Now let me be clear Anderson and Major Kyle are in. Balak is not going to be. I need him alive later on. I'm not sure if I should let any other mass effect characters in. There is a special someone who Shepard/Ghost will be fighting in the main fight in the chapter that will be critical in the story around ME2. So please review or PM your ideas. I will pick which ones that are the greatest (might tweak them a little) and them in to it. I want to hear your opinions and ideas. I value them, hell the reason I started posting all those chapters that one weekend was because of the first review being so positive. So again fire your ideas at me through PM or review and I will try to post it either tonight or by early morning. Cheers!
P.S Read the chapter before this, so you get where the story is at currently
