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For my Fili fans, worry not his mental Torture is coming^^.

~Chapter 6: If only to redeem my self, in your eyes~

Thorin was led by the Goblins until they reached a level of Goblin town he had not been before. It was almost a circular cave within the tunnels, it was bigger than most of the dwarf's homes back in the blue mountains with all kinds of Goblin built devices.

Thorin's heart sped up as he saw Kili no more than 75 feet from him. His nephew was staring at a Goblin like he wanted to cut its throat. He looked more angry then scared right now, the thoughts of his brother being beaten still clear in his mind, Thorin guessed.

Thorin could see that the brunets left eye was black and his lower right lip busted, he must have tried to fight himself free but with no success. Kili's coat had been taken from him and thrown on the floor with the rest of his upper body's protection. All that remained now was a dark blue wool shirt, pants and boots. His hands were bonded together and pulled above his head attached to a rope to keep his movements limited.

Thorin scanned the room trying to find a ray of hope somewhere or to at least know what was going to happen so he could prepare against it. Thorin felt his chains jerked backwards, the cold metal digging into his wrists.

Goblins all around them him. The chains that were connected to his wrist cuffs hooked to the wall behind him so he couldn't try anything while they were detracted. Thorin was still looking for a way out when he heard a horrible voice;

"Well well well. It looks like its time to start the lonely kings punishment for carrying that horrid thing" The Goblin king taunted, as he walked in grinning at Thorin.

Thorin shot him a glare

"Let the boy go. He does you no good" he spoke in his thick noble accent.

The king laughed, "Of course he does! He brings me pleasure and the look that will be on your face before its over, well I bet it will be worth more than all the gold in Erebor" the Goblin king laughed a little too happily, walking over to his chair sitting.

"No, no, no, that will not due!" he said, as he looked over Kili and then to his Goblins. "Remove his shirt and bind his hands to the poles on either side. We do not want him to have too much wiggle room." he grinned, adding "And they hurt better when the arms are spread out."

Thorin felt sick, his heart racing as he realized the chances of getting Kili out of this was smaller than him defeating smaug alone with no more then a sling shot. The guilt started to rush over the king like a thick syrup.

The Goblins obeyed their master without a second thought, random Goblins walked over taking the bonds off the young prince about to change his hands from being bonded above his head to each side. Kili took that as a cue and recklessly took his hands together hitting one Goblin as hard as he could with both hands, then he kneed another. He started trying to fight his way out but it was a futile attempt. The Goblins rushed Kili, fighting back relentlessly. Thorin could no longer see his nephew through the dozens of Goblins.

"Leave him be! He is just a boy!" Thorin bellowed, as the voice in the back of his mind scolded him for the thousandth time, reminding him that he should of never brought the boys along.

Reminding him of how he might lose both of them here, his mind trailing back to Fili's motionless body for only a moment before his youngest rushed back to his top priority, Fili's beating had passed but Kili's torture was only moments away. The Goblin king laughed at his words but called.

"Enough boys! If you kill him how am I suppose to have my fun?" he then glanced around, "Where is the golden haired one? Did I not say bring him too?" he asked, as if he could sense Thorin's thoughts of Fili. A Goblin stepped forward,

"The light one put up a fight when he tried to take the dark one...we beat it bad...I think it was dead when we left sir" it sniveled, as it watched its master. The other Goblins stopped at their masters command stepping back from the youngest dwarf.

"Well, that is a shame, I had planned to split my toys between them, I guess this one will have to test all of them out...I hope he lasts long enough" the king said nonchalantly.

Thorin stretched to try to see his nephew past the Goblin, as he cursed under his breath, he felt like his rib cage was being crushed with worry. The Goblin king smirked at Thorin's attempt.

"Move aside boys, you are blocking our guests view of tonight's entertainment."

Thorin's heart sank as he saw his nephew laying on his side with his knees pulled to his chest and his hands rapped around his head, elbows and forearms protecting his face.

Kili slowly moved his arms enough that he could look out past his knees and elbows, his eyes meeting Thorin's for only a second then he looked away. Thorin couldn't place the look on Kili's face, it was not pain or fear but something else... a look he had not seen in years and now it nagged at him to remember. His stone heart broke knowing what could come next. The Goblin king then spoke again as if on cue,

"Now boys, bind him appropriately and send for Nazal" The goblin grinned as the goblins forced Kili to his feet.

"No need." Thorin heard a raspier voice from the shadows of the tunnels. He searched until his eyes rested on a figure coming out of the darkness. Thorin could not make out what it was, it was tall, tall as a man and it even had a decent amount of hair.

It had a strong body, a fully developed torso and legs, its arms were also strong but long like a Goblin, its feet also of a goblin, its face narrow and its ears pointed

"There you are Nazal." The goblin king grinned, "Just in time. We would like you to do the honors." the Goblin chuckled in delight, then looking to Thorin, "This is Nazal, his father a Goblin, his mother a woman. Normally we would kill one like him but he seemed special." the king smirked, adding in, "His body strength is incredible I must say" he said, keeping his eyes on Thorin

"Do you ever stop talking?" Thorin hissed as he watched the monster walk over to Kili looking him in the face.

The creature then reached up, brushing Kili's hair back with its right hand.

"This one looks different than other dwarf..." Nazal said, as he studied Kili's features. Thorin's heart jumped, not knowing why this beast would take interest in in Kili outside of just causing him pain, he immediately felt like vomiting wondering what was to come.

"I thought the same my boy! We think he may be mixed like you." the king taunted, trying to get to Thorin every way he could.

Kili then spit in the creatures face. Nazal glared with controlled hostility, as it wiped the spit off with its arm, but instead of striking him, it walked over to a table that was not kept far from Kili and picked up a whip looking back to the Goblin King.

"Have I taught you nothing you fool!" The King barked at the creature. It dropped the regular whip at his words and picked up another, this one had five tails on the end of the whip, each with a bone shard in the end. Nazal then looked to the king once more questionably.

"That's better, I want to hear his screams loud and clear." the king Answered.

"Stop it! Do not do this!" Thorin barked, jerking against his chains to no prevail, the cold metal assaulting his bare wrists but it didn't stop him from trying.

The Goblin king was enjoying this more then he thought he could. He then spoke,

"The great Thorin Oak N' shield, begging a lonely Goblin king...How tasty" he grinned, He then heard Kili.

"You speak as if I am not here scum!" the young dwarf spat at the Goblin King "I will never scream for you!" the youth barked, fighting against his restraints, adding in "You are the lowest of low, resulting to pathetic torture attempts because you are not man enough to fight with a sword!"

The Goblin king rolled his eyes.

"Keep telling your self that Durin" The Goblin laughed, before adding "Bind his legs as well, he is moving around too much."

Kili fought against it, but the Goblins roughly spread his legs apart, binding each to a pole on the opposite side of the youth so that his legs were slightly spread. His feet still touched the ground but only had 12 inches to move in any direction before the chains stopped him.

Thorin was unable to watch any further, he dropped his gaze to the ground, the last thing he saw was the mix breed pulling its arm back. He couldn't watch Kili take the strike.

The King then barked "Begin!"

And with that, Thorin couldn't help but look up at Kili, his worry taking over his control.

The little voice in the back of his mind reminded him that this was all his fault, reminded him that this was his punishment for bringing two young dwarf's on this Journey, for bringing his sisters son's on such a dangerous venture.

He looked up just in time to see the whip hit its mark and Kili's body lurched forward but the bindings held it from moving far. The prince threw his head back with what looked like a deep intake of breath but he kept his jaw clinched obviously trying to keep his word not to scream.

"Again!" the king barked, then added "And again and again until I can bath in his screams!" he barked, an evil spark in his eye.

Another strike hit Kili before he recovered from the last and he lurched forward his time his head moving downward, closing his eyes tight, biting down on his teeth it was all too easily seen from where Thorin stood chained. Thorin shook his head looking down to the ground.

...Mahal...What have I done?...Not Kili...Not like this...

Kili glanced to Thorin, seeing him looking away and he felt his heart drop.

I have shamed him...I should have done better at hiding the effect...I can't let him down... The young dwarf thought, as he heard the crack of the whip only a split second before he felt the lashes of the whip violate his skin. It caused him to gasp for air then hold his breath as he bit down on his teeth, holding in every noise that his body wanted to make. Everything in him wanted to scream out but he couldn't shame Thorin like that. He couldn't let his uncle down again.

After each hit he would look to Thorin in hopes that he handled that assault right, but Thorin never returned the glance, always looking away. Kili started to question if it was too late for him to redeem himself in Thorin's eyes, the words from campsite echoing in his min,

'We didn't mean anything by it.' he recalled saying, only to hear Thorin's disproving tone in return.

'No, you didn't. You know nothing of the world!'

The words had stuck with the prince. He wished he could be more like Fili, he wished he could make Thorin proud and disappoint him less, he thought this may be his chance if he could withstand the goblin's torture with dignity. After the 4th strike the whip started hitting already open wounds as well as his intact skin, with the 4th hit, he let out a whimper and Goblin king took it as a sign and grinned evilly

"Nazal...pick up the pace I don't have all day."

Kili's stomach was knotting in worry as to how he could handle faster strikes. He could not see Nazal, so he tried to mentally prepare the best he could, though his back was in more pain then he had ever felt before and he felt a warm wetness on the stinging warmth. Kili, hanging from his binding looked across the room at his uncle.

His uncle's icy blue eyes were staring back this time. He wished he could know what it was that his uncle was thinking, he desperately needed to know that he did not shame his uncle but he didn't know how to tell if he had or not as things were.

He started to mouth 'I'm sorry.' but before he could a set of lashes hit and he bit down in surprise gritting his teeth. Before he could recollect himself the next ones hit and he was unable keep his mental wall that he had been using. this time a deep pain rushed his body with a deep fear that he didn't completely understand, then another hit came, the lashes alone enough to make a man scream but as the bone shards dug into his skin then ripped out again he was unable to hold it in anymore. Kili screamed as loud as his lungs would allow him to, as he threw his head back, letting tears rushed his cheeks.

As the lash hit the princes back he let out a heart breaking scream, it was young, innocent and full of pain...every bit of it crushed Thorin from the inside. He looked up just in time to see Kili's tears streaming down his cheek. The dwarf king could only see one side but he was sure the other matched. Thorin dropped his head, refusing to see Kili done this way, he was swearing his revenge when he heard the screams break out again and this time they sounded even more pain ridden then the last and louder.

The Goblin King laughed.

"What is wrong Thorin? Don't like seeing your kin hurt? Don't like seeing your kin killed? This is what you get for carrying such a blade. Watch your people suffer at the hands of Goblins, as mine have suffered at the hands of dwarfs! At the tip of that sword!" The King did not give Thorin time to comment "Release the young dwarf!" he yelled, as he stood stomping over to Nazal, "Give me that!" he said, taking the whip roughly from the mix breeds hands.

The moment Kili was let free he fell to the ground, his body shivering

"D...don't.." he tried to ask, seeing the Goblin king not far from him.

The Kings arm drew back ready to strike. Kili tried to stand but just when he started getting to his feet the whip came down hard across the small of his back and one hit his rump. Kili let out a ear piercing scream as he fell back to the floor, trying to scoot away at the very least.

"Stand up boy!" the Goblin King barked

"For Mahal's sake! Release the boy! Give me what you have in store for him! He knows nothing of the world!" Thorin barked, trying to save his nephew from the future torture.

The Goblin looked to him with a glare that was colder then ice, "Oh, silly dwarf. I am only getting started on your young nephew here" He snarled, as a grin spread across his lips before he turned his attention back to Kili.

Okay that was the first chapter of Kili whomp! Please let me know what you think! Comments, suggestions, reviews=) Reviews are my fuel and feels are my inspiration!^^ I need to know if you felt and if I did it right so I know how to keep doing it right ;) thanks everyone!

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P.S Fun fact: This is the longest chapter in this fan fiction ^_~