So i got a review saying that this story sounded familiar
and yes it is based off second chances by stella808987
she stopped writing and while i was reading this i wanted to add more things into so it's the same storyline BUT it's my version of what happens
Anyway here's chapter 3
2 YEARS AND 6 MONTHS LATER
MIAMI
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We've been in Miami for almost three years but it still doesn't feel like home. We live in a small apartment and i have to share a room with my 6 year old sister Rose.
"GIRLS I HAVE SOME GOOD NEWS!" My dad yelled as he walked in the door.
"Well good afternoon to you to dad. What's up?" Tori asked Rose came running from her room and ran into my dad's arms and he picked her up and placed her on his hip.
"I've been promoted to Washington!"
"YAY!" Rose screamed.
"Dad i don't wanna go to Washington."
"Why not Tori?"
"I want to go back to mum and also all my friends are there as well. But i don't want to go without Rose."
"OK, you two can go back home to LA BUT, you must send me emails on how you two are doing. Understand."
"YES I LOVE YOU DAD!" Tori ran up to David and gave him a hug.
"Well your plane leaves toorrow so i suggest you start packing."
"Thanks Dad!"
"Anytime sweety."
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Tori and Rose arrived in LA around 4am and their grandparents cam and picked them up. They got back to their grandparents place around 6am.
"OK Tori, your room is upstairs to the right at the end and Rose yours is up the stairs to the left at the end. There's a lounge room and a bathroom as well. If you need us we are downstairs to the left." Explained Grandpa.
"OK, i'm going to go unpack Rose's stuff and then mine and sort out schools." Tori said and walked upstairs. She went into Roses room and saw it was decorated with lots of Hello Kitty, Rose's favourite thing. Tori unpacked all of Rose's clothes into the drawers and then left Rose to explore. Tori got to her room and walked in and it was beautiful. There was a queens size bed with lots of pillows on it with a white night stand next to it, She had a really big desk with a really comfy chair, a beautiful white dresser with a big mirror just above it with some flower drawings in the corners, and the best of it was there was a window seat that had a great view of the ocean and it was directly facing the house next doors window as well. Tori unpacked all of her things and walked down to the living room where Rose and her Grandparents were.
"Oh Tori do you ike your room?" Asked Grandpa.
"It's beautiful. I love it to bits."
"It used to be your mothers room when she lived here." Grandma stated.
"Anyway tonight we are going to the Oliver's place for dinner. We told them that you were coming to stay and that they wanted to meet you."
"That sounds great. What time?"
"Around 7pm."
"KK, I'll be in my room if you want me."
"OK sweety." Tori went upstairs and into her room and pulled out her laptop and went into the lounge room they had upstairs. She sat on the couch and decided to send an email to her dad. Tori must of fell asleep because the next thing she knew Rose was waking her up.
"Tori, Tori it's time to wake up it's 6pm and we're going in an hour."
"OK Rose, thanks for waking me up."
"Anytime. Can you help me choose something to wear?"
"Of course sweety." Tori and Rose went into Rose's room and Tori found a pink dress with straps with a black belt around her waist. She found Rose's black ballet flats and pulled her hair into two pigs tails with pink polka dot bows.
"There you go Rose you are ready to go."
"Thank you Tori!"
"Anytime, now can i get ready?"
"Can i help!?"
"Of course,come on we need to hurry!" Tori and Rose ran down to Tori's room. Tori found what she wanted to wear and put them on the bed. She put on a short red dress that had red lace covering it, they had three quarter sleeves and a thin black belt that went round the waist. She wore her black wedges that were about 2 inches high. She had her hair out and it was her natural hair. Tori could not believe that she need thousands of hair products to do her hair. She actually really like her hair the way it was, long with loose curls. By the time she finished fixing her hair, they were ready to go. As they were leaving Tori remembered that she needed to get her cell phone. So Grandpa gave her the house key while they went over. Tori got inside and climbed the stairs. when she was walking down the hallway, her heel broke.
"Crap." Tori mumbled and she took her shoes off and walked into her room to find her phone and also a pair of black flats. Once she got her shoes on she grabbed her purse that had her phone in it and headed downstairs. Once she locked the door to the house she walked to the Oliver's. She rang the door bell and a young women with light brown hair opened the door with a smile.
"Hello you must be Victoria!"
"Yeah sorry that i'm late i had to do somethings back at the house."
"Oh don't worry about it. My names Lisa Oliver."
"Nice to meet you."
"Oh please come in."
"Thank you." Lisa escorted Tori to where her grandparents were and also the rest of the Oliver's.
"Victoria this is my husband Mark, My daughter Maddy, and my son Beck."
"Wait are you Tori Vega?" Asked Beck.
"Are you Beckett Oliver?"
"I asked first."
"Well a gentlemen always introduces them self first." Tori said with a smirk. "Yes i'm Beckett, and you?"
"Yes i'm Tori."
"Do you two know each other?" Asked Lisa.
"We used to go to school together. She was miss popular who asked me out a few times and she hangs out with the queen of popularity." Beck stated.
"Hey i'm not one of them anymore."
"Really so why did you leave? Molly told everyone that you were a slut and she disowned you because you slept with the whole football team and she didn't want someone like that around her."
"BECKETT OLIVER THAT IS NOT HOW YOU TALK TO A GUEST NOW APOLOGIZE!"
"It's OK Mrs Oliver and he has the right to know. But i'm not saying it in the open."
"OK, My room it is." Beck and Tori climbed the stairs to his room and when they got there Tori could see her room from his window.
"Just to interrupt for a second, that's my room out the window." Tori stated.
"Noted. Now talk. Why did you leave?"
"You know that week when i barely showed up for school."
"Yeah, you came on Monday and Tuesday and then you disappeared."
"My mum died in a car accident, that's why. I was faced with two options, go into foster care and get separated from my sister or go to Miami and stay with my dad."
"I'm so sorry Tori. I thought that Molly..."
"Molly ditched me because i was a slut and "Apparently" slept with the foorball team and got pregnant."
"No Molly actually told the school that your mum died because of a drug overdose and that you had to move to Miami for protection."
"THAT'S A LIE!"
" I know i didn't believe her when she said that. Come on we better head down there or they'll think we're up to something."
"Yeah and what would we be doing?"
"You know, you've changed."
"Really how?"
"You're acting like a decent person not like a slut who wants to screw every cute guy in school."
"Really you thought that of me!"
"Yeah i did but now, it's like a new you that might be friends with me."
"Hahaha, i'll believe it when i see it." They both walked downstairs and into the dinning room where they had dinner. Just when they were all about to eat Tori's phone rang.
"Excuse me." Tori said as she stood up and went into the living room to take the call.
"Hello?"
"Hello is this Victoria Vega?"
"Yes speaking?"
"I'm Nathan, your mother's house is on fire! I've called the fire brigade but i thought i better call you to let you know."
"How bad is it?"
"Don't know."
"OK i'm on my way over now." Then Tori hung up and ran into the dinning room.
"Grandma is my car at your place?"
"Yes it's in the driveway."
"Where are the keys?"
"Um on the key hook next to the front door that says Tori's car keys, why?"
"Mum's house is on fire and i need to get over there now!"
"OK go. call us if there's anything we can do."
"I will. Rose i love you OK remember that."
"I will sis." Then Tori ran out of the oliver's place and went straight hers she opened the door got her keys and got into her car and drove. When she got there she could see the house in flames. She stood on the lawn and watched. Nathan came up to Tori and pulled her into a hug.
"I'm so sorry about your mother's house Tori."
"Same here. Do you hear that?"
"Hear what." In the flames you could hear a faint HELP! coming from the house.
"SOMEONES INSIDE THE HOUSE! Call my Grandparents and tell them to meet me here!"
"What are you going to do!?"
"Well save the damsel indestress and possibly my life as well." Tori said and ran to the urning house. Nathan diled her Grandma's but no-one picked up so she tried callin the Oliver's.
"Hello."
"HELLO THIS IS NATHAN AND I NEED TORI'S GRANDPARENTS DOWN TO HER MOTHERS HOUSE NOW!"
"Why? What happened! Hold on i'll put you on speaker." Lisa said and went back inot the dinning room and put it on speaker.
"OK tell us what happened young man." Said Lisa.
"TORI'S GONE INTO THE BURNING HOUSE TO RESCUE SOMEONE FROM INSIDE AND THE FIRE BRIDGADE HASN'T ARRIVED AND SHE NEEDS HELP!"
"OK, Beck, Mr and Mrs Jones and Mark get down there and help!" Ordered Lisa. They all ran outside and into their cars. They reached the house and saw that the whole thing was up in flames. "TORI!" Screemed Mrs Jones and started crying. Mr Jones pulled her in for a hug while Beck and Mark went to meet with Nathan.
"Yo man, where's Tori?" Asked Mark.
"She's still in there!"
"That's not good." Then the fire department finally arrived and got to work. The flame was to intense for them to go inside to rescue Tori. Then an explosion took place and the house collapsed. Everyone's faces dropped as they saw this and knew that Tori wasn't with us anymore. Then the impossible happened. They saw someone limping with someone holding the other one in the arms. Beck recognized that it was Tori and Mark and Beck ran to her. Mark took the girl from Tori and Beck picked Tori up just in time before her legs gave way. As Beck carried Tori she was coffing her lungs up from all the smoke she inhaled. When they got to safety Tori's grandparents greeted them both and hugged Beck and Tori. The old fold decided to go back home. Mark Drove Tori's car back and the grandparents drove their back as well. Tori needed to be checked out and Beck volunteered to look after her. Beck still had Tori in his arms and he wasn't letting her go.
"You OK Tori?" Beck asked.
"Yeah my lungs burn though."
"You're an idiot for going in there."
"Yeah but i saved a life didn't i?"
"That's true. You had me worried there."
"Really, why would you care about me?"
"Because you're different from three years ago. The old Tori wouldn't save someone else without ruinning their outift."
"Well let's just say i got a does of reality three years ago."
"Come on lets get you check out." Beck then walked over to the ambbulence that arried and check Tori over. She had a few burns that would heal in about a week, a cut to her head and some smoke in her lungs. She was on bed rest for about two days. Beck then went to his car and drove home. When they got there his parents and Tori's granparents were waiting for them.
"She's on bed rest for two days, she can get up for a couple of hours but her limit is four. She has some burns that will heal in a week and a cut to the back of her head. Other than that she's good." Beck explained.
"Beck can you tak her to her room please, i can't carry her up the stairs." Tori's Grandpa explained.
"Of course." Beck said and started walking up the stairs the her house. When he got to the top her asked Tori where her room was, and she pointed to the right. So he carried her over and unlocked the door and walked into her room and layed her on her bed.
"Thanks Beck."
"No problem. Night Tori."
"Night." Then Beck left Tori' room and went back to his.
So thats chapter 3
chapter 4 should be up soonish
but in the mean time please review
Valkyrie