Chapter 4
Naruto: The Demon Jinchuuriki
So update. i combinded chapter 1 and 2 thats why this is chapter 4 instead of 5. I also changed the beginning a bit. Itachi is that same age as canon again. At first i got a review by thor94 who said who would let a six year old adopt a kid. Well in the first chapter I put that Itachi was 16 but I changed that Itachi was 6 at that time again but Naruto got adopted by Mikoto and Fugaku that's the new beginnig. Ohh thank you too for the review kamui5 These will be getting longer and I will try to make the charaters act like they would in canon.
Sorry for that long rant thing. I don't own Naruto. I hope you enjoy.
Uchiha Manor (6 months before graduation to the next class level)
"Itachi-nee teach me and Naruto some more" Sasuke said with Naruto in the background going "yeah yeah". "Fine i'll teach you guys how to swing a sword properly" Itachi said. "Woo Sasuke that means, we'll get real swords" Naruto said missing Itachi's smirk.
Outside
"This sucks" Naruto said holding a wooden sword. "If it sucks go inside and don't learn" Itachi said. "Fine Let's do this" Naruto said with confidence. Sasuke smirked at Naruto confidence and look at Itachi. Itachi seeing both of them ready started telling them how to hold and swing the swords. "Aww isn't that adorable" Mikoto said. "What?" Fugaku asked. "Ahh nothing, Naruto reminds me of his mother loving ramen and swords" Mikoto said. "Yeah i wonder if he's even Minato's kid besides when Naruto get serious, and his spreading of confidence" Fugaku said. "Are you talking about that time Naruto beat up that wild dog for biting Sasuke" Mikoto said. "Yeah, That time" Fugaku said thinking back.
Flashback (A month after the start of the academy)
"Sasuke I bet I could get home faster than you" Naruto said as they(Naruto,Sasuke, Fagaku, And Mikoto) walked home. "In your dreams" Sasuke said. They both got in line waited and that mystical leaf that always comes out of nowhere floated down and hit the ground the both ran off. Sasuke was getting the lead. Sasuke turned a corner before Naruto. Naruto was a few feet behind but speed up when he heard Sasuke grunt in pain. Mikoto and Fagaku Ran to catch up (Taking a few second to catch up) they saw Naruto without that smile he always seemed to have with his white chakra circling him. They then saw Sasuke on the floor looking at Naruto, they also saw that Sasuke was bitten. Then they saw Naruto's foe, a big dog about the size of Naruto. As Mikoto was about to do something Fugaku put up his arm. "Wait" He said. As Mikoto was about to say something Naruto Roared at the dog with the dog growling back. Naruto's chakra seemed to turn black for a second as the dog ran away. "Naruto, Sasuke" Mikoto said running up to them worried.
Present
"Ahh yes the dog issue, I remeber it was a Inuzuka dog, that got a punishment for hurting Sasuke" Fugaku said. "Yeah I guess Naruto can be serious too, but what was with his chakra turning black" Mikoto replied. "I don't know, but he really is an interesting boy" Fugaku said looking at Naruto with a smirk. "You look like you did when Minato came to talk about jutsu with you, in fact Naruto and Sasuke act a lot like you two it's like a mirror image" Mikoto said. "No they look more like you and Kushina" Fugaku said. Mikoto rolled her eyes.
Outside
"Hey Sasuke" Naruto said. "Yeah Naruto" Sasuke replied. "How about a duel" Naruto said. "That sounds great Naruto, you were going to get my premission right?" Itachi asked. "Of course but I need Sasuke so say he was going to fight there would have been no point to get your premission, if he said no right?" Naruto asked trying not to get in trouble. "Fine Sasuke will you" Itachi said. "To show that I'm better than Naruto sure" Sasuke said getting in position. "Before you two start put these on, is what I would say but you two cant break bones yet so stretch first" Itachi said before getting Mikoto and Fugaku. " This will be fun to watch" Fugaku said. "Yep" Mikoto said. "Ok get ready, first to give up loses, or i'll decide who wins" Itachi said as they got in position. "GO" Itachi said jumping back watching with Mikoto and Fugaku.
The boy circled each other, when Naruto rushed in holding his sword up. Right when Naruto got to Sasuke he jumped and swung down but Sasuke put his wooden blade up to block. Naruto landed and they were face to face smirking. They both jumped back at the same time. "i'm going to win just give up Naruto" Sasuke said. "Yeah right" Naruto said rushing in for a side swipe. As Naruto's blade approached Sasuke's side, Sasuke blocked and step back to make Naruto stumble. Sasuke thrust-ed his blade into Naruto's belly as Naruto took the time that Sasuke took to get into trusting position to hit Sasuke in his arm.
As they both step back Naruto holding his belly, and Sasuke his arm. They glared and got back into position. "I'll win/I won't lose" They shouted at the same time rushing each other. Sasuke going in for a shot at Naruto's arm that was holding his sword as Naruto aimed at Sasuke's leg looking to slow him down. They both connected, as they both backed up trying not to cry in pain( Their kids they don't have a high pain tolerance) "you guys want to stop" Itachi said concerned. "NO" They both screamed. "I'll win no matter what" Naruto said. "yea right" Sasuke said running at Naruto bringing up his blade for a head strike as Naruto did the same. They both screamed at the hit each other in the head knocking each other out.
Next chapter will be important instead of these chapter showing Naruto's growth.
Thanks for reading. RedTail signing out