Will of a Demon

by Geekshic

Shirayuki is Zen's bride to be and that means more then just having a happy ever-after, its facing possible new dangers and even more nefarious plots to usurp power. An idea to assign a secondary bodyguard to protect the lovely redhead was just the idea to turn the tide of her becoming a target, but what happens when that bodyguard has a target on their back. Rate M for later chp

12. Chapter 12

I hate random author notes in fanfiction, but I must know; since I've been considering a revision on this story what could improve it?

Is the pacing too rushed or are the webs too tangled, I love these characters including my OC.

So honest comments are welcomed even if they are harsh, I want this story to be an enjoyable read and I would love to receive ideas or criticism so i can continue to improve my storytelling.

I also welcome inboxing me so please let me know, i have the next chapter planned but a part of me feels like I could make this story better