Elsa pov
I waited outside Eider's door for hours while the doctors worked on him. Darkness soon fell upon the castle and I couldn't even think about sleep. A bandage was tightly woven around the right side of my head. I picked at it.
"Elsa do you need anything?" Anna asked before going to bed.
"No I'm fine." I grunted. Anna sat down next me and hugged me tightly.
"He's going to be fine." Anna said hopefully.
"How's Kristoff?" I said changing the subject.
"Got a few cuts and bruises but other than that he's fine. Did Victor really die?" Anna asked. I nodded slowly.
"Marshmallow sacrificed himself to protect me, he called me Mama." I said sadly. Anna put her hand up to her mouth stifling a sob.
"I knew someone would someday." Anna cried shedding a few tears.
"How's Caleb?" I said changing the subject yet again.
"Well his hands are tightly bandaged from hitting Kristoff, he's got a pretty bad concussion and he's got a few cuts and bruises on his face." Anna said angrily.
"I know he punched Kristoff and tried to kill him but he protected me and Eider and stood up to his own Father. He practically stood up to everything he believed in." I explained. Anna nodded.
"Well when you put it that way." Anna said.
"Good night Anna." I said turning from her. She sighed heavily and walked into her room.
Anna pov
Is she shutting me out again?
Is she slamming the door?
She knows she doesn't have to keep her distance anymore. I walked to my room biting my lip.
For the first time in forever I finally understand, for the first time in forever we can fix this hand in hand. We can talk about this together, she doesn't have to live in fear because for the first time in forever I will be right here. Doesn't she understand that?
Kristoff was laying in our bed looking at the cuts on his hands. When he saw me he moved out of the bed and grabbed his pillow and blanket making his cozy bed on the floor, like he has been ever since I had gotten noticeably pregnant.
"Kristoff, please sleep with me. I really need your comfort right now." I cried wiping my face.
"I don't want to crush you." He said sadly, I walked over and grabbed his shirt making him look at me.
"You just got in a fight and you want to sleep on the floor, your pregnant wife is crying and you don't want to comfort her?" I questioned.
"I do!" Kristoff said.
"Then please be my husband and do it." I begged sadly. I got into bed, about to blow out our lantern when Kristoff threw his pillow on the bed. He slid in next to me, letting out a sigh of appreciation.
"I forgot how much I love beds." He sighed snuggling up in the covers. I smiled and snuggled up close to him, he kissed my forehead and I turned to blow out the lantern. I finally had my husband back and I didn't think he's going anywhere soon. I smiled before drifting off to sleep.
Elsa pov
The doctors finally came out of Eider's room.
"Queen Elsa?" One said removing his gloves.
"Yes?" I said looking up hopefully.
"Prince Eider's going to be fine, he has a lot of stitches and is in a lot of pain. He'll be on bed rest for the next month. He's conscious currently and he asked for you." The doctor said taking his team of 4 and heading to their chambers for the night. I rushed into the room, in the light of the full moon I could see that he was shirtless, his body glittered with sweat. He had a bunch if white cloth and bandages wrapping around his body from his left shoulder to his right hip. His breathing was painful, I could tell. I walked over and leaned on the right side of the bed.
"Hi Elsa." Said Eider's raspy voice.
"Hello Eider." I said whipping tears away.
"No, no don't be sad. Don't be sad that doctor says... I'll be ok." He said struggling. I leaned down by his face, for the first time I saw his hair down in the front, caked with sweat. I ran my hand through it not caring. His hand brushed my face then opened up the drawer on the night stand and reached for something inside. He pulled out a little box. "Elsa I love you, I was going to do this whether or not this had happened. I was going take you out tonight and go dancing. All of that jazz." He coughed clearing his throat. "But I realize that I don't need a perfect night it asked the perfect girl this question." He opens that little black box that held a 1 carrot diamond ring with blue crystal surrounding the diamond and the band. I gasped. "Will you marry me Elsa?" He asked politely. I sobbed into my hand looking at the gorgeous ring and the sweet and generous look on Eider's face.
"Yes, of course, yes." I whispered my voice shaky. I held out my left hand and he slipped the ring on. I looked at it more closely and smiled before softly hugging Eider. He grunted from the pain. "Sorry!" I exclaimed releasing him and drying my tears. He kissed me passionately.
"Come here." He nodded to the empty space in the bed next to him, I went around the other side and got in. "I love you." He whispered kissing the top of my head.
"I love you too." I said before slipping into a deep sleep.
OMG get the tissues and a carton of ice cream! *blows nose obnoxiously*
It's all working out... or is it!? don't worry guys it's all good.
One guest commented a question for me.
What's your favorite color?
Whoa you stepped over the line. (Catching Fire Quote) Jk it's blue. Doesn't really matter what blue but I do prefer a lighter one.
I would like some more questions!
You guys I got this comment that was telling me that my story has really gone downhill and that the plot is really boring. Also that I have gone down in effort for this story and that I need to spice it up and add a few surprises here and there... They also said Eider's "Too perfect"
Add a few surprises here and there...I killed King Victor, I almost killed Eider, Anna's pregnant, and Elsa's engaged... UGH I can't even PM this person to ask them what they would suggest because it's not open. Is my story really this boring? :/
What could I do to spice this story up? Please comment or PM me your suggestions. It does get a little slow after this chapter so I want to speed it up but idk what you guys would like.
New threat, New Trade Partner, Hans comes back (No, NO and more NO), less fluff, more fluff, no fluff, find out what Olaf's up to, Magic spells, a witch? The baby dies? (God NO) WHAT DO YOU WANT? ( The Notebook quote) *Makes intense hand gestures, while yelling*
Please, what do you guys want!? *Whimpers sadly with bottom lip stuck out*
-Mackenzie (PS, Eider's not perfect he has issues that I will talk about later! Real serious issues)
humph *Crosses arms, sits on floor with a mad face*
