Ch.2
Nancy
"Want me to paint your nails, Nan?" Bess asked me, holding a shiny pink bottle ready to paint. My friends, Bess Marvin and George Fayne, and I were hanging out in my room, chillin'.
George was sprawled on my bed, busy with her new tablet. I was just lying on the floor, bored. I get bored when I don't have a mystery.
"Nancy! Earth to Nan?"
"Hm?" I realized I haven't answered Bess's question. I stare into space a lot. "Want me to paint your nails?" she repeated.
"Um, no thank you." I'm not into this stuff.
"C'mon, just a little?" Pleaded Bess.
"Bess, she doesn't want, let her be!" George said, annoyed by her cousin.
Bess was about to answer back when she was interrupted by the door opening.
"Dad!" I said.
He had a huge grin on his face.
"What's up?"
"I have a surprise for you, girls"
"Oh what is it? What is it?" I asked excitedly.
He pulled out three tickets. "Free passes to New York City, they came in the mail" He handed them to me. "What do you girls think?"
"Yes!" I squealed. George said, "Thanks, Mr. Drew" and Bess nodded.
"Thank you very much, Dad!" I said giving him a big hug and a kiss on his cheek.
"No problem, go there and have fun"
Once my dad left the room, I turned to my friends and squealed, "Can't you guys believe it?! In a few days, we'll be in New York!"
"Yes!" they said in unison. We high-five each other.
Finally, something to do in spring break!
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