Hey guys, just wanted to give ya'll a quick update about the story. I've been looking back at my previous two chapters, and I can't help but cringe at how unfortiveably short they are. So I'm going to give the entire thing a brand spaking new coat of paint. In between classes I've been working on the revised first chapter, as it stands it has about four hundred more words than the first chapter up now. There's also a little more build up, if you're into that sort of thing.
Longer chapters means that the time inbetween updates is going to be even longer, not to mention that I am in college and have a pretty heafty workload. I am dedicated to the project, and it will get done, I promise. I should have the revised first chapter up by this weekend, so I hope you all enjoy that while I try to juggle working on chapters and keeping my grades up.